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I think Derek realises how harsh and unfair to Will he was, specially because although Will at the time didn't give Derek the answer he deserved, he explained it to Theo very clearly. The fact that Will is still having dinner with Derek shows that he puts the others' needs first, he probably hás no desire to socialise with Derek. The guys love for others is very beautiful, they are amazing teens.
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Nice chapter, but from the previous one, Jeff didn't answer who is John? My guess is that he was the other cowboy that help his ancestor in the ranch, one of the men in the painting, since Jeff and Paul were "roleplaying" at the time
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What @droughtquakesaid. It would be really sad if an ancient underground egiptian city was lost. Hope they can return to it. The Others were not in Amasis underground, but there are probably some still in Africa.
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My Name's Riley Walker
Sweetlion commented on Aceinthehole's story chapter in My Name's Riley Walker
Nice, wonderful way to make all stories touch. Glad to see Eli doing to Riley what Aidan did for him. -
Chapter 59 Christmas Cards
Sweetlion commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 59 Christmas Cards
Love it, thanks Gary- 86 comments
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I kind of disagree with you @Wesley8890. Stephen did the exact thing a lifelong best friend should do, trying to protect your friend because you care about him. On the other end Marcus also did what he should, make Stephen aware that he recognise his friend love but that he is entering a dangerous situation with his eyes open. The one I feel for his Andy, so much inside conflict.
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Nice chapter, common fears were the best way to bond, better than anything anyone could say to Ryder, he could relate and understand his new brother. The desire to protect someone more fragile than him will do wonders to Ryder, we find strengh when it is someone se care about
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Very funny chapter, live Stan and Mark. Btw the problema off the anglican priest with the gay party could be personalx but the Anglicans in England are quite open when compared to other christians, they have gay bishops and women bishops (Just a curiosity, I am not religious)
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and I do like how it ended
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No please! I want to see if after their good intimacy moments, Seth reacts better to Kris, I think he might be stronger now that he knows Liam supports him. And yeah, want to meet the crazy brother
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Another great story. The characters are so crazy and funny
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Another great story @Krista, although I agree with some old comente that the story seems almost unfinished, you end it when some many problems and changes were going to happen in the guys life. Did you end up writing small stories about them as you said? Congratulations, now going to check other stories, maybe your first ones
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Don't worry I will be kind😀 But you can always edital them again if you are not happy with the final work😜😜 Just so you know, I am in the Christian story now, and really liking it so far😊 that should keep me for some days, but I am still one of those damn readers that will come with a torch and pitchfork if you take too much time until the next Best Year chapter😂😂😂
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Chapter 72 Better than the Best Thing Ever
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 72 Better than the Best Thing Ever
You are right @Timothy M., I am half expecting Amy to ask Robbie if Nathan is his boyfriend in a couple of chapters -
Congratulations, very story. I'm already following the Best Year and I read the force of natureza, and now on my vacations I decided to read all your stories. I really liked Corey, he was a sweetheart. I almost wished for a more hea ending, but thats because I am a hopeless romantic, I guess the idea of ending the story in the "begining" off their relationship is kind of cool, leaves all the possibilities open. Good work (now let's check another of your stories😀)
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I really like the humour of your characters. Looking forward to the next chapter
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Chapter 72 Better than the Best Thing Ever
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 72 Better than the Best Thing Ever
Love this story but I was also expectante more development um this chapter. Daniel nas been a nice guy so far, I don't expect him to turn now, but it is true that his reaction was quite strong. Maybe due to Nathan being os best friend, even if he didn't have any sexual interest in him, be might be feeling replaced, and affraid that Nathan and Robbie relationship will affect their friendship. -
Very beautiful, love the surprise wedding! And yeah, really like how Lee reacts to the love that everyone gives him, he os not affraid to express himself anymore 😀
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Not so sure. Although he seems straight, st first I also thought that Mike could be jealous, but then one statement puzzled me: “It’s happened before, it’ll happen again.” Mike shrugged. “You always try to commit social suicide, but at the last second come crawling back to me. This time won’t be any different.” What does he mean? Is Mike talking about Teddy coming out, when he stood by him, or did Teddy actually tryed to befriend other social outcasts, ending up hurting everyone? That had me thinking that maybe Mike is not a closed gay, but an overzealous friend
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A strange guy on the bathroom is just weird 😀 but the story is so funny, I can't wait to are if we will try to get the clothes before Devon notices it. I think he is thinking the worst due to his own past experiences, maybe Devon doesn't want to bang and leave
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Chapter 58 - Call Me, Maybe
Sweetlion commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 58 - Call Me, Maybe
So happy to see a new chapter, I miss the guys from the earlier stories. -
and I finally arrive to one of your in progress stories. Now that the assassin is over, I hope this is the one you are going to post regularly, it is such a good story, so different from what I normally read here I like that the plot is not so much about their relationship, and that their love happens on the background to a fantasy setory. Now commenting the actual story, Tai could have told more to the Empress, that Midori save the Prince life several times, and that they love each other. Divisions between the Empress and the Prince is the last thing the Empire need.
