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JayT

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  1. They are handing Paul $500k and don't ever realize it. I was upset when he lost last year to Nicole, he totally should've won. However, this year he is playing completely different. I would love to see him go up again Evil Dick one season.
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    The Black Sheep

    But Ryder is about to explode on the music scene....everything is leading to that. When that happens, he'll have to leave Teddy behind.
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    The Black Sheep

    it might not be Teddy's popularity that gets in the way... it might be Ryder's
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    The Black Sheep

    that's what he said!
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    Chapter 9 - Patrick

    I know who the baby's mother is....
  6. It truly was....I think this scene showed just how much Michael needed Asher in his life. Thanks! I loved this story when I read it...I thought it deserved some recognition I almost chose the preceding scene, but felt this one showed how disheveled Michael was after he walked away from Asher.
  7. Jeff ...My poor Dustin is never going to be the same is he? I don't know why you hate him so much....oh wait, I remember, you CLAIM that he stole your lunch money, but I've never seen any proof of that. Good job, even though I'm spiraling down a pit of despair after reading that.
  8. Park might be a tad bit paranoid, but on the other hand, Ritch is acting a bit flippant. Hopefully they'll find a balance soon. Maybe once Park gives Ritch the right kind of meat everything will be okay.
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    Chapter 28

    Wow that chapter was all over the place....high highs and low lows....I hope this rollercoaster ride smoothes out soon...Great job!
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    Words Unspoken

    I'm not technically wrong though.....think about it hehehe
  11. yup....the guy sent it after I posted the prologue to a site that starts with N and ends in ifty.
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    Words Unspoken

    My pleasure! I've spent enough time with these characters, I almost view them as my own. @Aceinthehole and I have spent a lot of time discussing them and where they're ultimately going...He's got a good vision and takes my suggestions and tweaks them to work in the direction he wants these characters to go.
  13. I received an email from a reader from another site. He told me that my story was absolutely horrible and he couldn't believe that I publish something like that. This was after he admitted that he didn't like shifter/vampire stories (which mine was!) I emailed him back and said I didn't appreciate that he would say such harsh words about something I spent my time working on. I further told him that if he didn't like it, he didn't have to read it and that if he didn't have anything positive to say, he should've kept his opinion to himself.
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    Words Unspoken

    Ummm Riley would be the one dealing with the PTSD *if that's the case* due to the death of his parents. Teddy's parents are alive and well at his house.
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    Chapter 10

    Hmmm who's behind all of this??? My money's on Laird
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    The Bite

    The only thing in my head at the end was "But get me to the church on time" from My Fair Lady. hehehe
  17. small town politics are so much fun aren't they
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    Chapter 5

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story. As far as Texas Courts go, we're talking about southeast Texas in an area where the closest big city is Houston and it's 90 miles away. .There are some good ol' boys running around down there. But, it's also one of the few blue counties in Texas (Austin area and the Valley being the others). But which trumps which? The good ol' boy side or the liberal side. (Hint:the only reason it's a blue area is because of the refineries down there. The unions run the refineries, unions are very liberal and politely threaten you I'm mean suggest that you vote democrat).
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    Chapter 4

    The State of Texas Family Courts favor the mother 9 times out of 10. Fathers have no automatic rights like mothers do. They have to choose to be a father where as a mother is automatically a parent with full rights
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    Chapter 3

    TJ felt like everyone he trusted lied to him in some way...Robert pretending to be his brother and never a father, Hus parents for never telling him the truth, Scott for how he acted, he didn't care who he hurt as long as they hurt too.. but he's in therapy now and working through his issues
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    Chapter 3

    I wouldn't call TJ and jerk... he's just not the brightest crayon in the box at times
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    Chapter 2

    It might have been the worst summer of his but it turn out that his senior year is his best year ever. Josh may be hurt, but he loves TJ and is his best friend. He's going to want what's best for TJ.
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    Chapter 1

    Josh is probably the most level headed and strongest character in this story. He absolutely refuses to ever let life get to him. He is determined to find the positive in life. Not to say that there might not be a breaking point somewhere, Josh's is just really hard to find.
  24. Okay, I don't know any parents that would allow two thirteen year olds to go to camp for a week by themselves. Especially a cop! Maybe they would allow them to go pitch a tent in the backyard, or if they happen to have some acreage, go pitch a tent out in the pasture. Doesn't anybody else see a slight problem with this?
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