JayT

Not at all.....I'm up most of the night, unable to sleep. So, I sleep when I can. Mostly, on the way to and from work and maybe a nap when I get home.

Whose to say it wasn't Daniel? Given his attitude the past couple of days, I wouldn't be surprised. If it was though, he will feel like total shit afterwards.

This chapter gave me a cavity it was so sweet. hehehe Great job Gary.

I think Jeremy just inherited another little brother. Great job! See you next chapter

I wonder what Dustin has done to Brett to convince him that is so dangerous? Why couldn't Brett have been the one to take the pills? And you're crazy if you think we'll let you take a break. hehehe just kidding

Hey, I said it in the short few paragraphs I wrote for Skinny's tribute. We might not know each other physically, but we are an online family. We might not agree all of the time; but in the end, we are here for our brothers and sisters when they need us.

so they went to a previous point in time him?

oh I just thought of another one...to and too

okay it just got too gay in here lol jk

way to stereotype Drew...I thought we were past all that lol...don't be a bitch, bitch

seriously y'all didn't call me on the misspelling??? since when does nauseated have 2 e's???

since nauseous has been so misused for so long nauseous now has the definition that should be for nauseateed..

great job once again Carlos...looking forward to next week

hehehe.....cuz you're my bubba and I love you soooooooo much that I have to annoy you!!!!! or something like that lol

I know another one of yours tim.....all right vs. alright

If you recall, I didn't like Chapter 1 because of the additional person. But there was more than sex with their friend in the first chapter. In this chapter it was all about the fucking. Different feel, different situation, good job.

Another one that irks me is something my dad says. Granted he was born and raised in southeast Texas in a small town named Port Neches, but he has a college education and should know that there is no such word as borned.

Parker...that's cruel and unusual punishment to end the chapter there.

I can't believe I forgot about your/you're...but every time I'm reading and a character says they're nauseous I think to myself atleast they know they stink.

One of my biggest pet peeves is when someone mispronounces the word supposedly. More often than not, people add a "b" towards the end. Supposably is not a word. Even seeing it typed incorrectly is bothering me right now. Something else that is bothersome to me is when people use the word nauseous when they really mean nauseated. To be nauseated means to feel queasy, feel like you might vomit. To be nauseous is to be emitting a foul smell that would make someone else nauseated. So, if someone says they are nauseous, they're admitting that they stink. If they feel ill, they would be nauseated. Another one is the misuse of the words then and than. Then is used when describing sequential events: A. happened then B happened. Than is used to compare/contrast things: A is better than B. Finally, and I realize this is totally personal preference here, I can't stand the word "moist." I won't even buy a Duncan Hines cake mix because the box has that word written on it. Do y'all have any grammar pet peeves?

I can't believe that last paragraph. How can Robbie sit there and claim to love Nathan when he had Rory as a "back up plan?"

Great Job Gary!!!!!!! I'm going to be a big boy and not whine about wanting more. And I'm not talking about my penis. hehehe

It's 3:50 in the morning, I have to be awake in 2 hours to get ready to go to work. Oh yeah, I haven't slept yet. This sucks, and not in the good way. I hate it when I get like this. I'm not stressed out, so I know it's not stress-related. I'm in a good place in my life right now. Things are going swell. My future's so bright, I gotta wear shades. Oh, and I wear my sunglasses at night. (Damn, I rock the kasbah, and the Sharif don't like it?) Meanwhile, back at the ranch. Oh yeah, my original point in all of this was to let y'all know that insomnia fracking sucks.

If you were to set me next to Michael, I would look like a boy next to a man. But I need a periscope to see the gutter most days.

I just had a Michael Aceto moment and wanted to say, "You're talking about my penis, aren't you?"