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I don't know which is hotter Ilya or the gun talk. There were a few grammar errors but I'm not one to judge harshly on that seeing how my stories have a few or more itself. I'm relieved that tom isn't the cause of the fire.
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Good chapter. Provided insight to the deceased. Worth waiting for
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Great start. Always liked the scarecrow.can't wait for more
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Drunk hookups in a bar after a breakup been there done that. I love the I'm so sorry text.
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An intriguing start to the story can't wait for more
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Another great chapter. I can't help feeling its almost time for another guest to stop by the castaway hotel.
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Finally someone Catches them. Don't blame Marty for snappinh
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I think it might be bipolar disorder. Horrible mood swings, anger. I have an episode like that once a week so I can get how Brett was. However, that was no excuse for saying those things to his mother. Even in one of my most hateful rants I had never called my mother any of those names. I took a little enjoyment when jen slapped Brett. The good thing is Brett didn't get physical once you pass that threshold there is no coming back it will always be in your mind. The title was excellently appropriate.
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Loved this chapter my favorite character has to be Maria
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What Happily Ever After Really Looks Like
Wesley8890 commented on mitchelll's story chapter in What Happily Ever After Really Looks Like
It sucks sometimes but it happens. Sometimes you fall out of love with one person and into with another. Its heartbreaking to think about and even worse to go through. I know how he feels to be that heartbroken and just walk away. Chances are though its hurting reed more so because he has to make the decision someone is going to be hurt its unavoidable but inevitable. Can't wait for the next chapter. -
Another great chapter!
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What is that bitch in law done now. I'm glad josh is so understanding. Alex and jenny seem like great people.Jenny would definitely be the chick I'd hang with. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Excuse the the language but god damn it not another one. These cliffhangers are killing me. I love this stpory though. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Ah Ricky is still at it, something's never change. The saran wrap isd a great one, although not for the one cleaning up. Looking forward for more of the curries.
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What an incompetent ass! I hate small town nepotism. Can't wait for the next chapter
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Wesley And Seamus By: Wesley Lewis Chapter 4: Comatose WES’ POV “Why is it so dark? Even better, where am I?” I stared at the abyss that I suddenly woke up in. “Hello?” “Is anybody here?” Nothing, absolutely nothing but an echo and darkness. As I look around I can see a small light off in the distance and begin to walk towards it. Slowly, it begins to get brighter and as I close in I can see a small figure of a girl. The girl seems familiar but I can’t place her. I get closer
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Love love loved this chapter! Tony actually growled I love that.
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Wow poor Noah. I don't know who's worst the so called king or landon. Thank the dirty for ms Sarah.can't wait for more!
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A great chapter. I know some people aren't gonna like this but.... Brett showed a maturity in this chapter I didn't think he had. I never expected him to come clean about the pot. But at least he did. Where does billy get off snooping around Brett's room. I wish billy would see that maybe Dustin doesn't deserve his friendship. That little psycho is gonna end up in juvie.
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Another great chapter. Poor dad. I hope he and bill can rekindle what they had.
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I just bet Tom had something to do with that fire. Love the deputy that is exactly the kind of stunts country boys play on others.can't wait for the next chapter
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This is a great story so far and enjoying it immensely. Love how mom whispered I know.Cindzilla is something else thank goodness for henry.
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I am loving this story so far. Jeff is a great guy. He's smart he knows how to get his man , his kid. If you can get the kid too like that's about ten points in your favor. I'd watcvh out for tom. In my opinion something's off about him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Dustin is a little psycho. Brett is an asshole. Billy is...well billy.I feel bad for him. Dustin needs help.
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Glad you're enjoying the story so far.
