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  1. Sweetlion

    Chapter 10

    It's Dad's young love! Now os he rating Me Wright (double bad for Dad) or os he just a friend/ family (lucky Dad). Cannot Wait to fins out!!
  2. Sweetlion

    November 2014

    Agree with all of you. Yeah!!!! Finally, they are perfect for each other. A little bit of jealousy was the final push needed. Great chapter Carlos.
  3. Sweetlion

    Chapter 3

    Great chapter for the boys, cool that they recognize and accept their feelings. I was also Cherry for mom and dad to get together after mourning, but Dad wants a guy too. And Another William, is that the reason for Will name?
  4. Nice chapter, fun and sexy but still with their fears and insecurities. Nathan still cannot completely let go, but they are still teenagers after all. The last part with Nicola was strange, maybe it was a start of a better relationship between then. Good Job!
  5. Sweetlion

    Chapter 22

    Wonderful chapter, this long we can really dive in the characters phyche =) Nice to see both of them more balanced, Jackson more calm and mature (I think what Matt and Aiden did would win them a punch from the "old" Jackson) and Luke more sure of what he wants. They need to talk to the rest of their friends and with Jackson's family, Luke might need a place to stay for a while, being 18, I can imagine "Cindzilla" going tottaly crazy on him, hehehe.
  6. Sweetlion

    Prologue

    Have being waiting to hear from Liam, he was such a nice and sweet guy. Alek is a cool guy too, but maybe he needs to grow on his own first. Hope Liam finds his happiness elsewhere, he reserves an open guy. Nice start
  7. Nice chapter, sexy but cute. They are both soo nervous =) Robbie is in a hair trigger and Nathan seems worried. Hope he can let go now after their conversation and understanding that both feel the same about each, and are able the enjoy themselves before someone arrives.
  8. Nice start! The boys are really close, it is cute how Will takes Care of Liam after the tragic news. Good job
  9. I agree with LadyDe that the Earth Mother doesn't make mistakes, but the elders also told that not everyone finds their mate, sometimes it might be to late. I feel sorry for Tilly, but we will see if Kellar can cure Logan. And a Keeper? Are this the ones who are born with the pack memories? Do they only have their pack memories or it depends on the Magic dust/colours, will She get Morningstar memories if the merge the packs? I agree with CG, if Vega is even worse than Morningstar, then that might be the only solution, a couple of Earth mates will not be enough. And a Healer, a Keeper and a Seer with 8 or 9 couples of Earth mates, that seems a healthy pack to me =) And maybe the hunters are not new ones, but the same that they killed already, they do drive around in their Monster truck, and the packs are at driving distance. So many questions... Good work Gary
  10. Just binge read this story in a couple of days. Really cool, I hope you continue to write. Since parte if your own real story I don't know what will happen, but hope Robbie and Nathan stay together, they seem really cute, and they reserve something good in there live (yeah I know that highschool romances tend to be short but a guy can hope, I actually know a couple that are together since 15). They will have to tell Daniel soon though, I don't see how can they hide from him, but with his loyalty to is best friend and his new brother, I don't imagine that he will have a problem.
  11. Sweetlion

    Longing

    So happy they are finally together
  12. Sweetlion

    Chapter 28

    Nice chapter, slowly Chris is growing and start being Derrick's friend. Now he just have to do with Mitch what he wants Derrick to do to him, stop talking about Derrick all the time and mend the friendship with Mitch. I dont know when the story is going to end, but I hope they all end up in a better place, specially Derrick and his mum, they reserve a bit of luck.
  13. Sweetlion

    Chapter 9

    *Sigh*
  14. Sweetlion

    Chapter 26

    Really amazing story, I just binge read it all! It has the quality better than some fanntasy books I read. Hope Luca is not dead, only injured
  15. Sweetlion

    Chapter 7

    Wt???? Almost one year, and no one tried to reach him after being abandoned a boyfriend, cheated and badly treated by his brother and with a friend that didn't speak with him at the time? And Jase has the guts to suggest that Tracy was a bad guy for leaving after all of them abandoning him? Tracy doesn't even seem to know if Callen and Jase are together and raising Cory. Which by the way might be a really nice kid, but calling Tracy uncle when he almost doesn't know him? And what's with Jase leaving young Benny with Tracy without explaining the situation? It doesn't matter if Alex is in a new relationship or if my crazy teory that after the incident he had to leave suddently his house to adopt a baby from a dying relative. None of them have cell phones? I can almost imagine Tracy to go directly to Alex and push him in the face before asking everyone to leave, he is the only relative after all. He is to good of a guy so probably wouldn't do that but they all deserve it, even Callen if he wasn't in the hospital already. And Callen is the worst of them, lying and badly treating his brother after saying he was the most important person in his live some chapters ago. How could he abandon his brother for almost one year without going after him and apologise? I understand that your sexual orientation is normally your own business, but its stops to be when your only family is your younger gay brother, that is just lying by omission. And I guess that someone don't want to chose between family and friends, but sometimes you cannot get what you want, and if having to chose between his brother and his friend who hurt and abandon Tracy, being that they even take care of Benny, I guess we know where Callen is. Sorry for my rambling, but this chapter really got me going. Practical question: was Tracy just "playing dead" for one year or did he had his brother sent him his tools and started his life elsewhere? I almost wish he build a life elsewhere,it doesn't matter how many apologies and excuses they have after so long, I really cannot understand how their relation can be as before.
  16. Sweetlion

    Chapter 6

    how does Sacha even know all this stuff? they just move recently...
  17. Sweetlion

    Chapter 20

    Nice! looking forward to te next chapter! Although they are a religious family I am starting to really like Luke dad, in the end he seems to really love his son and want him happy. I believe he might even support Luke when/if he admit that he gay. And Jackson was a bit crazy in the beginning of the story, but he is a really nice guysince he meet Luke, he started balance his fun with some responsability. Hope the guys end up together happily =)
  18. Sweetlion

    Epilogue

    Beautiful story! You can tell us how amazing they will be as parents, so much love in those two:)
  19. Sweetlion

    Chapter 28

    I am with Parker. From the moment I found that Jason was going out with is friends from "crazy" times I was afraid that something like this could happen. Just hope that after running away for crying in the heat of the moment, Corey gives Jason a chance to explain. If we saw the whole thing he will see that Jason was the one that stop the kiss and turned away.
  20. Sweetlion

    The Promise

    Cool chapter, they are getting close as friends, just hope that hornyness does not ruin their possible relationship. But they are doing great, and it's nice to see that even when drinking, CJ is aware of his surroundings
  21. Great chapter, was missing some of your stories. Best
  22. Sweetlion

    Requiem

  23. Sweetlion

    Worlds Apart

    Nice chapters. For full Disclosure I am an European living in Boston. I understand CJ's arguments on why the laws don't change, but have ti agree with Owen. In the End of the day, gun violence is a characteristic problem of the US compared to other countrys.
  24. Sweetlion

    Chapter 25

    Super cool, everyday they mature together. Love how they are learning and commiting to each other.
  25. Sweetlion

    A Matter of Taste

    Really nice start chapters. Hope you continue the story soon, can't wait
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