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The Return of Riley Walker
JayT commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in The Return of Riley Walker
you brought one of my boys back... and hearing from Eli just brought back my other boy enough to remember him... are we still going to end this where we talked about??? -
Didn't I say forever ago that the jacking with Dustin would bite Billy in the butt??? Dustin must've had a good date!!!!
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Over The Rainbow • Part VIII
JayT commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VIII
I didn't want to wake up and cry this morning...but oh well.....thanks Carlos....great job bub...looking forward to more -
J.D. seems to be pretty mature for his age...and Jason can be a bit immature for his age....maybe they can meet in the middle somewhere. I think J.D. will be more than a boytoy to Jason.
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Chapter 7 of TJ is about halfway finished. I just need to finish it up, sent it to Kitt for editing, then post it
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You're right....if J.D. stood for Jason Dean or Jarod Daniel, he might not have put 2 and 2 together. But, Josiah David is unusual...now, is J.D. going to help bridge some sort of reconciliation between the brothers or will he cut his parents out after the way they've acted.
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Thanks for the comment. I think everything will work out in the end....they just might not be speaking to the rest of the family all that often
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I agree Jason needs to have a different type of relationship with each.
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Thank you for the comment...I thought the pecan pie stealing was classic
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I'm working on Chapter 2 now....in my mind this relationship can work. If Jason had been around J.D. his whole life, I don't think it would work. But they are strangers, and not hurting anyone. Thanks for the comment
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I think they'll keep it to themselves for now...well they'll let Layla know maybe Thank you for reading!
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Alone on Christmas Day, he accidentally hooks up with the nephew he's never met. ***CONTENT WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS ELEMENTS WHICH SOME READERS MIGHT FIND OFFENSIVE. PLEASE READ WITH CAUTION***
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I Didn’t Know He Was My Nephew Chapter 1 Thanksgiving twenty years ago was the last time I spoke to my brother. My mom, dad, and I drove from Dallas to San Francisco to visit my brother, sister-in-law, and one-year old niece. The first sign something was wrong was when my niece starting crawling to me and my sister-in-law would pick her up and hand her off to my mom. Later, my dad was holding her, but my mom needed him to do something else. He tried to hand Layla to me, but my sister-
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#SquadGoals #NoIWillNotStopTalkingAboutTheCat
JayT commented on Dayne Mora's story chapter in #SquadGoals #NoIWillNotStopTalkingAboutTheCat
I've missed the guys, but I've missed you too Dayne. Good to see y'all back. -
wow...like I said last chapter Erik needs to pull his head out of his a and/or Ryan needs to grow a set. He had the perfect opportunity with the keys. He handled that part great. The whole I'm not trying to pressure you thing...but when the conversation came around, he should have raised the stakes, not all in, but a good raise that almost forces Erik to fold and give up and show his hand. He could've called Erik the bluff his mind is telling him. Oh and I think the picture with the keys was slightly manipulative, even if Ryan didn't intend it to be...Hello keys to a house with a picture of home...wow
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oh you effin tease
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Palm Springs???? What happened Niagara Falls???
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Over The Rainbow • Part VI
JayT commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VI
I saw that argument coming from the day CJ found out about the trust fund. Ozzie has proven how much he dislikes money. I personally think deep down he still has some issues with it, that's why he jokes about whenever the issue comes up now...it's the same with CJ's popularity. At first Ozzie didn't like how everyone knew CJ and they could never have time to themselves...now he jokes about as a coping mechanism. -
Please find a good, nice, caring guy for my Dustin....Hell I'd take him if I could. I just want him to be happy...I honestly feel like he's the your best character...Brett is good, despite all his flaws, which there are many....I'll just say-he comes with baggage but at least it's all designer and matching.....Billy is Billy..,..he's effed in the head...effed in reading social situations and effed in his willingness to back down from confrontation so quickly. Dustin has been to hell and back and he's still a forgiving, caring, loving, beautiful person with a big di...umm yeah never mind...just find me a Dustin
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I agree...I'm like have any of y'all actually watched people who were high on pot? They act completely stupid. They get lazy. I can't stand lazy and stupid. I'm just lazy...at least I still got my smarts cuz I got learned good in school....and I can totally talk right
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Basically, my previous comment was just to show that there isn't a Normal out there. The only NORMaL I found wanted to make Marijuana legal everywhere.
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I know when I attended Texas A&M, I met a group of people and learned what NORMaL was. National Organization for the Reform of Marijuana Legalization. That was also the night I discovered that I'm allergic to the actual marijuana plant.
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I can't hate on her today....she didn't take a low jab to Ryan by bringing up porn again. Her arguments were sound and true. Erik needs to listen to his heart and his head and Chloe and forget about NYC. Ryan needs to grow a pair speak up and either tell Rachel to butt out or Erik move your ass up here yesterday. We all know Ryan won't do that. So I guess it's up to Chloe to be the voice of reason here and tell Uncle Erik she misses him and wants him back there
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Open a New Window, Open a New Door
JayT commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Open a New Window, Open a New Door
no prob...and sorry to call you out in the comments, I could've sent you msg but didn't think about that -
Open a New Window, Open a New Door
JayT commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Open a New Window, Open a New Door
Great job! just an FYI....there is one line where you slipped from 3rd person to first person *sorry that's the editor in me coming out*
