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Interesting that he inspirers everyone, I think that the apology went a long way, somehow something good will come up to help with funds for college
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Cadet Second Class • III
mikedup commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Cadet Second Class • III
Great chapter, the idiot tried and failed spectaculary in trying beat Rich but he is going to be far better going forward as a fly boy -
Great lunch awesome that nonna and pa gladly accepted hi. Into the fold, the family just got bigger
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Ok so I like the idea if you get angry enough or just want an out just opt out and go elsewhere, are we going to drop off the cliff or just port somewhere
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Crazy chapter, there is another angle so the so called government agents might just not be true , the birds are rather relentless, the battle lines are a bit blurred I have no idea anymore who and what is good and what is evil
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Interesting chapter, they tried to keep the distance, however it will crash sooner or later 4 months will feel like an eternity very soon I think
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Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
mikedup commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Big Brother with Ultimate Big Brother Powers
Great chapter, crazy worrying about getting custody of Aiden, but between the two of them they got it sorted out, WOW, imagine a weekend with just the two of them ,I hope to see fireworks fly between them, I don't think Aiden will ever understand the effort that both are putting on for him- 40 comments
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Wow a rather intense chapter, I think that James needs to get involved and I also think that granny will be of assistance
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Great chapter, so the family accepts them , mom will have to come terms quite rapidly, or grand parents will take over, great to learn how to make an oven to make bread
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Great chapter, an awesome evening had by everyone, I wonder if the tears are from happiness or something else
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Great chapter the families getting together is going to spell good things ahead
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So it was not just a chance encounter,it was by design ,it seems that they could be good together, they have hit it off really well , I don't think slowly is going to feature in this instance
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Okay ,so the "birds" are being very specific about who they are going after , I think that Casper needs to get to James, I think that they are better together than apart. He has a lot to deal with but it is learning process
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Interesting chapter, avoiding the new boy Brad, did not work out as he expected, almost like out of the frying pan into the fire, I reacon some drama ahead , let's hope that he keeps his head (the one above his shoulders) on and doesn't do something crazy
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Congratulations on reaching 21 , getting rip roaring drunk certainly does not help , Seamus is a godsend and Matt got seriously jealous when Seamus was talking to jay, he is I think slowly realising that he has real feelings for Seamus
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Great chapter, Scott had help when he needed it , being there at the right time , Ronnie is going to an asset going forward I think
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Well interesting chapter, granny is going to be the one to help James and boy is he going to need help, things are beginning to get slightly out of control, granny is not one to be messed with,
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Awesome chapter, I am glad that his mate is fine , he needs to reconcile with his wolf , it is sad that there is such conflict between them when they share a body., The fires seem to be gaining headway
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Great start to this New story, it will be interesting to read Scott's adventures
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Interesting, a rather brutal fight if only using magic, I wonder what father will do
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Interesting chapter, poor Tyler kept in the dark and fed bull s#it , I hope that he gets some serious answers ,the sooner the better
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Awesome chapter and a great end to such a wonderful story, all is well in paradise, I look forward to your next roller coaster ride
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Great chapter, I agree Seamus is definitely into Matt, I think that Matt will need a real awakening slap to see it, they are definitely getting more than comfortable with each other, I can't wait for the sparks
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Interesting very interesting, a new direction, a mage who can create, it could be handy to use to escape can you imagine instantly building a forest to keep people out , we are in for joy ride I think Casper will learn rapidly once he has the correct information and mental tools
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Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 8: Inquisitive Individual
Great entertaining chapter, Wagner is just a plain simple bully , but I think he will be taken down a few notches especially as when I think that he will have apologize to Vinnie, great rapid "road trip" save a fortune on airline tickets, alpha drego is a but of a dark horse he gave Information but there is something else at play with him , time will no doubt tell
