KayDeeMac
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He brings espresso = it can't be all bad!!! I love this story!
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Leave it to the kids to bring clarity to the party! I love it!!! Another great chapter. Thank you bndmetl.
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I love all the comments. A great following !! Great chapter AGAIN Bndmetl ! I too was deep in the closet during high school so I can relate with Brady! I know its chickenshit BUT !!!!! I was 17-teen!!!!
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Another great chapter. I somehow feel that Ricky may become an important cog between Brady F*cking Douglass and our stubborn Ember.
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Well I'm new here but I must say--it's got my full attention. The roll out of characters was very well done and I already feel the closeness of the group. Ember's mob indeed !!!
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What can I say...it's been a wonderful ride and I too am sad to hear only two more. BUT - I am happy to hear about a continuation! Mr. Gray - this is probably one of my most favorite stories here on GA! You are a gifted author. THANK YOU!!!!!!
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Well I'm new here and so far I'm very captivated. The story has a lot of intrigue which I enjoy immensely I look forward to the next chapters. I will definitely stay tuned!!!!!
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(Full Story) - Revised
KayDeeMac commented on D.K. Daniels's story chapter in (Full Story) - Revised
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Very good story. I'm glad it worked out for George - and to you - welcome to sunny Florida!
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Another great chapter again Wayne! Sorry you are still "under the weather" Elias is amazing in his intuitiveness! Somehow I doubt this is going to be as easy as Elias saying no to the Art School director. Glad to see Stephano made it. This will definitely be a benefit for Elias and Orson.
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I agree with Talo. I met my husband on a Friday night in a bar in west Hollywood and we went to his house that night and had sex!!! (sorry no details here) We are still together 43 years later!!!! So my point is - it does happen!
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HUMMMMMM! Interesting comments - but this is fiction.
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I too believe the pace is just right! Nice chapter.
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I agree with Dodger - neither one wants to acknowledge the elephant in the room!! Good story Arran.
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Arran you are doing just fine. I am enjoying the story very much.
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Yea Wayne - you DO have a duty to protect Elias !!!! Another great chapter, especially the interactions of Harlan and Gary. Chicago will definitely be intense!
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Yes - one of my favorite chapters also! Intrigue and suspense abound. Wonderful story Wayne!
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Another great chapter. So many issues and so many possibilities. Can't wait for the next installment.
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Good grief Charlie Brown - sooo much going on!! Love it ! Another great chapter that builds excitement and intrigue. I believe Harlan will touch and influence more people's lives than just his dad's.
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Well we get to see Harlan again. Maybe The Don can help out with dad's medical expenses. As for Jeremy - finding funding for The Raven Project will not be easy. Been there done that!! I'm going to look for the Facebook page Droughtquake spoke of. Again, a great chapter Wayne.
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Yes, I agree Wayne. I definitely feel the progression and deepening of emotional ties between the characters. Another great chapter.
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Perfect ending!
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It was beautiful Arran. Thank you.
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Wonderful chapter. Maybe Callan will include "Angel of the Morning" in his next gig!
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Nicely done. I'm understanding the characters identities and looking forward to the progression of the friendship.
