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Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
Carybr commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part Two. Chapter Eleven.
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I can just picture the fitters in the haberdashers saying “it will ride up with wear.”
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Everyone was afraid they would be rejected, so nice things worked out.
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Sweet story, thanks!
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Caleb really needs to get into therapy. I'm getting really tired of his "I'm a worthless person attitude."
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Light Shifters, hunky gay farriers, kidnapped boys, brooding werewolves; how many other breadcrumbs are we going to get to lead us to where we need to get to in this story?
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Thank goodness you are back. I was given another gay werewolf story to read and review and it was so awful .. I kept comparing it in my mind to your excellent work and thinking why can’t it be like this? But really - that’s some cliffhanger!
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Wow, I think a lot of people are on the mark with their comments. Things have come to a head and will only get better for Seth.
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Excellent Chapter, Bill.
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So far so good, but there might still be a kink in the road for these guys in the next chapter.
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So detailed and realistic, great story!
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The twists and turns in this chapter were fun. God bless Aunt Marie!
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Another very interesting chapter, Bill.
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Wow, I never wanted this one to end. But I guess the roommates are now lovers, the families are happy with the situation, and the first semester in college is over. what more can one want?
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Wow what a super chapter, and not at all what I expected would happen. Who goes on a date expecting to be bashed? Matt was stupid - how could be expect to get away with it? So good to see River and Gav get together - I could see R was crushing on G for the longest time. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
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I will post last words from CJ: “Oh well, not to get religious but ashes to ashes and dust to dust. With both Liz and Abo, I choose to recall the happy times. And to realize my life’s better because they were part of it.” (As Time Goes By, Chaper 5)
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Another wonderful chapter, thanks Bill!
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This was an awesome chapter! Can't wait to met Chad.
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This story just has not grabbed me like others by this author. I have skipped the last three chapter postings and it seems like I didn't miss anything. Maybe it's me. Analysing my reactions, it's Craig - can't stand the guy. Can't stand Stacy either but I have known women like her and I usually flea them (yes I have spelled it correctly F L E A). Poor Seth has to put up with both of them.
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STDs...all I can say is OUCH. And, he's lucky he picked up something that is treatable. More and more of them are becoming resistant to medicine.
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Another great chapter! It will be interesting to see what the training it like.
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Awesome chapter, and I totally sympathise with R's view of sports. Until you actually get to the field and see those men in uniforms with their tight...muscles fitted so fine under the cloth, you just have no interest. Wait until baseball season comes.
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I have never heard of Rally's/Checkers either; must be regional. But what a great start to an entertaining story. Looking forward to more chapters.
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I think I have read all of the stories you have posted online. This is the best yet. I really didn't see the end of the chapter coming, it was a surprise to me. I am interested in what happens next, will wait with anticipation for next week.
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