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This has been a great adventure! I agree with Petey, the end seemed a little rushed. But I enjoyed the journey and the HEA. Thomas in the witness protection program might be an interesting story, but he'll have to suffer some remorse and have a change of heart if he's going to become a character I care for. Very well written. Thanks. Jeff
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Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 White Water Rafting
Bravo Craig! And bravo Gary! Whew! What a rollercoaster! But I worry that Carly gave in almost too quickly. I hope she won't be back with more trouble. -
And the gloves are off! Carly is devious, but Craig is a man on a mission. I don't think I can keep my promise to myself to read one chapter a day to make it last. I feel a binge coming on. Thanks Gary. This is a good one. Jeff
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Finally, a glimmer of hope that this mostly sexual, non-relationship will turn into something more positive. As several people have commented before, it's time for Marty and Hrishi to look past their cardboard cut-out image of each other. And what's with Christina's comment to Marty about following his own advice? Does she know something or just suspect? Thanks. Jeff
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Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 43 Coming to Grips
Missed chapter 42 so today was a twofer. I am excited for how things are progressing. Even the doubts and reluctance by Vega seem spot on. I can't seem to stop saying how much I'm enjoying this story! I really like how you've put your own spin on the shifter genre. You've added some clever ideas. Thank you. Jeff -
What can you say about horny boys? I know Hrishi says they shouldn't talk. Maybe he's right, but can I hope they'll have a civil conversation and sort their differences? I guess the biggest issue is Marty coming to terms with his sexuality. Thanks for this intriguing story.
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Chapter 2 Flood Warnings
JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Flood Warnings
I'm not certain who I feel more sorry for, Craig or Jared. You've created some believable characters that I care about already. I can't imagine anger at Carly's level, but I think you commented on an earlier review she is based on a real person. Really? I hope before the story is over she can get herself sorted a little. But the once a bitch always a bitch. As I said last review: glad I came across this story. Thanks Gary. -
Another good chapter Mac. I especially liked the sunrise description and Ben's and Travis' reaction to it and each other. I'm still holding out for them to end up together. This looks like a step closer to me. Thanks. Jeff
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I am reading "Dissonance" by Macgreg. In his review of chapter 16, Timothy M referenced this story and I thought I'd check it out. I'm glad I did! This promises to be a good read! I am anxious to read more!
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Who would be upset? Couples disagree, have misunderstandings, and sometimes fight. Gay or straight it's part of being human. Sometimes in literature the misunderstandings and not talking it out seem to happen more, but conflict is part of life and makes stories more realistic. And besides making up can be so much fun! I loved Liam's speech at the end. Can't wait to see what the boys get up to next.
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More fun! So I'm wondering if Milton is going to be the dead body on this murder mystery.
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OMG Carlos! What an evil cliffhanger ending! So, is it the grandparents? Richie's parents? Or something I am not aware of. Anyway in spite of the cliffhanger it was a good chapter full of info. Thanks. Jeff
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I'd love to give Joel a hug. I love his sweet, tender side. And Lucas probably needs one too. Sometimes he gets so caught up in things he forgets he's really a pretty nice guy, too. Gotta love these guys! Thanks for a short that was sweet and thought provoking. Jeff
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I am glad Ryder decided to try Dr. Decker's group. It's a whole new group of potential friends, and maybe a romance. Plus these kids may help him sort through some of his issues. Seems like the story is headed in a slightly different direction. Still liking Ryder and company, and this story. Thanks. Jeff
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Oh that was dirty pool. A cryptic phone conversation with Alek that only raises more questions. And no new info on Nathan and what he's up to. I'm glad Marty is there. Hopefully he can help Liam sort things out. Write quickly! We need more
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I think I'm hooked already. Can't wait to see where things go from here. Good start! Jeff
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A mostly sad tale, and the perfect example of why it is so important to talk to each other in a relationship. Thanks for a good story. Jeff
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You response to my comment on the last chapter was right on. I am so happy Mitch and Tony are able to help Sasha like they are. It will be great to have Alik come to the states to be with his Dad. A warm fuzzy chapter with a little romance at the end. Very satisfying. Thanks. Jeff
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I've been reading "Clueless Camping" and just got caught up this evening. I was curious to remind myself what else you had written, so I went to your story list. I read this story awhile ago but never commented. Just wanted to tell you what a great short story! Just enough words to know the people and events. No unnecessary words. I agree with some of the comments; it could be expanded to be a longer story. However it is great the way it is! Thanks for this story. Jeff
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Family loyalty is everything
JeffreyL commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Family loyalty is everything
I know I started this story before, but I guess I lost track of it. Over the last few days I binged chapters one through nineteen. I have enjoyed getting reacquainted with Evan, Russell, and all their family. I doubt Father is really out of the picture yet, so no smooth sailing in the near future. Still too many unhappy relatives. I am anxious to read more. -
I saw this as a possibility in chapter 1. Wondering how TJ and Josh will get through this one. And isn't it time for Robert and TJ to be a little more understanding with each other? Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Interesting beginning. There's not much more that could have gone wrong in that little bit of time. TJ strikes me as a strong person. I'm anxious to see how he handles the move and a new school.
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Chapter 1 Patrick’s Personal Card
JeffreyL commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 1 Patrick’s Personal Card
I remember reading this story on another site. It seems to me it either stopped or I lost track of it. Either way I am delighted to find it here! I enjoyed Patrick and the other characters. This will be like catching up with old friends. Thanks for posting here. Jeff -
What a great moment between friends. A complete picture in just a few words. Thanks. Jeff
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