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A great ending to this adventure. It was well worth the wait. Everyone but the Chelpee gained in this adventure I feel. Ronna and Chi have gained new allies and Chi learned that she can actively expand her borders of skwish instead of waiting on them to come at their own time. Much as the gang has learned along all their adventures. The Ardvoon also made some new allies and learned that just one way of thinking isn’t always the way to make progress. The team now has a hernacki of their own and I think that whole adventure will help Horace realize his strengths and boost his confidence in his skills. And the others learned more about storing and gathering skwish power that is sure to come in handy in some future adventure. Geron Thanks so much for sharing your artistic talents with us your faithful readers. Q

Hmm I get where Dean is coming from but still disappointed in his reaction… we know from previous chapters he doesn’t like his boss and is treated like crap there. You would have thought when Kris was trying to stop him that he would have at least listened or thought to himself that this could be his escape…. Well maybe when he cools down a bit like another commenter said his first emotion when Marcus said he was leaving was anger but settled pretty quickly.

Geron so glad you are feeling better and hopefully those ups and downs you mentioned become further and further apart. It was quite a nice surprise to find this chapter waiting when I logged in. Thank you. Q

Hmm I’m sure I’ve mentioned it in one of your tales before I usually don’t do sci-fi or shifter genre but you have a way and do it so well. I really enjoyed this thanks Q

Chapters 25 and 26 now appear on nifty. Added today at 1520.

Thank someone. Joey picked up that flash drive.

Gay Highschool Musical? Except no one’s been singing yet lol. This chapter just reminded me of that movie a bit just with the gay slant. I have to stay this story has really made me laugh. I have really enjoyed both chapters so far and look forward to future chapters. Love It.

I was gonna make a comment about it being interesting to see how Bailey reacted to Devon when they got together for the meal. I was thinking that could be a bad idea when Mac told Preston it was ok to bring Bailey. Then read your comment about the meal and how Bailey reacted and I was lost thinking I missed something somewhere lol

When did this happen as the thanksgiving meal hasn’t happened yet? The boys haven’t even left to go home at the end of this chapter?

Wow. The whole story so far has been awesome. But this chapter hmm I like others can’t even express my thoughts clearly so just wow wow. Loved it. Looking forward to many things in coming chapters Jamie’s discussion with his parents, The growth of the new relationship… and whatever else you want to give us. Thanks for this story @Jeff Burton

It’s the way it had to be I guess, but this is so not the way I wanted this to end. I was hoping he would get to see his children, but in a way since he was dying there wouldn’t have really been time to build anything if his children would have wanted so maybe it’s better this way.

Deja vu…. This is the feeling I get…. I also read many stories from a lot of different sites this one rings a bell but I won’t fully remember the story. Looking forward to more.

Hmm another thought…. We know Macs mother is some what of a controlling character I think it’s going to take devins mother to hel her along the way. We also know Devins mother doesn’t much care for her fellows abilities because it leaves her on the outside but now she will have Macs mom to keep her company sometimes.

Oh boy… This could be really bad…. But with the evil skin walker following them I figured this would be when the parents found out about their abilities. Really looking forward to the next chapter to see how the parents assimilate and react to the new information they have just received.

What can I say, A marvelous uplifting read. Charlie and the gang together again for another Christmas adventure and visiting the elf village of Twombly. And this time sharing it with family and friends which is what the season is all about. Folks if you haven’t yet read the whole Charlie Boone series do yourself a favor and take a look at all the great writings of @Geron Kees and be amazed at all the wonder and magic that awaits you at the author’s imagination. You will meet a wonderful group of people, aliens, energy beings and more that form a family not of blood but of the chosen type that is sure to entertain. Q