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  1. mogwhy
    i'm more worried about Nate than Mike escorting Ryder
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    Weakened Bones

    mogwhy commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Weakened Bones

    a poet soul saw a vision in the soul and the poet's words soared.you painted a vivid picture in my head. i can almost feel the cold and snow on my skin. beautifully done
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    Epilogue

    mogwhy commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Epilogue

    This was the story that brought me to GA. I'm still holding onto hope that there will be a Book 3. Maybe Zef and Poundstone's story, as thhey seem fated. lots of foreshadowing. Even Stan's story--his life in the DeSoto Pack and his time on the run and meeting Buck.
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    Chapter 28

    mogwhy commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Chapter 28

    every time i read this story, i still love the line, "stupid coat"
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    Another Patient

    mogwhy commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Another Patient

    i was thinking Teddy was the other patient. i think he needs a bit of counselling too.both maybe older but they are still stuck in the past
  6. mogwhy
    i like your comments. i always wish i could write comments as well as you do. i try to write something more than just i enjoyed that. so i end up with i enjoyed that because...although i did tell one author i wanted to strangle him, but i did tell him why he just laughed
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    i guess i didn't need a strong stomach as i was a bio-chem major a MSU
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    A New Step

    mogwhy commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in A New Step

    i'm so happy to see a new chapter to this story with hints of more to come!
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    science and lust, you mix them well! not sure why i need a strong stomach though...
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    i like this version better. it is more realistic and give Glenn more depth as a character and not a doormat. now we need an Epilog...do they marry?
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    Apple Green

    mogwhy reviewed northie's story in Fiction

    This is a wonderful and very unique tale of an unexpected gift. Love the mix of the new technology with old. Took me on a road to an end i did not see coming.
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    personally, I think it needs a bit more investigation, but yes it smacks of cheating. My son need accommodations in taking test, and it was stated and repeated often that staff were not allowed to give answer or indicate if the answer the student gave was right or wrong.
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    wenmale64 brings up a good point, control. as Parents, Don/Sue gain more control over Robbie and then could send he to one of those barbaric "retraining" centers.
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    Chapter 4.2

    mogwhy commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 4.2

    don't worry Caz, even if you miss a week, i'll wait. you post frequently i'm just a greedy little reader *cheep, cheep*
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    Executors of a trust are governed by i different set of standards than parents. at least that is my understanding. executors are audited more closely
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    one thing that struck me was the money thing. doesn't Robbie have a trust fund? if Don and Sue are his parents they will have control over it. it don't trust Don and Sue is too wishy washy. when i adopted my son, they went on and on and about all the financial parts that go along with adoption. maybe Canada is different
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    Chapter 4.2

    mogwhy commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 4.2

    oh no, more trouble they don't need! love the chapter, love the story, just hate they are so short.
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    Chapter 19

    mogwhy commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Chapter 19

    just so you know, i'd love another book with these characters
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    Chapter 19

    mogwhy commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Since this story is an older one, not sure the author will see this comment. i love this story, but this is my 4 time reading it and i still can't figure out who the second man was. or even if there was a second man, or did Gabe just imagine there was someone with Darth
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    @JayT and @Aceinthehole i may not personally like how a book ends, but i'm not the author. And even i can see WHY they end the way they do. even appreciate their ending. just keep writing.
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    Twist of Fate

    mogwhy commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in Twist of Fate

    *sigh* dang Ace. you must love roller coasters, the taller the better. i got the safety bar down and all strapped in so let's roll.
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    This is a slice of reality of broken people. The ups and downs of growing up. Well written, but it is another soul-bruising offering from an author known for them. How Ace can so eloquently write both the bully's life, and living with mind shattering level of depression is is miraculous to me. You will need stock in a tissue company if you are prone to crying. Ace's writing makes me care too much about the characters he writes to not finish the story.
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    yep. pretty much went where i thought it would, but hope it didn't. at this point there is still hope, but i have no illusions about my version of a HEA. i can only hope Teddy doesn't lose Ryder again, and that Ryder can find his life.
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    Intimacies

    mogwhy commented on mogwhy's story chapter in Intimacies

    so sorry, i just saw this comment today. coming from you Parker, tis high praise i'll treasure, thanks
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    fully aware of that @JayT
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