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  1. JayT

    Chapter 1

    There will be more coming from both TJ and Scott....once Scott's story is finished I might tell y'all more about Josh and Kevin....they have an interesting relationship hehehe
  2. JayT

    Chapter 1

    I was having major writer's block and couldn't even begin Chapter 6 of TJ....Then I started this story and wrote all of this first chapter in one sitting...as soon as I decided to stop, I had 12 pages of Chapter 6 written before I knew it
  3. JayT

    Chapter 1

    He's intentionally avoiding doing Step 8.....he is avoiding making that list and he is nowhere near becoming willing to contact anyone that might be on the list. Pete will try to convince to keep moving forward, but I think it's going to be up to Ryan to convince him he needs to forgive himself for hurting TJ before their relationship can go any further
  4. JayT

    Chapter 1

    Scott's story is going to continue but probably won't be as long as TJ's at all....There's going to be a phone call made in both stories (Chapter 2 of Scott and Chapter 7 of TJ) and then eventually a meeting in person (but that won't happen until December in the timeline so it's a few months away still )
  5. JayT

    Chapter 1

    I'm taking a page from @Cynus IF YOU WANT TO COMMENT, PLEASE QUOTE THIS POST FIRST SO THAT I'LL SEE A NOTIFICATION ABOUT YOUR POST!!!!
  6. Making amends to someone is more than simply telling them "I'm sorry." It's acknowledging your flaws to someone that you wronged, admitting exactly what your wrongs were, and promising that person you will live your life trying your hardest to not hurt someone else like that. You're promising them you will try to live a better life. After Scott hurt TJ, his life quickly spiraled out of control. Now, he has an awesome sponsor, an awesome boyfriend (who is his sponsor's younger brother), and working The Steps (until he reaches The Eighth Step). Will he find the strength to try and contact TJ again to make amends for what he did?
  7. JayT

    Chapter 1

    Scott Chapter 1 “My name’s Scott, and I’m an alcoholic.” “Hi Scott.” The whole room replied in unison. I took my seat and looked around. I was one of the youngest people in the room by far. Most of them looked to be fifty or older, except for the person sitting next to me. He was about eight years older than me and had a warm, genuine smile. I had been coming to these meetings every night for the past couple of months. Starting next week, I was going to have to cut down to a
  8. 2001: A Space Iliad
  9. The Bar Fly
  10. I have Never have I ever been to any of the "V" states
  11. My Own Private Idaho Potatoes
  12. Coast Guard
  13. Lord of the Cock Rings Nine Inches The Incredible Shrinking Woman Parts Deep Throat (seriously this one is perfect already) The Rocky Horror Picture Show and Tell The Wizard of Oz's Bathroom Sceens Victor/Victoria's Secret
  14. Poor Robbie.....and I think Sue just wants to save the whole world and let them all live in her basement...while her prick of a husband wants to run the local mofia
  15. my question is why is it that sometimes the text shows up dark when you change the contrast??? it does that in some of my chapters but not in all....I think it does it when I choose the remove formatting button
  16. Heathers Junk
  17. JayT

    The Cabin

    Good ending....glad things ended on a positive note. For half a second, I was scared Billy was going to find George in that chair dead. Thank you for not doing that to us! See you around for part 6!
  18. JayT

    Reality Check

    I think Ryder was cut off before he could reveal his greatest fear- I believe he was about to say "What if I reach that point." His grandma compares him to his father all the time, so he's afraid that his illness will get the better of him one day and kill him.
  19. you need to make a like button with either flames coming out the top of the head or steam escaping from the ears for HOT!!!!!!!! cause that's what I would've chosen for this chapter.
  20. GA changed my life and my opinion of myself. In the past, I was told that I wrote great research papers, but I had never tried to write anything creative/fiction. I still struggle with being too technical in my stories (ie writing as if my audience was a college professor instead of general public). But, I would like to think I'm getting better with the help of people from the community. @Mikiesboy and @Kitt have both been very helpful in getting my stories to the level they are. Thank y'all for the site, I plan on being here for as long as y'all will have me.
  21. JayT

    Chapter 67

    can't get much more iron clad and permanent than a marriage contract
  22. JayT

    Epilogue

    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A HEA!!!!!!!!!!! after reading Between the Push and the Pull I was apprehensive about this one....(I know you're not finished with Between the Push and the Pull yet) Great Job!!!!
  23. JayT

    FR Chapter 42

    Is it just me or is Anton seeming like a stuck-up snob sometimes......Plus where the heck does he get this endless supply of money to spend on salaries, the farm, upgrades to the boat, sending people on fully paid trips for three weeks at a time, also....is he 17 or 19 years old or is he 40-50 years old? He doesn't act anywhere near his age....in fact none of the characters do.
  24. there's absolutely no way Billy can demand any paternity test... he's not involved... the mother or guardian of a minor are the only ones who can ask a judge to court order a paternity test
  25. but the lawyer doesn't threaten unless he has something to hold over the other's head...he has information to blackmail everyone in the town, so if they back up Billy, their secrets come out
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