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    Chapter 153

    Yes, Armand will need to create and sell more paintings. College is very expensive, and he has several boys to fund all at once. Michigan is a fabulous football school. Ronnie has to be an outstanding player to be invited by the coach and school. The others have good schools closer at hand in mind. BTW, jet planes can be rented or fractionally owned to lower the cost. Armand could buy 1/16 of a plane and use it to fly to games, The several week summer trip to Europe and Egypt sounds marvelous. Colin and Armand will be taking quite a large entourage to learn and gown and broaden their horizons.
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    Chapter 20

    What a warm and fitting conclusion to this powerful, touching mystery story. You tied the loose ends together. Jase tied his like together by traveling back home and leaving his former partner to live his new life with his new partner and and wonderfully counselled and put at ease a young girl with 21 challenges. Jase or Michael carried his knowledge forward to make another difference. His trip back to Naples was successful. Lucas and Macy welcomed him gratefully and happily. They are going to enjoy a good life as a strong family , I bet. After all the headache, it is encouraging to be given a happily ever after ending. Jase, Lucas and Macy deserved this outcome. Thank you.
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    Chapter 152

    Armand has painted two works that enchanted the recipients--Christen's wife and Nonna. They are fondly memorialized. The older boys will be seniors and are thinking about their future education and sometimes careers, Armand finds it hard to lose them. GG criticizes him and say he has to let them go for now. They will always be a part of his life. He must be a loving and wide father that they love truly. His good character shines through I think Armand needs to pain a family portrait and capture the boy's nature so these wonderful images will always be with him and Colin
  4. And so the challenges and romance might begin outside--Matty is now in the hands of a real player and not one of the guys Rusty invited The player will want Matty's v-card and will move to get it without Matty knowing how to say no or realizing what is going to happen Rusty is going to have to save Matty from the player--He is going to be worried and jealous--I hope Rusty does not have to get into a public fight to save Matty--More scandal might result and Xpress will have a field day
  5. Progress--David met Zhiv in the forest and they are getting along great. Many now friendly animals are around. Zhiv says he has lots to tell David. They are both very happy and naked. David's parents are going to fix him a vegan meal. David should be feeling great from all this support and acceptance Meanwhile trouble lurks with River and his family. River's brother received a costly spending ticket from David's dad. River is told by his dad to spy on David and find out if he pushed his dad to give the tickets I can see a confrontation coming. River's brother almost ran David off the road while speeding. River's dad wants to ask the Sheriff to cancel the tickets due to David's supposed interference. River is to get the evidence. River sexually plays with his friend's younger brother who likes it and is now blackmailing him to do more. River now has a painful secret --that he is gay and playing with a younger kid--who he wants to hide from others. His self-hate might push him to be violently anti-gay and David could be a target.
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    Chapter 19

    What a consequential , penultimate chapter. Knowing one more remains. I expect that some loose ends might still be tied up and that gives me hope We know why Swift acted and that he was thwarted--gratefully. Lucas was saved by Jase. Lucas was his 40th soul to save, not Macy. Lucas was told his mission was to guide Macy from now on and she would be a powerful force for good. Lucas has his role now. Jase left Lucas to recapture his life. The two lovers seem to be separated. I agree with CincyKris, it is bittersweet. Jase also deserves a happy life after his 40 missions. I so want to read the conclusion and your answers soon.
  7. Thank you for the warm reunion and successful ending. The six are happy with each other and will stay alive and pleased. The three who left first had already decided not to attack the cult. The three who followed them showed their care and love which impressed those they tried to save. All have grieved for Agrell and will keep her memory in their hearts. Rested, they are returning safely to their home. I am glad to hear you are writing a sequel. I want to read it.
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    Chapter 122

    Bouncer will come riding to the rescue, I bet. Things could get messy in the next chapter. Essel was captured by Mereval's forces. She is not in the building Garjah attacked and is facing Essell now. Great cliffhanger--
  9. David and his nature boy, Zhiv, will connect soon. He received a note from Zhiv carried to him by a crow. David is really looking forward to see him and will bring oatmeal as asked. We learn David is living true his calling and not eat meat and wear non-cruel produced or animal derived apparel. His father may have found out about horses reacted to cruelty by killing their owner. He might learn more about the reasons if he takes part with others searching for the horses. Others might know how the dead man treated his horses. But David is in trouble and does not realize it. His two bullies want to torment and sexually assault him. Jude is the cruel leader and River is the willing follower. If David is hurt and the two want to force to bend to their mean and depraved will, I hope his friends from nature defend him. David will get closer to Zhiv and them this weekend
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    Chapter 18

    Wow--that is a graduate school or crossword puzzle word--second to last or penultimate--Hmmm "Penultimate chapter on Thursday morning..." Thanks for the advance notice--We all want to know Jase and Lucas will survive--along with Macy
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    Chapter 18

    Oh God--They found the bastard, Detective Swift at Macy's old house. Swift fired at Jase and Lucas Jumped in front to take the bullet. He saved Jase. Is Lucas going to die ? Wiil he have time to check out and see if Macy is OK. If she is fine, Jase could save Lucas. Will Martinez shoot Swift now and wound him or kill him so Macy can be saved? Or-- Will Swift moved quickly to kill Jase and Martinez,
  12. A pleasant and revealing intro to the building tensions --David missed seeing his forest god but left him a gift of food and River realizes he likes boys and David is prized by him. He stares at David. Next weekend David will return to same area and move about naked again. David will be hoping to see the beautiful boy who seems to be one with nature and promised himself to be more direct with the forest god. River is becoming more interested in touching boys and may fix on David to the point of being a stalker and a person who will not take no for an answer. A beautiful naked David in the forest like he sees him in the gym shower will excite him. What will he feel and do if he sees David naked with the forest god?
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    Chapter 151

    Colin and Armand continue to take very good care of the boys, girls and those in the home. But things are complicated. Marcel has to go back to help out his sick brother. They enjoy fishing. A trip to see Santa is touching. Amand is going to share his painting duties with space at the orphanage and at their home. GG says someone will need Armand's help soon. Armand needs to consider how to balance life with Colin at their home and life with the kids at the orphanage. He will make the right decision, I am sure.
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    Higher 2

    Thanks, Carlos Hazday I am grateful I and others can find out next time a chapter is published what happens to energize Trevor to be a hero and face the main trouble of the story.
  15. They are safe so far and bonding over Agrell. Will there be new story following this one?
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    Higher 2

    Trevor is having a great time at Harvard--being very popular, performing well in his courses, dating a hot woman who satisfies him well, keeping company with good friends, being open to trans friends and running with wolf shifter college friends in a nearby pack's land. Meeting up with the sole female alpha shifter was a highlight. Trevor is now home from college in is his pack's lands. I wonder if trouble can stay away. I am suspicious. Will it happen while Trevor is acting as the beta for his alphas or will Shannon need serious help in Mexico on her dig?
  17. A promising start--- I am hooked. I like David and want to know more. Thanks
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    Chapter 17

    Jase figured it out---He is facing another powerful being like himself who wants Macy and is manipulating people. Detective Swift, if he is a detective, is his evil opponent He brings Lucas along to his view. He and Lucas do not know why he wants Macy. They are now going to search for Macy and Detective Swift. Has the evil guy left any clues with Martinez as to where he might reside?
  19. The first real test was met and Lahari protected them by destroying the fishermen. I hope the barkeep does not get worried and contact the authorities. I wonder what power Auntie Peg has since she relied on her attitude and voice to push the men away. Let us hope she really is a messiah and not someone who might betray them.
  20. What mess ! I hope the three have not left on a revenge attack on the cult. I imagine the cult can protect itself and the three will be in serious danger I hope the next chapter clarifies the situation. Why are the messiahs in the tower not targeted?
  21. What a happy, exciting Thanksgiving meal and festivities that culminated with the key people spending the night in bed with each other. The sons are going to be trained by the generals and the dangerous sword dance will be taught to Shan. The young men are being prepared for their future roles. Jihan continues to scheme to prevent war. I hope he is successful.
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    To Catch a Thief

    So far commentators think Gideon knows he is being followed. He is too smart and skilled to be fooled by a new vampire, Kavan. He might appreciate that Kavan and crew are not yet interfering. Gideon is honoring his family and their deaths by vampires though his searches and ash disposal. He has one remaining task in Venice--it seems he wants to kill an ancient and powerful vampire who is connected to the cruel deaths of his family. Now that Kavan has an idea of Gideon's goal, he needs to get his sword to him and project him in a fight against the ancient vampire and his minions..
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    Chapter 150

    Many transitions for Colin, Armand and their family and extended friends. It was touching to see Nonna leave and know her imprint lasts. A new routine is set--travels to Europe and travels from Europe. Friends and bonds strengthen.
  24. I agree--where do the shifts go now ? Will they seek out Messiah's and attack them? Will the Principal Messiah lead another attack on the shifts to kill the remaining ones? I do not think the conflict is over.
  25. The five remembered and celebrated Agrell's life and her short time in freedom. "For Agrell, being away from the cult, it was like an entire new life. The five celebrated her through the afternoon and past sundown, and as supper approached, Theolan insisted that they all remain together for the meal." Now they must move on. The Messiah's failed in killing all the shifts. What will they do next?
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