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Geron Kees

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  1. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    But can you say it ten times, REAL fast?
  2. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I think all flyers sound this way, pretty much!
  3. Geron Kees

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    Let's hope!
  4. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    They're cheap entertainment, too!
  5. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I just thought someone left the bathroom light on!
  6. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I really need to bring you in on these as an idea man!
  7. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    You kinda scared me for a moment! I have never seen a Charlie Boone story initiate a seizure!
  8. Geron Kees

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    I don't know about you, but I have had at least some fun with most of them!
  9. Geron Kees

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    Wow. You are starting late in the game!
  10. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Yes, but you don't look like Browbeat. Your wings are green, and his are blue!
  11. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Shocks? SHOCKS?? Gee, I hope I remembered where I put those darn things!
  12. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    And so you shall!
  13. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Hope it winds up being worth the time it takes to read, anyway!
  14. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I guess that's why Tesla installed the device in the cellar, below ground level. To minimize those harmonics you're referring to?
  15. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 is sort of meant to tease you. You're not supposed to be thinking yet!
  16. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I posted it just after midnight, or early this morning. Since it's a work day for me, I would not have had time for posting before I left for the office. That means the story would have been posted about now, early afternoon, because that's when I eat lunch. And if it was a really busy day, I would not have gotten to it until almost dinnertime. So, I thought it would be better to have the first chapter available for the entire day, rather than just ten or so hours after lunch. That will hold true for the entire story now.
  17. The monster shoved its way down the broad street, brushing the facades off buildings with each sweep of its massive tail. Faces in the seventh-floor windows gaped and contorted and screamed as the baleful black eyes looked in at them in passing. Any movement caught the creature's attention, bringing huge claws tipped with sharp talons to bear, which ripped their way into the buildings and seized the unfortunate souls, who screamed again, struggled, and then died as massive jaws closed around the
  18. The guys are rolling along now with their business, Third Planet Inquiries, and it looks like their future is secure. Good ol’ planet earth has a lot of strange things going on that need to be investigated! And as Halloween approaches, Kippy is hoping something will come up to occupy their attention, something creepy or spooky, in keeping with that holiday. So, when Amy gets a strange phone call, things start to get interesting, and the guys are off on another adventure, just in time for Halloween!
  19. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    Thank you, thank you, thank you!
  20. Geron Kees

    Chapter 4

    Sounds like this haint no joke! The place would seem to be possessed by something. The windows are a key. But perhaps WHY they are a key is important, too. Seems to me some ardent snooping is called for here!
  21. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Sorry, no punch. Something else, maybe? Should be a new Charlie Boone for Halloween starting on...well, how about that! Halloween!
  22. Geron Kees

    Chapter 3

    Yup. Creepy AND serious. Good job creating a nasty moment!
  23. Geron Kees

    Chapter 1

    I would like to see more, too. Hint, hint, in case anyone with the creator's keyboard beneath his fingers should hear!
  24. I have to admit this feels like a very good first chapter to something that should be much longer. But it stands as it is, and only makes us WISH for more. I don't believe you can do more, as an author, than to leave the reader smiling and wanting more! Except, maybe write to the author, and ask for more! MORE!
  25. Geron Kees

    Chapter 2

    I had the same premonition that Coop did! Pete IS acting like a man possessed! 👿
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