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  1. JayT

    Chapter 1

    Scott's story is going to continue but probably won't be as long as TJ's at all....There's going to be a phone call made in both stories (Chapter 2 of Scott and Chapter 7 of TJ) and then eventually a meeting in person (but that won't happen until December in the timeline so it's a few months away still )
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    Chapter 1

    I'm taking a page from @Cynus IF YOU WANT TO COMMENT, PLEASE QUOTE THIS POST FIRST SO THAT I'LL SEE A NOTIFICATION ABOUT YOUR POST!!!!
  3. JayT

    Chapter 1

    Scott Chapter 1 “My name’s Scott, and I’m an alcoholic.” “Hi Scott.” The whole room replied in unison. I took my seat and looked around. I was one of the youngest people in the room by far. Most of them looked to be fifty or older, except for the person sitting next to me. He was about eight years older than me and had a warm, genuine smile. I had been coming to these meetings every night for the past couple of months. Starting next week, I was going to have to cut down to a
  4. Making amends to someone is more than simply telling them "I'm sorry." It's acknowledging your flaws to someone that you wronged, admitting exactly what your wrongs were, and promising that person you will live your life trying your hardest to not hurt someone else like that. You're promising them you will try to live a better life. After Scott hurt TJ, his life quickly spiraled out of control. Now, he has an awesome sponsor, an awesome boyfriend (who is his sponsor's younger brother), and working The Steps (until he reaches The Eighth Step). Will he find the strength to try and contact TJ again to make amends for what he did?
  5. Poor Robbie.....and I think Sue just wants to save the whole world and let them all live in her basement...while her prick of a husband wants to run the local mofia
  6. my question is why is it that sometimes the text shows up dark when you change the contrast??? it does that in some of my chapters but not in all....I think it does it when I choose the remove formatting button
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    The Cabin

    Good ending....glad things ended on a positive note. For half a second, I was scared Billy was going to find George in that chair dead. Thank you for not doing that to us! See you around for part 6!
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    Reality Check

    I think Ryder was cut off before he could reveal his greatest fear- I believe he was about to say "What if I reach that point." His grandma compares him to his father all the time, so he's afraid that his illness will get the better of him one day and kill him.
  9. you need to make a like button with either flames coming out the top of the head or steam escaping from the ears for HOT!!!!!!!! cause that's what I would've chosen for this chapter.
  10. GA changed my life and my opinion of myself. In the past, I was told that I wrote great research papers, but I had never tried to write anything creative/fiction. I still struggle with being too technical in my stories (ie writing as if my audience was a college professor instead of general public). But, I would like to think I'm getting better with the help of people from the community. @Mikiesboy and @Kitt have both been very helpful in getting my stories to the level they are. Thank y'all for the site, I plan on being here for as long as y'all will have me.
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    Chapter 67

    can't get much more iron clad and permanent than a marriage contract
  12. JayT

    Epilogue

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A HEA!!!!!!!!!!! after reading Between the Push and the Pull I was apprehensive about this one....(I know you're not finished with Between the Push and the Pull yet) Great Job!!!!
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    FR Chapter 42

    Is it just me or is Anton seeming like a stuck-up snob sometimes......Plus where the heck does he get this endless supply of money to spend on salaries, the farm, upgrades to the boat, sending people on fully paid trips for three weeks at a time, also....is he 17 or 19 years old or is he 40-50 years old? He doesn't act anywhere near his age....in fact none of the characters do.
  14. Thank you....in my personal opinion, Disturbed destroyed that song....the original by Simon and Garfunkel was amazing.....the guitar part alone in the original is worth listening to
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    Fallout

    wowzers....that was a poop-load of info....ummmm yeah and stuff....great job!!!!
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    FR Chapter 40

    yes that happens but everything I'm talking about happens directly after that
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    FR Chapter 40

    nope.... that's from the text and following is when he asks Sara to load the dishwasher and all of that happened while Anton was on his way to the fly deck
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    FR Chapter 40

    Okay...question....this is told in the first person from Anton's POV, right??? Then how does he know what Simon did and said while he's showing the guests to their rooms and while Sara and him are in the galley??? When Anton wasn't with them.
  19. And come one this was Chapter 69 in the overall scheme of the books....and you leave us hanging hehehe Chapter 69
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    Party

    Reading this was great. It got me thinking about our Skinny and I don't want to be a downer.....just want to say-Skinny we love you and miss you thank you for sharing your stories with us. And, to you Parker, thanks for bringing a little bit of Skinny back to us...you did an amazing job
  21. Oh come on @Cia....why do you have to tease me??? It's not fair...I want Park to give Ritch his good kind of meat. or something like that hehehe
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    Chapter 12 - Ian

    So I'm guessing since Ian and his sister aren't that close, he didn't know her husband's name or what he looked like right?
  23. Congrats sir....you deserve it
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    Chapter 66

    Carlos made the mistake of letting someone who is so naturally passive set the pace for their relationship that it became a trap.
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    All for One

    What I find interesting is the fact that Mike is ultimately the one who came to Ryder's rescue. Mike was the one who redirected the team's attention when Teddy froze up.
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