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  1. I Didn’t Know He Was My Nephew Chapter 1 Thanksgiving twenty years ago was the last time I spoke to my brother. My mom, dad, and I drove from Dallas to San Francisco to visit my brother, sister-in-law, and one-year old niece. The first sign something was wrong was when my niece starting crawling to me and my sister-in-law would pick her up and hand her off to my mom. Later, my dad was holding her, but my mom needed him to do something else. He tried to hand Layla to me, but my sister-
  2. I've missed the guys, but I've missed you too Dayne. Good to see y'all back.
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    Chapter 10

    wow...like I said last chapter Erik needs to pull his head out of his a and/or Ryan needs to grow a set. He had the perfect opportunity with the keys. He handled that part great. The whole I'm not trying to pressure you thing...but when the conversation came around, he should have raised the stakes, not all in, but a good raise that almost forces Erik to fold and give up and show his hand. He could've called Erik the bluff his mind is telling him. Oh and I think the picture with the keys was slightly manipulative, even if Ryan didn't intend it to be...Hello keys to a house with a picture of home...wow
  4. oh you effin tease
  5. Palm Springs???? What happened Niagara Falls???
  6. I saw that argument coming from the day CJ found out about the trust fund. Ozzie has proven how much he dislikes money. I personally think deep down he still has some issues with it, that's why he jokes about whenever the issue comes up now...it's the same with CJ's popularity. At first Ozzie didn't like how everyone knew CJ and they could never have time to themselves...now he jokes about as a coping mechanism.
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    The April Fool

    Please find a good, nice, caring guy for my Dustin....Hell I'd take him if I could. I just want him to be happy...I honestly feel like he's the your best character...Brett is good, despite all his flaws, which there are many....I'll just say-he comes with baggage but at least it's all designer and matching.....Billy is Billy..,..he's effed in the head...effed in reading social situations and effed in his willingness to back down from confrontation so quickly. Dustin has been to hell and back and he's still a forgiving, caring, loving, beautiful person with a big di...umm yeah never mind...just find me a Dustin
  8. I agree...I'm like have any of y'all actually watched people who were high on pot? They act completely stupid. They get lazy. I can't stand lazy and stupid. I'm just lazy...at least I still got my smarts cuz I got learned good in school....and I can totally talk right
  9. Basically, my previous comment was just to show that there isn't a Normal out there. The only NORMaL I found wanted to make Marijuana legal everywhere.
  10. I know when I attended Texas A&M, I met a group of people and learned what NORMaL was. National Organization for the Reform of Marijuana Legalization. That was also the night I discovered that I'm allergic to the actual marijuana plant.
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    Chapter 9

    I can't hate on her today....she didn't take a low jab to Ryan by bringing up porn again. Her arguments were sound and true. Erik needs to listen to his heart and his head and Chloe and forget about NYC. Ryan needs to grow a pair speak up and either tell Rachel to butt out or Erik move your ass up here yesterday. We all know Ryan won't do that. So I guess it's up to Chloe to be the voice of reason here and tell Uncle Erik she misses him and wants him back there
  12. no prob...and sorry to call you out in the comments, I could've sent you msg but didn't think about that
  13. Great job! just an FYI....there is one line where you slipped from 3rd person to first person *sorry that's the editor in me coming out*
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    Chapter 8

    Toronto is a major city and all major cities have a film industry. Hell, even Dallas has a film industry, and a pretty big one at that. Erik could find work in Toronto if he tried. He just might need to marry Ryan for citizenship reasons lol.
  15. I know who that Patrick Ewing is...I was just being a smartass
  16. Wasn't Patrick Ewing JR's brother who was taking a shower and discovered that an entire season of Dallas was nothing but his wife's dream???
  17. I was a Church regular from 1997-2007ish
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    Chapter 39

    Hey....I'm not trying to be critical here, this is strictly my opinion and you can take it or leave it....I enjoy this story, as you know, but there were times in this chapter where it felt like a soapbox and I decided to skip those parts. I enjoy the story, not the soapbox. Otherwise, good job. Looking forward to more..
  19. Martha ran the hospital on the moon that one time....but she didn't really do much then.....oh and didn't she end up with Mickey
  20. of god Martha Jones was horrible...I miss Claire...I didn't like Bob that much either
  21. did I ever say I didn't like the actress??? nope... I don't like Amy Pond
  22. And that's the only good thing she did. Honestly, I think it's more of the fact they tried to make the show too much about her. Look at the introduction for the seasons she was on. The show is called Doctor Who not Amy Bitchface Pond
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    Liars' Club

    I have a feeling Joey might know the truth.....the line kinda hints at that
  24. I'm sorry, he told me because we were chatting one day and I asked when CJ was going to propose to Owen....next time he lets me in on a secret I'll let you know, just don't tell @Carlos Hazday
  25. OMG......I've been sitting on this secret for MONTHS!!!!!!!!!! Thank you Carlos for letting in in the secret ahead....Great job!!! Ozzie better say yes, I know he will
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