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Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
Sweetlion commented on Cia's story chapter in Mine! Part Two Chapter Forty
Great story, very interesting plot, and two very sweet couples -
It was so fun to read. Awkward and embarrassing family moments, the start of friendship, the seeds of lust in the young men. Very interesting start, let's see how they hit off and what life will throw at them
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Yes and I actually didn't like that part, I know they are young but 15 is that age when you should start learning about relationships, specially because ir was not the first. But even if I think he was a stupid boy, he lied/omitted the past, Brandon is doing it at the moment. I actually hope it was a misunderstanding that they solve quickly. While I like this story very much, didn't really feel like going back 5 books. But actually like the chapter, nevertheless
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Damn Brandon is an idiot! I agree with what everyone sair, how that could be a set up, but I still remember Brandon on the hill, demanding a new relationship with truth. Hidding stuff is not it, they are not really kids anymore, almost 16... Hope the whole drama don't start again, Billy and Brandon would be crushed... Intense chapter
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Wow, I was really missing this story. Nice chapter
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Ow you edited and changed it? Cool, now I have a reason to read it again.
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AHAH! It was you! I read this in other site before, totally awesome story!
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Very interesting start, not a typical plot. One is older and hierarchically superior, other younger but physically stronger. Can't wait to see how it will roll
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Chapter 79 The Five-Foot-Six-Inch Giant
Sweetlion commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 79 The Five-Foot-Six-Inch Giant
Have to love Nathan! The way he stood by Robbie side was the most mature way to fight Don bigotry. I agree that without being disrespectful (that could put him in more troubles than solutions) Robbie should have forced the issue on behaviour at home, he should aim to have nothing more and nothing less than the straight kids. And I still don't understand why he didn't bring his relationship with Tom, that would have shaken Don's stupid argument of "you were not gay, you are confused with the changes in your life". I can't imagine his face if Robbie was like "hello!! i was having sex with boys before I even knew you exist" -
Yes!!! not because they had sex (although it was a hot moment) but because they are stoping that strange (but lovely) mating dance, and that risks with each other. Ian has a wonderful heart and someone dear to me since William's Love. Can't wait to see more about these guys... And definitely anxious about the meet the family moment
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Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
Sweetlion commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Dane and other family
Isn't that what all kids need? A beach, a friend and a dog? -
Elias Cameron Franklin
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Elias Cameron Franklin
Great chapter, I don't remember what is Cam's work, but I imagine it would be hard to be separated from Ian. On the other hand, they are close enough to see each other on weekends, I remember when I was a kid my father worked was far form where we lived, and he would drive every Friday 300 km to come home for weekends -
This is such a beautiful story, with amazing characters. Kevin bitterness but acceptance what he got dealt with is touching, and the way he tries to find positive things friends to move on. My mixed feelings with the story are good, emotional ones. Sometimes I wish time passed faster, so he can learn how their lives will be, how their relationship will develop, how Miles parents will react. Other times I wish that time would freeze in that moment, when all of them are happy, with no worries of the world. great job so far @ColumbusGuy
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This was a great story.. congratulations
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Great ending, I like how Cal learned how a family should feel like.
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The Backstory (Part One)
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part One)
Very cool start, Cam as doubts and fears, but still risk it. Let's see what this story Will tell us -
The Backstory (Part Two)
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Two)
Gay pass is amazing... not so sure if it was a straight pass. Although I normally I am not one for love at the first day, this was very sweet. -
The Backstory (Part Three)
Sweetlion commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Backstory (Part Three)
Oh God! I just read the whole backstory! It was totally awesome, they way they have been supported by those around them. eww for prom night, lol I imagine the next year will be hard for them, being apart due to college, a baby... From the chapter one it is still no obvious if the mother of the baby is ok. We will see, I hope Ian and Cam stay together. -
It was either that or more death and caos, so I took and educated guess... and @Bndmetl is your editor, and we all know at least his stories are full of sweet characters in the end.... elementary Watson *does sagely Sherlock Holmes look*
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Cool, I have been thinking of comment your stories, but end up forgeting if I don't do it immediately. This chapter was very sweet, and Cal, although a bit rough, is a nice guy that deserves the redemption, the love and the care he seeks.
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Humm, I think Dustin and Alex Will really need each other
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I feel you, about love. The love for others, strangers... Although I admit that contrary to strangers, to people that wrong someone, or abuse, I could probably live with indifference, but I am truthful to myself, deep down I would hate them.
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Didn't want put a like, as there are no things to like in that feeling. But wouldn't put a sad reaction, afraid you thought I didn't like your writings. So my only comment is how I like the way you beautifully described such sad feelings.
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Thank you
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Thanks, I haven't read all your prompts yet, but as soon as I saw an Andy and Marcus one, had to read it. It was very funny.
