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Dude Jeff....not cool man...totally not cool....but necessary....carry on
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Mark and I arrived at the party around ten. We walked through the sea of people trying to get through the front door. Once we were inside, the bodies multiplied. I was already starting to dread being here. I hated coming to parties like this, but Mark loved them. He loved being the social butterfly. Mark released my hand and kissed me on the cheek. “I’m going to get something to drink, I’ll catch up with you in a few.” “I’ll go with you. I’m thirsty myself.” I really did not want
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When Kevin's boyfriend, Mark, abandons him at another party, he runs into his ex, Aaron. Together, they learn why Mark abandons Kevin at every party they go to. What will they discover and what will happen to Mark once the truth comes out?
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Chapter 85 Breaking The Rules
JayT commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 85 Breaking The Rules
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hmmm me wonders what was wrong with Owen at the end...and CJ might get himself in trouble one of these days with not so innocent flirting
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The Alex thing happened before he was with Nathan, and Alex basically threatened him to keep it secret. So, Nathan shouldn't have a problem with it. However, Robbie will never think of using the excuse that it wasn't his place to out someone else, since he's not the brightest Crayon in the box.
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Yes you did. There shouldn't be a comma after @JayT. tsk tsk tsk
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TJ's temper is both his weakness and and his strength...It will get him in trouble at a moment's notice, but it also means he won't take crap from anyone.
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The other day I told @Carlos Hazday that one of these days I'm going to send you a "Chapter" to edit that is nothing but a document that say that that that that over and over again.
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I like making your day . There will be more, I promise.
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I agree...that is the debate going on inside TJ's head. He doesn't want to accept Robert as his dad....but he's finding himself calling Robert dad at times and he knows how much it would mean to Josh if he did accept Robert.
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I think Josh would call Robert before TJ...and Sean calling the police would be him calling his uncle...TJ wants to have a father in his life...but he always goes back to feeling unwanted.
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Thank you for the compliment. I always like to share.
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I post the chapters once I have them written and edited. I wish I had started differently and started posting chapters when I had a few (at least 6 written)...but I was anxious and impatient so yeah
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If TJ were stop and think for 2 seconds, he would realize that Sean was scared because multiple concussions can be fatal for football players. TJ doesn't know if Sean has ever had one or not but if he's had more than three, his doctor/coach/principal/boyfriend/dad (take your pick) won't let him play.
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No they weren't switched at birth...and I've never said Rachel is homophobic...remember the fact that she is used to getting what she wants and she wanted Sean.
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Thank you so much. I enjoy writing this story so much. I've tried to give all the main characters so flaw that makes them not perfect.
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Kevin's father might have just made a huge mistake....Mel...well with the conversion camp talk, Jenny's dad is going to have a field day with that..
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Cliffies are a needed evil. If I wrapped up every chapter with a pretty bow, what would bring y'all back for more?
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OMG!!! That's fracking great!
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TJ Chapter 6 The rest of the first week of school was tense. Nothing major happened on Tuesday. We received stares from some people, heard some whispers from others, and got a few smiles and nods. Rachel was only slightly better. She didn’t say anything negative to us during English, but she did glare. Before lunch, Josh and I were at the entrance to the cafeteria waiting for everyone when Kevin came around the corner talking to Rachel. They seemed to be in a heated discussion. Once Ke
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True, but too many of those exclamations get annoying and distract from the story. Plus in combination with the other grammar issues, the story becomes hard to read. It doesn't take a significant amount of time to either go over what has been written and look for issues or getting help from someone.
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Yes bub it is ALRIGHT if we don't agree on something. hehehe
