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What a brilliant story. It's amazing how Lev stayed with his pimp for so long, but I personally understand the conflict between love and hate. I'm glad he escaped from that life. Many don't, or can't. Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Billy needs to get that chip off his shoulder. I know he's a ball of hormones, but he's really started down a path that isn't good. And it sounds like he's very lucky to have his father who is smart enough to know his son, even if Billy doesn't know himself. Will be interesting when Brett returns!
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I really hate the subject of this story, but it's such an incredible story! You write so well, and really bring the reader into the story. Great job!! Poor Ezra, I can only imagine how miserable he feels. Breaks my heart knowing there are kids like him out there in real life. Great chapter and I can't wait for his life to take a positive turn! Thank you for shedding light on these poor kids!
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I'm not ready for the wait until the new series lol. I absolutely love this series, the characters, and your exceptional skill at writing. I'm going to miss the characters but especially my boy Harley. Am I the only one who hasn't for sure figured out which team Harley plays for? I hope he's on our team, at least part-time lol Great job!!!
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So many conflicting emotions from reading this chapter. Totally amazed at the capacity to care and have empathy for others that Lee demonstrated. So shines a good deed... And I think our predator has just about hit rock bottom. Sometimes we have to hit that depth in order to find a way back up. I feel sorry for anyone who hits bottom, even though his fall was self-inflicted. But I have to believe that there is still good in him somewhere. I think his frosty heart may soon thaw.
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I love Luke and Jackson together. I know it's been a rough road for them, and I'm sure there's more to come, but they seem to be so good for one another. Oh Cindy is quite a piece of work. Is part of her reaction the fact that deep down she already knows Luke is gay? Is that why she also hates Jackson so much? Fantastic story!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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I love Ryder. He's a screwed up kid but I think he has a truly gentle heart. I'm already attached to him haha. Great chapter!
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I'm shocked that Jae left. When you love someone, you don't let one argument end it. Especially when your partner is fighting for his life. That he could leave while Dave was hurt really surprised, and disappointed, me in Jae. I don't have a good feeling about Jae and his sincerity now. Great chapter.....as always!!
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Won't You Be My Neighbor?
Okiegrad commented on jkwsquirrel's story chapter in Won't You Be My Neighbor?
I say this after every chapter, but poor Dustin. I feel so bad for him. And what's up with Billy? Is he having a hard time fighting the knowledge that he's gay? -
Poor Max. I hope the idiots who hurt him will be severely punished. I love Nix and Max as a couple. I think they bring out the best in each other. I'm a bit concerned about what's on the horizon for Lakota though. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Chapter 12 - A Mere Wisp of a Boy
Okiegrad commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 12 - A Mere Wisp of a Boy
OMG poor Erik. That poor boy has had five lifetimes full of trouble fall on him. He breaks my heart. -
Chapter 11 - The Bad Side of Parenting
Okiegrad commented on CarlHoliday's story chapter in Chapter 11 - The Bad Side of Parenting
WOW!!!! You don't fuck with Geoff lol. How does he have that much money? Poor Erik, I feel so bad for him. Hopefully they can do something to help him. Can't wait for the next chapter! -
My boy Harley is back!! You know how much I love me some Harley! That boy is a walking wet dream. I'm loving how the guys are all back home and finally together again. That gang of hot boys is going to cause quite a stir in DC hehehe. Great chapter!
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This is such a good story. I'm enjoying re-reading it here. It makes my heart hurt to think Dylan is being hurt and abused. Such a sad life.
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Fantastic chapter!! Poor Jae, I understand doing what you must in order to survive. I would never want my past held against me, so I'm disappointed with Dave's reaction. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I can't tell if Jason is actually trying to make amends, or if he is being a jerk. I guess only time will tell. Great chapter!
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I'm glad the guys could work it out with trust and love!
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Another great chapter!! I'm disappointed that Billy has already gone further with Dustin than he has with Brett. I know Dustin needs some love and attention, but Brett has been patient with Billy, and then his dick now won't be the first one Billy has played with. Kind of sad. But it also sounds like Dustin has done this before with others maybe? Will we get a better idea of who else of their friends "isn't gay" but likes to play with other boys dicks lol. Love this story and the realism you bring!!
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This isn't the type of subject matter that I typically read, but I've found myself addicted to this story. I find the actions of both lead characters to be horrendous but yet in a way I find myself feeling somewhat bad for the way things are turning out. This story has caused so many conflicting feelings in me but I'm definitely enjoying it. Great story!!
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Two Poems for Your Consideration
Okiegrad commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Two Poems for Your Consideration
I really admire how much feeling you put into your writing. It's like a glimpse into your heart and soul, and the reader feels privileged to have that sacred view. You bring a sense of light and peace in your work, and I'm always thankful for you sharing it with us. Take time to acknowledge the light inside, and see how much joy you bring to the world simply by being you. -
Great chapter. The diner scene also had me laughing. It was such an, enjoyable, pleasant read. Thanks for sharing your talent!
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Great chapter! Just proves how easy it is to get ourselves into a situation that looks much more sinister than it really is. I know it's happened to me. I hope they are able to work it out without too much hurt feelings. I guess it shows that no matter how much you say you trust someone, you never really do recover from your past.
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Very interesting story!! I'm glad I found it. I don't know what to feel about the reinforcements just yet. But I hope this is the start of good things for the men. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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What a beautiful story. I've loved every chapter, and I thank you for sharing it with us. Truly exceptional!
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My heart breaks for Dustin. Sadly, there are boys in the world who lives such as that. I'm glad Billy was there to witness it so he can be more supportive of Dustin. Ow. He definitely needs a friend. Great chapter!
