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    Here’s my impression on this chapter. I like the way the family presented this information, which is potentially devastating to Kris, in a way to let Kris know that he is an unwitting bystander in this plot, and that don’t hold him accountable for any of it. It appears that they appreciate his intelligence and skills, and I won’t be surprised to see Stef take him under his wing. JJ is taking this all surprisingly well. But I can be completely wrong about this.
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    Chapter 9 - Adam

    Dhpiet77 commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Adam

    I loved this chapter. I didn’t use a certain icon in liking the story, but I’ve got my figurative fingers crossed.
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    It appears that JJ is a tiger who stripes are still in the same order.
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    Foster 1

    Dhpiet77 commented on WolfM's story chapter in Foster 1

    Thank you for sharing this. I have a feeling that somewhere out in Carlos’ alt-universe, Scott has a new and stronger hope that his life will be better.
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    Chapter 16

    Dhpiet77 commented on Mark Ponyboy Peters's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I love the conclusion to this part of the Thompsonville Tales, and I’m looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
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    Chapter 13

    Dhpiet77 commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 13

    Misread it. Never mind.
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    Chapter 13

    Dhpiet77 commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 13

    So much ground was covered in this chapter, high and low notes, laughs and tears. The idea that Jake is Greg’s twin somehow is intriguing. I’m looking forward to the Prince George’s meeting with the barons plays out. Actually, there’s a lot to look forward to in this tale.
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    I needed to catch my breath after reading this chapter. What a ride! I’m glad there’s more to come.
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    Chapter 11

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 11

    I agree with RainbowPhoenixWI about your use of dialogue. In so many stories, the dialogue seems to be just filler using clever or sad back and forth that doesn’t really serve character development or the story arc. That’s not the case here. The dialogues you write enhance the story, characters and all. Thanks for the good work.
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    Sometimes I think that J.J. is going to be the death of himself.
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    Hard nope. Never have I ever dipped snuff.
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    Chapter 9

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I’m thinking that Mitch will somehow come out on the short end of this situation, and Pete is going to come out way ahead.
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    Chapter 24

    Dhpiet77 commented on Ronyx's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Thank you for this touching story, Ronyx. Here it is almost 8 years later, I’ve just finished reading this story again. And like the other time(s?) that I’ve read it before, I’m thinking that this is one story that begs for a sequel.
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    Chapter 8

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Pete’s a thoughtful 36 year-old man in a growing 14 year-old boy’s body. He considers and learns from his experience. Keep it up, Pete!
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    Chapter 7

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Things seem to be settling down. I hope that this lasts for a while, like until graduation in a few years.
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    Nope. Never have I ever done yoga with goats
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    needed water
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    deviate
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    Chapter 6

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 6

    The action piles up in this chapter. Well written, too! Thanks for giving it to us.
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    Chapter 5

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 5

    C-L-I-F-F-H-A-N-G-E-R !! Even with all of Uncle George’s pre-emptive moves to keep Pete out of harms way, Carl and his dad’s network still always manages to make Pete’s life hell. It seems to be a game of one-umpmanship with the actions of the Turner Family’s probable toady Dr. Danbury, Uncle George is sure to respond in-kind. Wild card: Will Pete’s mom decide she needs to take Pete back for her family in Utah to handle?
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    Chapter 13 S2

    Dhpiet77 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 13 S2

    Loved the prank, and I’m looking forward to reading how the summer plays out.
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    Chapter 4

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Looks like Pete is getting set up, not only by Carl & crew, but also for upcoming chapters.
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    Chapter 3

    Dhpiet77 commented on Al Norris's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Having grown up in a loving home, and having done my best to provide one to my own kids, Pete’s mother’s behavior is unfathomable to me. I do know that it happens to too many children in real life. My heart goes out to Pete and every other victim of this type of parental abuse, real or fictional. I’ll be rooting for Pete through the rest of this story.
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    Chapter 5

    Dhpiet77 commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 5

    A great chapter that opens up so many unexpected possibilities. Thanks!
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    Re-Education

    Dhpiet77 commented on Justin4Fun's story in Fiction

    I’m old enough that my short-term memory is not always that great.
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