Myr
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I was in on the Closed Beta last week. As soon as I stopped playing that, I pre-ordered...
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That was an interesting chapter. I would like to know more about how they got the information from Morgan. And, of course, you left it there?!
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I definitely like this one-shot. I think it is pretty neat for Harry to be the agressor and Draco not to know what to do with him.
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is it just me or is Ron a bit creepy stalker here? good wrap up to a great story
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that is really a cruel way for the great Albus Dumbledore to exit the scene...
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Harry sure has a lot of irons in the fire
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so many things going on...
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that's really good press coverage for Harry.
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Neville makes a great hero
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Ron's behavior makes more sense now.
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I liked seeing from Neville's pov
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Ron is getting annoying
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I really like McGonagall in this chapter. I see why Harry is heading in the direction he is, but not sure I like it.
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I liked Ron's description of Umbridge as the "Umbridge thingy". Poor Ron and his temper...
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It was a good chapter. And yeah, there were a few differences here from what we found out in HP6 and HP7. (Blaise Zambini is a boy, for example. And Kingsley Shackelbolt is reversed.) Very minor really and only mildly distracting even for someone soaked in the HP world.
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I love Harry at the Ministry of Magic in this chapter.
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I really enjoyed the subtle insults to Lucius from Harry.
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I love the gift Harry chose for Narcissa. I also like all the subtle political byplay going on all over the place.
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I really liked Ron in this chapter. and I agree with David's review
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I definitely like the spin with Crabbe and Goyle in this story.
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I loved the Great Hall scene!
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I've always thought Harry was as it best when he is impassioned about something.
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I definitely like HP stories where HP stands up for himself and leverages his Slytherin side.
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One of the things I love about this story is that you do a good job with the transition from canon to your own story. So many fanfiction writers just skip that or mess it up.
