jkwsquirrel
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Jake definitely takes after his father, even when he knows better.
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Thank you! I'm glad to do it. The comments might just be the best thing about the story! I love the different perspectives.
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Exploration is a part of growing up!
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You're killing me Smalls! lol
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Definitely. "If it can't be done right it's not worth doing" kind of thinking is a sign of perfectionism run amok. Kyle definitely has that kind of vibe about him.
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You know when I break out the Palmer Park pond something serious is about to go down!
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Yay! DQ, good to hear from you! My grandmother was the string that held that side of the family together, and my dad was the string of the other side. If not for facebook, I'd have lost touch with much of the family. I thought my mother was holding my immediate family together, but it turned out to be my sister, as even after mom's death she still holds us together.
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I consider it a story with six parts, a sequel and a midquel. And now, a related yet different story! 😃
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lol! Always leave them wanting more, as the old saying goes!
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Thank you! It's been fun to live in someone else's head for a while. I'm very happy with how it turned out.
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Thank you! Good place to wrap things up!
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The world is ahead of them. Who knows what the possibilities are that lie ahead? Onward toward the horizon!
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I like that Jake has a little bit of fire in him too.
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Aw, thanks! You're right, it could have gone badly. Maybe Jake sensed it wouldn't.
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Yeah, the story kind of wrapped itself up for me! Any further plot complication would have just felt tacked on for me. I loved Kyle's dad's reaction too.
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Compared to my usual zany characters? Maybe so! lol
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Thanks! Moving in the right direction!
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Your sense the end was near was right! The story kind of finished itself for me.
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I thought so too!
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I think we get used to life doing that to us. Just when things are going well, YANK! But here in story land, we can have our happy ending!
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He grew up a lot along the way!
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Thank you! I appreciate the kind words!
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“Wake up Jake,” Danny whispered to me as I lay sleeping on his bed in his room after a sleepover. “Why does the sun have to come up so early in the morning in July?” I asked. I had just spent my two weeks with dad and was looking forward to getting back into marching band shape in the coming weeks. We were having a Disney theme for the upcoming year, my senior year. I couldn’t wait to start school. The sooner school started the sooner we would graduate. Danny walked around to the other
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