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What We Did on Our Summer Vacation
JayT commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in What We Did on Our Summer Vacation
I want that little shit Brett to get busted with Billy's pain pills so Billy will finally see his loving boyfriend is a lying manipulative p.o.s. This chapter almost made me cry about Dustin. The line "You broke my heart." from their fight keeps playing over and over in my head. -
Chapter 13 Betting on a Sure Thing
JayT commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 Betting on a Sure Thing
Hey Gary, I had to put off rereading this for a couple of weeks....I started a new job and I have to wake up at 5:45 every morning and don't get home until after 6:30 at night. Poor Chet. He needs to hurry up and get pulled over and get that ticket. hehehe -
The rush of the fresh human blood in his system made so that he couldn't wait...not even to stretch. He used the most convenient source of lubrication he could think of.
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well if Sasha would be 10 years older, he and David would own their own restaurant...with Alik working there too...Colin is so a vampire
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You could always make it so that Raymond realizes that he disrespected not only the man, but the uniform that man is proud to wear, and he apologizes. The quotation punctuation has most definitely improved.
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Raymond totally approached the situation with Danny wrong. Danny is a grown ass man and Raymond had no right to treat him like that. Especially when he was in uniform. That was blatant disrespect to both the person and the uniform. I've lost a bit of respect for Raymond.
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What Brett needs is good old-fashioned butt-whooping. Nothing overly dramatic. Just enough to show him, you eff up, you pay the price....and no, you weren't beat. But we've been told that disciplining our children is wrong and that we should allow them to act like little shits.
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Control can only be given. As long as you're consciously aware, you still have the choice whether or not to give up control to another. Logan chose to give up the control to Tilly, who thinks she always has to be in control of what's going on. That's why she spoke before thinking when she figured that Tobyn and Kellar were mates. Subconsciously, she controlled that situation.
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Logan was gobsmacked at first, then quickly regained his composure and played Tilly like Charlie Daniels does a fiddle. He totally let her take control. Nice!
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It was nice that the boys got to spend some quality time together doing something Luke wanted. I wonder what Cunty's oops I mean Cindy's reaction will be when Luke isn't at the paintball party?
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While we are editing/modifying one of our stories, what is the option to Validate Story for? It's located under Manage Story.
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With Jeff being a lawyer and Paul being who he is as you've written him, neither would allow this not to be handled legally and professionally. It was self defense plain and simple. It would be way too out of character for either. Plus I don't think Joe would allow it since two chapters ago he was on his soap box going off about corruption in the public offices and then suggesting friends of these two men to possibly fill those positions.
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Tim the village might be in another time but remember that when the demons use a portal they can go anywhere and any time...if I'm remembering correctly
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Spikey-I got a notification that a review to Predator Prey had been left on Mar 03 so I went to read it. To quote Dr. (Professor) River Song: "Spoilers." So, I knew what was coming. Parker-Great job keeping my cavities going. More sweet stuff!!!
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Why haven't I heard one single "wicked" from any of our Bostonians? hehehe I guess Ritchie arrives next month huh? Looking forward to more. Jay
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read EPIC by Dayne Mora she freaking rocks writing althletic guys who fall in love and have massive amounts of hot sex
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"My individual tent was quick to pop up, but Ritch wouldn’t let me do it." "He needed something solid." You're killing me with these lol.
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Nice job of progressing the story without trying to do too much all at once. I'm going to email you with some edits if you don't mind. Good Job! Looking forward to more.
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Chapter 48 Connections, Old and New
JayT commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 Connections, Old and New
Damn Gary...That was hot...mic drop -
Brett is a spoiled little shit and Jenny is finally seeing it.
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Thanks....chapter four is in process now. Hopefully I'll have it posted in about a week or so.
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I thought that would be a good stopping point. Thanks for the support.
