I think Ritch feels something for Park, he's just not sure what it is yet. He knows he's safe with Park, he just allows his fears to control his actions and reactions.
I loved when Arthur said, "..,.and then we go to Morningstar." And then totally ignored what Kellar had to say afterward. Great Job bud. Much Love, Jay
You had me scared for like half a second when I saw the name of the chapter. I wasn't sure what "it" Billy was going to lose. Nice that it was his virginity and not his mind,
It is very much a head vs heart thing for Josh. If you haven't noticed, Josh is the rational one that holds everything together. Right now he's pissed off at TJ. His brain knows that TJ didn't do this on purpose but are his emotions going to listen to his head?
Wow a German, a Russian, and bunch of Scots....sounds like the beginning of a bad joke. Oh and an Italian. So, the German and Italian would work together, then the Scots (being proper Brits) would keep a stiff upper lip and reluctantly work with the Russian. Now, all we need is for someone from Japan to come in and we'd be set.
The once fierce predator has now become the prey for the most unforgiving of masters....the sea. This chapter definitely didn't give me cavities.....I could use some cavities right about now....back to the sweet stuff please.
Awww Parker....you just gave me another cavity. Good Job! Oh BTW you have me re-reading A to Z with all of your posts, giving me even more cavities. Darn you and the sweet stuff. hehehe
Good start....there were a few technical errors (missing words mainly) but hell everyone makes mistakes....If you need an editor or beta reader I'm willing to help you out.....just send me a message!
I just wanted to let you know how much I love you and value your friendship. My thoughts are with you. If you need somewhere to vent or whatever, you have my email address. Please keep in touch....you will always have a friend here when you need one. Love your brother, Jay
I'm surprised Billy didn't get upset about the things that Brett was saying. Billy from the other books would've yelled, said hurtful things and fought tooth and nail just to prove Brett wrong. I think he's grown up a little. Good job!!! Looking forward to more