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  1. mikedup

    Chapter 2

    Awesome chapter, they work well together, it seems we are in for a really fun time through the holiday
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    Chapter 1

    Great chapter, an interesting story , it seems that it could be quite intense and fun
  3. Brilliant chapter, he certainly is a quick learner and his horizons are expanding rapidly,
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    Chapter 12

    Interesting, sad and time to move on. His father dug the trench and he must deal with the fallout
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    Chapter 6

    Congratulations 🎊👏🎉, all around, I hope that they have a great union together, awesome wedding and even better with everyone who counted was there
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    Chapter 11

    Awesome chapter, and an amazing surprise from his grandparents, now his life will be infinitely better, I am glad he forgave his mother better before she dies than after. his father still needs to see the light
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    An Apple a Day

    Crazy great chapter, a bit of normality for the moment it would seem, happy birthday to you,
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    Chapter 10

    Awesome chapter, it seems that the grandparents are more tolerant, and if you think that their generation was way more homomorphic than than the boys parents generation, just shows how things changed, so the really serious work and study starts
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    Chapter 9

    Wow I thought his parents were bad ,however they were even worse, the lowest form of life , I am glad his siblings were on his side , interesting times ahead, another awesome chapter
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    Chapter 8

    Awesome chapter , no they are truly joined at the hip , things can only get better, neither sets of parents deserve the boys attention
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    Chapter 7

    Great chapter, they certainly do their homework before doing Anything, wise young men, they are really in it for the long haul,
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    Chapter 6

    Awesome chapter, the grandparents are really very special people doing so much for their grandson , great times ahead
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    Chapter 5

    Excellent chapter, wow certainly great service, a really romantic chapter, and onto a really great wedding it would seem
  14. Crazy great chapter, I am glad that the town people a felted them without any problems,Mason seemed to really enjoy the trip in the shadows, Elaine seemed to be really ready for them
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    Chapter 5

    Awesome chapter, it was really an uplifting and inspiring chapter, hooray for the grandparents, much better than either sets of parents
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    Chapter 4

    Awesome chapter, so they finally they commit to each other, his father is plain and simple a biggotted a*hole,I hope he has a great big cosmic karma slap
  17. Awesome chapter, exciting times ahead,
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    Chapter 3

    Great chapter, so they did the final I expect that they did well , I hope that they find jobs
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    Chapter 2

    Interesting meeting and it seems that it is going to be a great start to a new friendship
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    Chapter 2

    Interesting, disturbing but good
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting chapter, it is amazing how parents treat their different children some seem to be more of a child than others it is definitely a case of being the black sheep in the family. Fend for yourself or sink
  22. mikedup

    Prologue

    Interesting start to this New story
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    Chapter 1

    Interesting, it would seem to be a basis for a good story
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    Chapter 12

    Awesome chapter, Sad thoughtfull and joyful, and a great end to get another awesome story. Thanks
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    Chapter 11

    A great chapter, getting the boat sailed back to Italy was smooth and uneventful, it as sad to hear of his father's passing on , I hope that his mom is going to be fine
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