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Thank you! It's been fun to live in someone else's head for a while. I'm very happy with how it turned out.
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Thank you! Good place to wrap things up!
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The world is ahead of them. Who knows what the possibilities are that lie ahead? Onward toward the horizon!
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I like that Jake has a little bit of fire in him too.
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Aw, thanks! You're right, it could have gone badly. Maybe Jake sensed it wouldn't.
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Yeah, the story kind of wrapped itself up for me! Any further plot complication would have just felt tacked on for me. I loved Kyle's dad's reaction too.
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Compared to my usual zany characters? Maybe so! lol
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Thanks! Moving in the right direction!
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Your sense the end was near was right! The story kind of finished itself for me.
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I thought so too!
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I think we get used to life doing that to us. Just when things are going well, YANK! But here in story land, we can have our happy ending!
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He grew up a lot along the way!
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Thank you! I appreciate the kind words!
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“Wake up Jake,” Danny whispered to me as I lay sleeping on his bed in his room after a sleepover. “Why does the sun have to come up so early in the morning in July?” I asked. I had just spent my two weeks with dad and was looking forward to getting back into marching band shape in the coming weeks. We were having a Disney theme for the upcoming year, my senior year. I couldn’t wait to start school. The sooner school started the sooner we would graduate. Danny walked around to the other
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Thanks everybody. I think this chapter kind of wrapped everything up nicely, so what I'll do is write up one little epilogue chapter and call it a day on this one. Sorry I've been off the grid for a few days. I needed to do some healing.
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I awoke in the morning alone in Kyle’s bed, still naked, yet covered with a blanket. I sat up and looked around the room. There was no sign of Kyle. I stood up and stretched my arms and legs. My backside hurt. Kyle was bigger than Danny, that’s for sure. I looked around and found my underwear on the floor and slipped them back on. I was about to head to the bathroom when I stopped at his desk. There was a paper on top of the laptop that hadn’t been there the night before. Curiosity got the bette
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Jake is no push over, that's for sure. At least he didn't tell Kyle's dad to GFY like he did to Ryan's dad. I love snappy dialogue, as you can tell. One of my favorites was Jake's mom's saying "Twice" during their conversation about Jake cheating on Ryan with Danny. It just struck me as funny that she would throw that back at him like that, and how it frustrates Jake.
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Yes, things moved quickly in the middle section there. Kyle grew more comfortable as the week went on. I'm sure he wouldn't consider it a "hook up." I don't think Jake stayed overnight thinking anything would happen. I think Jake came a long way in this chapter. He wasn't as aggressive as he was with Ryan, he let Kyle open up on his own terms.
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Sometimes there's a family member who holds the whole thing together. Pull the string and the whole things comes unraveled. (Hey wait a minute! )
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We know Jake likes to be held because it makes him feel safe. Usually, it's Danny holding him from behind, this time it's both guys facing and holding onto each other. Jake has just as much to offer Kyle as Kyle does for Jake.
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There's a lot they can learn from each other, for sure!
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Poor Jake! lol
