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If it’s only nothing but “you are a father, Matt.” Then why the heck are they still at the hospital. Matt could have just met them at their house for that news.

I went back and reread the first chapter of the first story some things came back from just that one chapter but I’m probably going to have to reread all 5 stories again because I do vaguely remember someone moving I. With them when they first moved to Thompsonville at least I think it was them and this series of stories…. Like I said memory is shot lol. The one good thing about my memory issue is I can usually reread a story and think it’s new to me LOL

Yeah I had to go back and read the first chapter of After We Danced…. And things started to come back… So now Julie is back from her sojourn and in the hospital apparently… I have my thoughts on that I’ll keep them to myself for now and see if my assumption is correct.

Hmm, not very nice of the parents to let Matt think there was something wrong with his father… Juile sounds familiar but it’s been too long and my memory not so great…

It’s always a bittersweet moment when a story I enjoy ends. I always am excited for the end to know how everything turns out but sadden that the journey is over. At least we will see glimpses of the people of thompsonville again in your other upcoming story/s.

No no no. I don’t want it to be over. Yes yes yes they won of course they would. A beautiful ending to this wonderful story. Q

Stupid stupid head strong Trillion. Let’s hope that by some act of some type of divine intervention they find their third some where between the guard shack and the confrontation with Zerath

I really think they need to go to mossmere the song said they would meet help along the way…

Well I’m sure we all knew something like this had to happen to pull Sev into thinking of defying his father. And of course the song Silas spoke of mentioning someone that was in their party with split loyalty… we all had to know that was talking of Sev right? Perhaps not maybe I’m reading something wrong in this but so far Sev seems to be the only one with a side mission that would be disloyal to the group… I am not even going to mention the other idea I have as to not give our great esteemed author any ideas. anyway @mastershakeme I am not sure if I have made a comment on any of your other stories or not but I have read a few Permanently Black and Blue, Arcum Nights, Kill the Messenger, Parasitic.Love Redux and Teach Me Bad… I really should have made comments before now though which sometimes I really slack on doing. But I really have enjoyed all the stories I have read that you have authored. So thanks for sharing your writing talents with all of us that read your works. I have to say Permanently Black and Blue and these two Arcum stories have/had me completely riveted and checking constantly for new chapters. I know you have faced some trials of your own through your writing journey and wanted to let you know how encouraged I have been with your will to struggle through those trials and continue to come back to your writing so again thanks for being so strong even at times it feels so hard to be you are an encouragement to me to fight my struggles as well. And again thanks for sharing your talents with us. Q

A great ending to this adventure. It was well worth the wait. Everyone but the Chelpee gained in this adventure I feel. Ronna and Chi have gained new allies and Chi learned that she can actively expand her borders of skwish instead of waiting on them to come at their own time. Much as the gang has learned along all their adventures. The Ardvoon also made some new allies and learned that just one way of thinking isn’t always the way to make progress. The team now has a hernacki of their own and I think that whole adventure will help Horace realize his strengths and boost his confidence in his skills. And the others learned more about storing and gathering skwish power that is sure to come in handy in some future adventure. Geron Thanks so much for sharing your artistic talents with us your faithful readers. Q

Hmm I get where Dean is coming from but still disappointed in his reaction… we know from previous chapters he doesn’t like his boss and is treated like crap there. You would have thought when Kris was trying to stop him that he would have at least listened or thought to himself that this could be his escape…. Well maybe when he cools down a bit like another commenter said his first emotion when Marcus said he was leaving was anger but settled pretty quickly.

Geron so glad you are feeling better and hopefully those ups and downs you mentioned become further and further apart. It was quite a nice surprise to find this chapter waiting when I logged in. Thank you. Q

Hmm I’m sure I’ve mentioned it in one of your tales before I usually don’t do sci-fi or shifter genre but you have a way and do it so well. I really enjoyed this thanks Q

Chapters 25 and 26 now appear on nifty. Added today at 1520.

Thank someone. Joey picked up that flash drive.

Gay Highschool Musical? Except no one’s been singing yet lol. This chapter just reminded me of that movie a bit just with the gay slant. I have to stay this story has really made me laugh. I have really enjoyed both chapters so far and look forward to future chapters. Love It.

I was gonna make a comment about it being interesting to see how Bailey reacted to Devon when they got together for the meal. I was thinking that could be a bad idea when Mac told Preston it was ok to bring Bailey. Then read your comment about the meal and how Bailey reacted and I was lost thinking I missed something somewhere lol

When did this happen as the thanksgiving meal hasn’t happened yet? The boys haven’t even left to go home at the end of this chapter?

Wow. The whole story so far has been awesome. But this chapter hmm I like others can’t even express my thoughts clearly so just wow wow. Loved it. Looking forward to many things in coming chapters Jamie’s discussion with his parents, The growth of the new relationship… and whatever else you want to give us. Thanks for this story @Jeff Burton

It’s the way it had to be I guess, but this is so not the way I wanted this to end. I was hoping he would get to see his children, but in a way since he was dying there wouldn’t have really been time to build anything if his children would have wanted so maybe it’s better this way.

Deja vu…. This is the feeling I get…. I also read many stories from a lot of different sites this one rings a bell but I won’t fully remember the story. Looking forward to more.

Hmm another thought…. We know Macs mother is some what of a controlling character I think it’s going to take devins mother to hel her along the way. We also know Devins mother doesn’t much care for her fellows abilities because it leaves her on the outside but now she will have Macs mom to keep her company sometimes.

Oh boy… This could be really bad…. But with the evil skin walker following them I figured this would be when the parents found out about their abilities. Really looking forward to the next chapter to see how the parents assimilate and react to the new information they have just received.

What can I say, A marvelous uplifting read. Charlie and the gang together again for another Christmas adventure and visiting the elf village of Twombly. And this time sharing it with family and friends which is what the season is all about. Folks if you haven’t yet read the whole Charlie Boone series do yourself a favor and take a look at all the great writings of @Geron Kees and be amazed at all the wonder and magic that awaits you at the author’s imagination. You will meet a wonderful group of people, aliens, energy beings and more that form a family not of blood but of the chosen type that is sure to entertain. Q

That’s exactly what popped into to my head also. I would have been 7 years old when MTV launched in 1981 but never ended up watching it until I was like 11 or 12 around ‘85 or ‘86 when we finally got cable tv in the boondocks where I lived. Before then we had an outdoor antenna and like 4 local stations and any time you wanted to change between those you had to go out side and adjust the antenna. This has been a great saga all along Bill really enjoying it and look forward to each new chapter. Thanks for sharing your works with us.