Ivor Slipper
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Warming Up “I'm tired of this, so I'm going home.” Do you ever have those occasions when you think something and then suddenly find you've actually said what you were thinking? If you do you'll know what happened here; if you don't perhaps you'll experience it one day, but hopefully not as it can be so, so, embarrassing. This was one of those occasions for me. Mind you, I'd done it before and I guessed I'd do I again. 'Think before you speak' my mom used to tell me when I was
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Based on Prompt# 694 - "I'm tired of this, so I'm going home." The first story in (hopefully) a series based on some of the students at Oxbow Lakes HS
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I can only endorse the other comments that have been made about this story. Well done!
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Not surprising Richie is suffering nightmares after that experience! And now he has been thrust into being the leader of the group with all the responsibility that entails. At least he has Jeremy for support.
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Great start, Geron. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Indeed so. I don't think Detective Diamond is the sparkliest on the force.
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Wondered where you'd been. Didn't realise you'd spent a whole week 'jacking off' 😁 (And you think you have a weird sense of humor?)
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And in what started this little exchange Droughtquake refers to himself as a 'Pendant'. I'd hate to have him hanging round my neck! 😁 But I don't wish to be pedantic about this....
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I'm pretty sure CG was simply listing the things he liked so the 'and' was for the final item in that list. I don't believe he meant that he liked grape juice combined with hot chocolate.
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Glad you enjoyed those FanLit. As for Troy, with that reasoning he might well be heading for a career in politics
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I guess once they saw their well liked teacher shot they saw a chance to do something before the gun was turned on them or their classmates.
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I don't like orange and grape juice I've never even come across - except as wine!
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Thanks, glennish. They very much stand together against whatever life throws at them, but I'm sure they'd appreciate some normality.
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Sorry about that Hellshield. I'll have to buck my ideas up 😂 Can't have their lives becoming too easy!
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That is feasible.
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A happy chapter does make a change I agree! I'm pleased to hear you care about the characters - I know I do
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Thanks mfa607. Hopefully their bond, plus the love of Troy's family will see them through.
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Thanks, Geron. What is that old saying - 'the way to a man's heart is through his stomach'? Mind you, I think Adam has already found the way to Troy's heart without the aid of blueberry muffins!
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I can't win with you CG! You moan when there is a cliffie and now you're moaning because there isn't one 😂 What does a guy have to do to satisfy you? Oh, hang on....I know.....buy you some banana muffins.
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Thanks, Wesley. Not read the book but the film does seem to be very popular.
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Thanks, Flesco. Yes - a very normal period in their lives
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Thanks, Chris. Evidently you don't think they've had enough drama in their lives recently 😂
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It had been mid afternoon when we returned home from school. Troy had told us what had happened to him and the rest of Mr Edgars' class and after he had finished his account we'd all had a few questions for him. He did confirm that neither Hannah or Jerry had been physically hurt during the kidnapping. Jerry had been sitting with her towards the back of the class and thus hadn't been involved when Troy and a couple of other boys had jumped on Diamond. None of them had sustained more than bruises
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Hmm.......is Ryan really much better than Scott I wonder?
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I really feel for these two. Hopefully they can help each other.
