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More Colton, Some Dave, and a Conflict
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Colton, Some Dave, and a Conflict
Glad someone finally told Patty off. She's one rude person.- 36 comments
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Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Inside the Korean Baths, and Ch-ch-ch-changes
Very interesting chapter. The boys learn not to violate their fathers’ privacy, and Dylan’s brother is coming for a visit. -
A truly enjoyable chapter as everyone gets away for a bit of holiday and has fun.
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Love Sparrowfart!
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A very satisfying chapter.
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Bryan should understand that Latinx knows no colors. Most of the people in Spain and Portugal are as white as can be; he would fit right in. He shouldn't be judging himself by his skin color. His classmates don't.
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The Decision, and the Trip
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Decision, and the Trip
Wow, just wow. Dylan's feelings about Jackson were so right on. Jackson and Zach are such scheming creeps, bordering on criminal. Let's hope they get their just rewards, and that Dylan meets a nice guy by the end of the story.- 30 comments
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Very enjoyable story, thanks!
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Very difficult chapter for both guys. Harry needs to recover his memory or he will not be able to work, much less live a normal life with his husband. Poor Stewart - keep the faith!
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Great story, thanks for writing it!
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More Normal, and the Holidays
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Normal, and the Holidays
Very nice resolution to the conflict between Roger and Beth, well done! -
If there is anyone reading this for whom the idea of male sex is new, I'll just say this: Putting a condom on your partner can be a pretty exciting part of foreplay. If he has any objections, that's when there can be a discussion. No surprises, no too-late situations.
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I can see Jason's point. Working security and then discovering that putting up with sexual advances ( whether from men or women) is a condition of employment can be a nonstarter.
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Good ending thanks
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Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Serious, and More New Problems
Zach and Jackson each say the other was violent. Each has some "proof". This ought to be interesting. But it is concerning that Jackson gets angry with Dominic when he doesn't understand something.- 25 comments
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Discussions and Decisions
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Discussions and Decisions
The Dallas dream was exactly what I thought. Why not make this chapter a Dallas Dream and end the story properly? You were almost there. -
I keep wondering about his illness (and now we hear there was an operation). Just curious.
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Truly an amazing chapter. The worst thing that can happen right now is for a character to wake up in the next chapter and it was all a dream.
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Such a great start to a story. I am looking forward to following this one. I wonder how Mr Noone pronounces his name? Is is like the time of day (noon) or like the two words "No One" or some other way?
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Greg got Brian’s memories in a very powerful way. It will be interesting to see what good he can bring from this situation.
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Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Law, Finances, Real Estate, and More Bonding
I was curious about Jackson's disfigurement until I saw his facebook portrait - wow the guy is hot. Even with the scars. Did you (author) do the art?- 21 comments
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Works that way with Humans as well.
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Deus ex machina ending.
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I'm really looking forward to the Wednesday meeting with the legal people. Especially if a certain piece of paper gets put forth and discussed.
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Why the Heck Does He Do That?
Carybr commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Why the Heck Does He Do That?
Yes, can't have Cory injured from falling for Roy.
