Yeah, this one hurt. I can see what Jimmy meant by saying he was saying goodbye to another piece of his soul. Felt like I lost a little piece, too!
Reality sucks, sometimes, even when it's fiction. Good job!
Really excellent chapter. Great writing again!
Jada seems to have done the right thing here, to push this whole thing into the light. Maybe both of these people can be happy now. Gonna take some work. Sawyer needs to face who he is. Now I'm wondering who he will meet next?
Enjoying the story. Thanks!
Good story on a difficult subject, well presented, and with sympathy. It does seem that the accused these days are damned from the start. Trials are held in the media before they even get to the courtroom. Lives can be ruined and there is no easy way back. Certainly a strong commentary on a system that is supposed to provide justice, but falls far short of the mark.
Very different excursion into lycanthropy thus far. Fergus doesn't sound like one to mess with. Alice must have a really interesting backstory.
Like the distinction between lycans and humans, and the explanation for what goes wrong when humans turn. Makes sense. No Lon Chaney in this one!
Ouch. Clouds, rain, and wind. Lightning and thunder. Being buffeted by forces like this is never easy.
The sun always comes out again after a storm. Sometimes you have to look hard to see it.
Nice piece, Gary.
You are well on the track to figuring things out. No hints from me!
Agree that this has not been the best year so far. Just think, it can only get better. Probably!
You stay well, too. Be really careful in those crawlspaces!
All of these are relevant. There's a hell of a lot of pressure in the world just now. Venting is taking place everywhere.
I like your venting a LOT more than some of what I've seen elsewhere. 😍
I can also do the simplest thing and just ignore the guy's ages from now on. Never mentioned, not a problem. Teens forever.
But I'll probably think of something else. 🙂
Sigh. Go right ahead, gang up on the poor author. Keep encouraging each other.
If I have to send Auggie over there, you ain't gonna like what happens! 😈
Charlie's series alone already has too many characters to keep track of them all. Adding in other series would be a recipe for chaos.
Want me to have a noivous bweakdown? 🙂
With your help, I would never have a free moment left for anything but writing!
I refuse to be a slave to my own characters!
Well...any more than I am already, anyway!
You and DQ give me too many ideas for it to be healthy. I already can barely keep up with all the stuff I write!
I will say that I wrote the opening pages of Charlie's July 4th story today.
Let's leave Difris out of this!
Weird, but I just received the email site notification that you responded to this story. It's only been a year and a couple of months!
Well, the orgy was just one of those things. I don't think most people would want to be part of that. Well, more than once!
'Stuff' is a lot of fun, too! 🙂
Awww. I am taking a leap here and using my own definition of 'you' (as in...'but that my orbit runs around you').
I have always felt a difference doing chores that are just mine, and doing the ones that benefit myself and my special someone. There's a certain sweet quality in the latter that is lacking in just looking after my own clutter.
There is order in maintaining the accoutrements of our daily lives, and a certain joy in knowing that it's not just our own days that are getting shinier. 🙂