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    Regrowth

    KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Regrowth

    The build-up is getting intense!! Something has to give pretty soon. I too believe Natalie will be playing cupid during the turkey dinner !! Another great chapter Wayne. Thanks!!
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    Comfortable Lies

    KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Comfortable Lies

    Well being the hopeless romantic that I am - I will hold on to the thought that Troy and Grant will eventually recognize the synergy developing between them and allow this to ease Tony's grief over losing a mate and enlighten Grant's emotional naivety!! Together they can begin to help each other. Great chapter Wayne! Thanks.
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    Great chapter Geoff and Droughtquake did nail who the donor match would be !! It was a Kleenex chapter BUT a good one nonetheless. Thank you.
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    Nate

    KayDeeMac commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Nate

    Yes, I shed a few tears also. We all thought it was going to be dad who was in trouble - but or no - you had to pick the youngest!! No wonder you said it was a tough chapter to write. I can only imagine! I believe gifted writers, such as you Geoff, develop far deeper feelings for your characters than we do as just the readers. All in all its a great story - let's get Nate back in the game
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    Days in the Sun 1

    KayDeeMac commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Days in the Sun 1

    I just hope Leo will keep the knowledge secret!
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    Revelations 2

    KayDeeMac commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Revelations 2

    Just to reinforce - The story does flow very well. I am enjoying the build-up and hopefully Dad will not freak when he meets with them and the Governor!!
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    Encounters 2

    KayDeeMac commented on gabz2000's story chapter in Encounters 2

    Another good chapter. Not usually my genre for novels but your writing skills have captivated me. I'm hooked!! Thank you!
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    I agree! I have read some of his works and he is amazing.
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    Well I'll have to send Tim a thank you as well!!
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    Well done!! I am totally happy with all the boys - well maybe not Giles! It seems more and more that his "true" self is being brought out. Hopefully Rob will see the light soon! Looking forward to the next series. Oh, I must say thank you for the new word "redolence"! I love learning new words and that one was new to me. Pheromones I knew but not redolence. Thanks! Great writing Brayon!
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    Well perhaps its Adam's sense that the relationship between Robert & Giles is not going to work out that he is cock-blocking his son's BF. Perhaps an overprotective father?? He is still fairly new to this father role. I too have gotten a soft spot in my heart for Travis and Jeremy. They are both adorable. I see a much brighter future for both Travis and Uncle/Dad Bryce. Anyway - another excellent chapter Brayon. Thank you!
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    Another great chapter. You packed a lot in this one and my emotions were all over the place. I also believe there is going to be a connection between Jeremy and Travis. And perhaps - just perhaps - something good will come to Bryce as well. :)))
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    I also agree - a chapter full of raw emotions that made us all truly feel the pain for the boys. But, I do have to say, I got a really good laugh also. Bank of America is NOT one of my favorite institutions so when I learned that Jeremy was making his deposits on a BofA golf towel I nearly fell off my chair laughing!! Thanks for that - it made my day.
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    I totally agree - what is the point to further degrade the relationship Jeremy had with his parents. Another great beginning to the continuing TC's. You truly are a gifted writer - enabling the readers to actually feel the emotions of the characters. Thank you Brayon !!!
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    My Son

    KayDeeMac reviewed Brayon's story in Fiction

    Excellent story! I really enjoyed getting to know Adam and Rob.
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    Probably one of the best chapters I've recently read. My hat is off to you Brayon!!! I can relate to the father - son interactions because I have been there! Absolutely love this this story. Thank you!
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    Just got here BUT I'm already hooked! Having lived with my husband in the Tampa area it's all very familiar. Great story writing so far!! Thank you!
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    A good chapter - the pieces finally fell together about Mark's home life. I bet Robbie's new song will top the charts!!
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    I have to agree with Arran.
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    If Rachel is as smart as everybody says - she probably already has some suspicions. I'm really enjoying this story!!
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    Well I believe Mark has finally admitted he's truly in love with Robbie. Now to deal with Rachel - the month's separation will help!! Great chapter unilive
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    Well French guy your story has already captured me and I too am new to it so will enjoy the new edited version. Great beginning!! Thank you for sharing.
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    Truth

    KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Truth

    Well I must admit at first I was a bit skeptical because this was sooo different. But - after 4 chapters I must say - its got my full attention. I should have known, with two talented writers it was bound to happen!! Thanks guys!!!!!
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    Good Intentions

    KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Good Intentions

    What a quandary is an understatement!!! But I also agree, always seeking and staying in the "safe" zone is often not the best course of action for the desired results. I can truly understand Grant's - " I want to do what's best for him" because that is so often my course of action - BUT - it sometimes backfires! Another GREAT chapter Wayne. Thank you!
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    Guarded

    KayDeeMac commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Guarded

    I too am glad I'm the reader and not the writer. This is going to be very tricky for Grant !!!!!
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