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Estiveo

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  1. Nicely told.
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    Chapter 3

    Have you been taking cliffhanger lessons from Dahawk? Good chapter; I'm really enjoying this.
  3. A triumphant return! I even forgive the cliffhanger, which almost gave me an annerism thingy. 🤣
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    Chapter One

    Interesting start. I like the characters so far and am looking forward to future chapters.
  5. That was a hell of a ride. Nicely done.
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    Chapter 7

    Definitely worth the wait. The best part of the gap between chapters 6 and 7 was that I had to go back and read from the beginning, which was a nice treat.
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    Chapter 1 - Ember

    I'm already really liking the characters.
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    Health Crisis

    It pleases me that Lincoln uses the Wilford Brimley pronunciation of diabetes.
  9. Heh. Annerism thingy. (Estiveo is easily amused.)
  10. Okay. Caught up from the beginning. Very involved and can't wait for the next chapter. Every time I think I'm starting to put things together some new information comes in. Love it.
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    Home

    Of all the good lines in this saga, and there are many, I think my favorite so far is, “She might be havin’ an annerism thingy.”
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    Chapter 22 - Ian

    Horrific demise may be too good for her. Can't we have a semi-horrific criminal event where nobody gets permanently hurt but she gets 15 to life and a chronic, but not life threatening, condition?
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    Chapter 22 - Ian

    I always like the way you blend humor into the situations you write about. It makes it seem more real to me. (A friend once described my family as an endless series of one-liners, so I'm a little prejudiced towards humor in any given situation. It's caused trouble on more than one occasion.)
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    Chapter 1

    Lucky me, I get to read it for the first time. Looking forward to another great story.
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    Chapter 39

    The way you make it clear just how much these people enjoy being in each other's lives is a pleasure to read.
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    My Daniel

    My deepest sympathies.
  17. Glad you're back! I started reading your stories just before Chapter 34 was posted and have been waiting in trembling anticipation for a resumption. Thanks for a great start to the holidays!
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