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    Chapter 24

    JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 24

    A beautiful wedding and some hot sex! Another great chapter. Gotta love these guys and their amazing relationship. Even more when you realize they are based on real people and events. Thank you. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 1

    You've piqued my interest with chapter one. Looking forward to another good story from you. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 2

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Thanks for the tip that this is the school Cole and Jared attended. It made me smile. And after you pointed it out, I did recognize it. "Don't Shout" is one of my favorite stories. Now, back to the matter at hand. Hrishi is a real Jekyl and Hyde. I am anxious to learn more about what makes him tick. And Marty seems pretty confident except when it comes to Hrishi. And sooner or later he needs to have a conversation with Leon. Looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff
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    Wow! Another really exciting chapter! And I'll hold out hope Kellar can help Logan. Thanks for more good stuff. Jeff
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    Alpha Challenge

    JeffreyL commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in Alpha Challenge

    Holy sh**!!! Loved Efrain going all alpha on the brothers. Loved the brothers showing love and support for Cory. Loved Uncle Johnny in spite of all the family history he revealed. Cory will have a lot to sort through. I am glad he has so much love and support. It makes me confident he will put everything in its place and get on with his life in the end. Gotta love his support group. Thanks. Jeff
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    Summer's End

    JeffreyL commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Summer's End

    Reading this was like catching up with an old friend you haven't seen for awhile. CJ and company are always fun to read about, and your writing is great! Thanks for bringing the guys back. Jeff
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    Arrival

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Arrival

    In my perception of things in Sasha-land, your closing sentence is something akin to looking out a window and seeing black storm clouds massing on the horizon. Must be a gathering of those proverbial monkey wrenches. What a sweet and gentle interlude for guys and pup. Hope it lasts a paragraph or two into the next chapter. Thanks. Jeff
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    Wonder

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Wonder

    As I said in an earlier comment, you write dog really well. You also write sex really well. Loved the hotel room scene and the puppy in the truck. It is so good to have Jian and Emmett at a place romantically where we were all hoping they would have been several chapters ago. I'm guessing the next monkey wrench will be Jian's family. I also want to apologize for a flippant comment I made after chapter 15 about Ink Boys. Judging by your response I offended or upset you and I am sorry. Jeff
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    Chapter 20

    JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 20

    It is great to see how they are trying to blend their lives and are both willing to bend to accomodate the other person. To my way of thinking these are traits that will be the foundation of a great marriage/partnership. Thanks for more good reading. Jeff
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    Hollow Chasm

    JeffreyL commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Hollow Chasm

    If Ben actually leaves tomorrow, will time apart from Travis help him sort out his feelings? I can't figure out which way this relationship is going, but I'm along for the ride until the end, for better or worse (to borrow a phrase). Thanks for more good writing: story, dialogue, and descriptive passages. Jeff
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    The Marionette

    JeffreyL commented on MacGreg's story chapter in The Marionette

    I hope Ben can sort himself out by the end of the story. The sex may sizzle, although I've never understood the need to be humiliated, but he doesn't seem to know how he feels. Interesting reaction from his sister. Looking forward to more. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Didn't get to read this until after Christmas, but I enjoyed it a lot. Appealing characters and a not so unusual set up (misinterpreting someone else's feelings) made for a good story. Aside from the possibility of freezing, snuggling in a refrigerator box could be fun! Thanks for the HEA and a good story. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What a great story. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A most interesting beginning. And I agree with hoho, your versatility in characters and settings is amazing. Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 11

    JeffreyL commented on KD_stories's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I am so happy for Ryder! It's great to see him catch a break in his social life And football. And I like the possibility of a boyfriend. Thanks. Jeff
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    A nice romantic (and sexy) interlude for Kellar and Tobyn, and they deserve it. I suppose it's time for problems and challenges to start when their travels begin. Thanks for more good writing Gary. Jeff
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    Sounds like your Christmas gathering was as wonderful as your stories. Thanks for sharing. Jeff
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    I cried at the end,so if happy tears was your goal you succeeded. Your Advent Calendar of stories was a brilliant idea. I will look forward to the one you all do next year. Sounds like a tradition starting to me. Thank you for this nice addition to the holiday season. Merry Christmas, a day late. Jeff
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    Epilogue

    JeffreyL commented on LillyLee's story chapter in Epilogue

    A most enjoyable story, and a very satisfactory ending. Maybe you'll want to revisit these characters in the future. I would enjoy reading more about Marc and Toni. Thanks. Jeff
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    A very satisfying chapter after their close call with Reznick. I'm glad Warren survived his meeting with Adelin. Being a smooth-talker should have its benefits. And I'm glad Elinor was able to take off her "mom hat" and realize our guys need to get back to looking for more mates. Thanks for more good stuff. Jeff
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    Chapter 11

    JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 11

    It's terrific how most of Mitch's family supported him. I liked what Tony said to Mitch's dad. A big hurdle jumped successfully, but there's bound to be more bumps in the road. This is a story on GA after all.
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    Chapter 1

    JeffreyL commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 1

    A nice message to your Christmas story. Too often we get busy with the things that don't matter as much. Thanks. Jeff
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    Tightly Wound

    JeffreyL commented on MacGreg's story chapter in Tightly Wound

    I vote for more long chapters. I think I like Travis even more. He still has too many secrets. And Ben just seems to get more at loose ends. Interesting the way Travis calls him on his b.s. Any reason to be concerned about sis and brother-in-law back at the ranch? More good stuff! Thanks. Jeff
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    Chapter 10

    JeffreyL commented on Bndmetl's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I am happy for Tracy. Life seems to be getting back on track for him. Should we be worried about Alex's parents?
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    Chapter 10

    JeffreyL commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Chapter 10

    It was great to see Mitch stand up to his dad and others in his family with Tony supporting him. I didn't expect it to happen quite like it did. He jumped right in feet first! Still really enjoying this story! Thanks. Jeff
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