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mogwhy

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  1. loved it and loved that it was subtitled!
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    Chapter 5

    many you pack so much story into such short chapters. glad i'm reading after the story is complete. Binge Reading at its best
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    Together, We Sail

    thank you Parkerall your kind words and support have meant the world to me.
  4. sounds good. never change Wesley, love you just the way you are!
  5. i get notifications every time one of my stories updates, but Ace, i can't jump at it in that moment. i need to get my head ready for the rollar coaster ride. this chapter both broke my heart and made it sing. i, too had a "Wesley moment"
  6. he spoke so many eloquent words, but these are some of the best. i can only hope i did my best to spread his message, especially to my son
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    Together, We Sail

    thanks dughlas! your words and support have meant the world to me
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    Together, We Sail

    thanks Gary! two sides to a relationship your words and support have meant the world to me
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    Together, We Sail

    thanks caz! your words and support have meant the world to me
  10. OMG! i want to strangle you right now. i was so enjoying all the warm fuzzies and you pushed me off the cliff! i love the "underdogs" of thee Olympic and always want to watch those events. i especially remember watching Eric Moussambani Malonga, a swimmer from Equatorial Guinea during the 2000 Summer Games
  11. This is a rough, tragic story to be sure. It is hard on a soul that is for sure, but i am glad i finished it. Every now again, I actually ponder the thought of rereading it....but, well I still can remember the 1st telling. Ace will take you on a soul bruising ride with this one.. I read it back in 2016 as each chapter was posted. This one sticks with you.
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  12. beautiful! transported me back to midnights in the cold of a Michigan winter as i watched the stars through swirling haze of snowflakes. thank you.
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    Tangled Puppet

    thanks deville!courage comes more from facing your future with the past you have than just facing your past
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    Tangled Puppet

    thanks Gary! i never ask that the Universe remove my struggles, but grant me the strength to deal with them
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    Tangled Puppet

    thanks caz!
  16. 1. Daylight hides the brokenness that is me under the deep waters of my mind. A small sound escapes into the darkness. The nightmare starts. You hold me as my sleep spins, out of control. Thrashing, screaming at phantoms of a past I can not escape. There, on the horizon is a light. My soul reaches out… 2. I will hold you when the nightmare that is your past, rips through your sleep Like a hurricane that renders ships to matchsticks. As you fight your unseen mons
  17. wow A, just wow. you just get better in storytelling. especially when you let it flow. now feed the reader *cheep, cheep*
  18. hey, i've told you all along your writing keeps getting better and not just because you now have an editor and beta readers. i know me well enough to know, i'll keep reading
  19. Shadows of the past Reaching out to spin the present. Turn this way, no that way. Sometimes pushing Sometimes pulling Occasional shoving you under So many shadows of the past blocking out the future. Where does the past end and the future begin, When you are a tangled puppet of the present?
  20. yea, i figure they'll hit a rough patch or 6, but i still can hope for the HEA. i still mad at about the hockey player. even if i see why it ended like that.
  21. you know, i have a love/hate relationship with you, Ace. i'been with since you started posting and your writing just keeps getting better. right now i feel you are dangling a carrot trying to convince me that i need to keep reading. i tell myself, "i don't need to read this story" then i binge read 5 chapters like did today. here hoping for the boys!
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    Chapter 12

    and you love it, don't you?
  23. mogwhy

    A Year

    lord, give the world a heart attack, would you? two of me?
  24. mogwhy

    A Year

    thank you @dughlas! may your year get better and better for you and yours
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    A Year

    thank you @Caz Pedroso! i'm glad you love it.
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