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I don’t know where this story is going, but it has my attention.

I believe this is my third time reading this story. It’s a powerful message of redemption.

Wow, how did I miss this? I thought Carlos was taking a break from CJ. He puts so much work into the stories. A assumed he needed a rest for new creative ideas. It’s has been a privilege to watch his writing improve over the years. I am unsure how many times I have reread the stories. Maybe we can meet in the afterlife…

I like this outline too. When can we expect the first chapter?

We like the outline so when will the first chapter appear?

I love a series. I enjoy the character development overtime. I get to “know” the characters. Carlos has a core set of characters to work with and a magical method of writing that draws me inside the story. I was hooked with the first CJ story and Carlos’ writing has improved over the years. His hard work is obvious in the details of each chapter. Thanks for another great story!

Chapter 12 seems to be missing. Only the comments remain.

Another great addition. Keep up the excellent work.

I enjoyed the story. The cast of characters are intriguing. The plot thickens and you get further involved in the story. More than once I found myself reading a 2am.

I love this series. It has a diverse set of characters that you get to know. Intriguing plots.

Another good chapter.