mike59

love the story so far

have always loved this family the story is brilliant but they need nan to kick some ass or someones

loved the whole story just as good as the first story. from start to finish brilliant.

loved both stories cant wait to read your next endeavour enjoy your holiday you deserved it.

just totally loved it

I loved your last story and this one just gets better as it unfolds cant wait for the next chapter

just read the whole thing in over a day once started could not put it down loved it

just had to say I love it. Read it in one go and can't wait for the next chapter.

well I didn't see that coming. I was thinking more on the lines of David giving Andy the advise to sign up getting killed out there and everyone blaming everyone else including themselves. Still a great story thank you.

spent the day reading this from the beginning all I can say is wow.

just perfect

just like to say I really enjoy your writing and looking forward to the next chapter