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  1. Boy In Doubt
    I love this story! The way you described stuff, the imagery, it was great. And that comment Tyler's mom made about Nick made me laugh. Hehe. The best part was the ending.
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    It usually takes me about 2 weeks to really complete a chapter. I do some proof-reading the week after I'm done then when I feel I'm ready, I post the chapter. I also like to take notes whenever I come up with ideas (dialogue, plot, anything that can be added to the story). But I do wish I could finish a chapter in two hours and then worry about the rewriting the rest of the week. And sometimes the most frustrating thing is writer's block. Imagine your mind screeching to a halt mid-chapter. Ughh! Don't you just hate that?!
  3. Boy In Doubt
    Thanks for the feedback, guys. Honestly, though, I can't seem to sit down and just start writing. I mean, I have a few scenes that I can upload anytime but then it'd be shorter than most chapters. And I really want the words to come out naturally so please bear with me. I'll do this. I guess I just need some time. Thanks for your support. You guys help me a lot, just by letting me know what you thought of my story. I am open to negative feedback, though, so please don't hesitate to tell me about anything that could have been improved or done differently. This way I'll know my mistakes. *Hugs*
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    Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it.
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    I know how that feels. When I was younger I'd get pretty nervous too but since I've been going to the same school for a couple of years now I think I'm okay. I'm actually kinda excited. Good luck, everyone!
  6. Boy In Doubt
    Woohoo, awesome chapter! Now we know, now we know! So it's official: Oliver and David are the same person. And it makes me feel weird because I kinda believed they were twins. Hehe. As for the Martins, well, I still don't trust them. Brian, especially. I hope to read more.
  7. Boy In Doubt
    Happy Birthday.
  8. Boy In Doubt
    He kinda looks like Paul Walker in my mind. I don't mind if his hair is straight or curly, though. Any Desert Dropping sequel would be awesome!
  9. Boy In Doubt
    Stop assuming things 'cause you know what they say... The person below me listens to Paris Hilton's music.
  10. Boy In Doubt
    Ooh, I have one! "Unwell" by Matchbox Twenty 'cause of the lyrics: "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell. I know right now you can't tell. But stay awhile and maybe then you'll see...a different side of me."
  11. Boy In Doubt
    Oh, I love waking up in the morning! The only thing I hate is not being able to do it. The person below me loves KoolAid.
  12. Boy In Doubt
    I read this chapter yesterday and I thought it was awesome. I really wanna know what's gonna happen next, especially with David.
  13. Boy In Doubt
    Thanks for taking time to read my story. I have all these ideas in my head and usually find it hard to put them to words so it's great that you guys appreciate whatever I manage to write. I'll be explaining more about Evan in the next chapter. Thanks agains! I'm so happy! *Pulls everyone into a group hug*
  14. Boy In Doubt
    I read it, I liked it, but Chapter 4 confuses me. I mean, at first I really thought David and Oliver were two different people but then this chapter got me thinking. What if they are the same person and Oliver/David has a split personality? And oh, Rudy reminds me of Gail from Desert Dropping.
  15. Boy In Doubt
    Sorry I don't have any interesting dream articles to show you. I'm no psychiatrist but I think that there might be lots of different reasons. It depends, I guess. I mean, what does the dream mean to you? Maybe it's cause of how you feel. Like, maybe something's troubling you or you long for something you don't have yet. But if it doesn't seem to connect to anything in real life, it's probably just an escape from real life. Hehe, sorry that's all I have. But hey, I try. Goodluck with the whole dream thing. Hopefully, you'd be able to figure it out soon.
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    Interesting start. I'd read Chapter 1 when you post it.
  18. Boy In Doubt
    I loved Chapter 3. David finally met Frank and then we get to see how much of a jerk his and Oliver's dad really is. Actually, that's an understatement. The ending was sad. I so wanna know what happens next.
  19. Boy In Doubt
    The more I read, the more I love this story. I hated the way Oliver's mom treated Frank and even though I understand her reasons, it just doesn't seem right for her to isolate her kid like that. Anyway, the chapter was great and I just wanna say thank you to Dom for writing this awesome story that I'm sure will keep me company just like Desert Dropping last summer. Love it.
  20. Boy In Doubt
    I dont wanna be inside anyone! The person below me likes running around on a rainy day.
  21. Boy In Doubt
    Cool picture. About the story thing, it does suck if it happened in real life. I know I'd be miserable if a guy runs away from me after I make an attempt to ask him out. But the story's great. I bet it's gonna get even more interesting by the next chapter.
  22. Boy In Doubt
    Chapter 2 was great. The ending kinda sucks, in a good way. Hehe, is that even possible? I just mean that you know, with Jeff and Ben and...you know, the ending. I wanna know what happens next. By the way, Dezlboi, is that Naruto in your avatar pic?
  23. Boy In Doubt
    I haven't read the second chapter yet but I agree, this is a good story. I like the way Ben follows Jeff around despite the other guy's efforts to stay away from him. And he has a great writing style.
  24. Boy In Doubt
    Wow! By the end of the first half of Chapter 1 I already knew I was going to love this story! It has a different feel to it, which is really good. The characters, the setting, everything seems to fit and here I am falling in love with another Domluka story again. Woohoo!
  25. Boy In Doubt
    Haven't really thought about it. But now that you mentioned it... The person below me thinks I'm weird.
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