TIMMIGON
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your chapters are getting shorter, me no like
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Chapter #7 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
TIMMIGON commented on podiumdavis's story chapter in Chapter #7 - The Mistakes we make (Cont)
Hello and thank you for creating such a great story. You write with such a flow and with such detail. But not so much detail as to clog up the story. I have thoroughly enjoyed the first seven chapters and look forward to the next eleven. If I don't review each chapter just know that you are a master of the word and I am honored to read your work Robert -
Really good story, love the entire thing but you need to publish more often if you want to keep us interested.
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As usual, it was great but don't you think it was a little short? Total it was about an hour's worth of time. Does this mean we will see another chapter real soon?
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Ok, if I compliment you one more time people will think we're dating so let me just say that this chapter not only lives up to it's predecessors but enhances your glory. I am hoping upon hope that the next chapter will be longer, and answer all of the 'monster mother ' questions. I see so many scenarios for the boys. I hope you are in this for the long haul. We have adoptions, college, foundation, and O&K wedding plans. Also graduation for all.
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PERFECT cliff hanger
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Well, let it not be said you don't have a good reason...now POST more. LOL. The last 2 chapters were fantastic. I am now on chapter 23...for the third time reading through and I so really love this story. But I have questions? Why haven't you made Kit's life more integrated into the story? Why hasn't Oliver and Kat talked marriage? When is Lee getting a boyfriend?
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OK, I understand the whole 'I have a life' thing, and I know you need time to eat and complete your ablutions, but could you possibly skip a meal or a poop and put out the next ...oh I don't know...6 chapters or so. PLEASE
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Great story, superb writing, Love the lives that you have intertwined into a superb turn of events and lives. Please hurry to the next chapter.
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Love the story, though I don't like you taking time from Williams Love, I do like the story you are creating. Please though, write faster. I know it sounds corny and juvenile but I live to read these stories. You are such an accomplished writer with such a talented and creative mind, your stories pull me in and hold my heart.
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How could anybody NOT like this story. You show such love, tenderness, and compassion as well as grit, determination, and savvy. All of the characters are so real, you can see, feel, and relate to these awesome people. Kudo's to you and please hurry with the next chapter
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OMG, love, love, love, the story...but damn it. too short and they don't come fast enough. you are a gifted writer and I would love to read the next chapter soooooon. Please.
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You know, sometimes a person needs to take time for himself to indulge in a quiet moment. Your writing is my quiet indulgent. This story is somewhere between spectacular and mind blowing. Thank you for diligently putting each chapter out in a timely manner, and thank you for such realism mixed with hope.
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OMG! I know what we'll see in the next chapter, Awesome! Please be a magician and make the next chapter appear SOON. This chapter seemed a little heavy but so necessary. You are giving such support and understanding to emotions and feelings as well as giving real time answers and solutions. Bravo Zulu to you
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I absolutely love this story. I have read and then reread this story several times. Heck, I even read this last chapter 4 times in a 2 day stretch. It is such a beautifully laid out story, good flows with wisps of bad, just like reality, but the bad isn't rammed down our throat. All i ask is that you don't just stop writing. This story touches many hearts and I would really like to see the end of all of the story lines. So many writers just abruptly end a story with so many unanswered questions. Why haven't Kathrine and Ollie talked marriage yet? Why hasn't Kit met anyone? You never said if Kit got the job? These are just fun things I wondered about, Just sayin'
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Thank you, thank you, thank you for such a wonderful story. Love conquers all, even with the occasional bad things happening, you are able to bring love, friendship, commitment, and trust, to the forefront of your story. I look forward to each and every chapter and, no joking, I get a catch in my throat every time I see another chapter posted. Please do not destroy this rare and very special dynamic story. Love and respect, Robert
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I'll have you know that when you ended the last series I was devastated. But this has made me so happy. am so enjoying this next set.
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Love the story, have since the first chapter. However, it seems that the chapters are getting shorter. Why?
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I'm absolutely loving the story but could you please get the names right. It was confusing and now it's just irritating. LOL
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I have just found this story today and am totally enamored over it. I find Lane touching my heart already and Casey will definitely help him in the future. And Lane will help Casey.
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AWESOME! PHENOMENAL, EUPHORIC, OUTSTANDING. Well written, well explained, well done!
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Chapter 23 - Epilogue
TIMMIGON commented on meanderingsNmusings's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Epilogue
The story was a good one, the characters were well laid out. But I think that in a haste to end it. you could have elaborated more in some areas. You could have taken it farther to satisfy us "romantic" people. I would liked to see them getting married, adopting and/or using Jenny as a surrogate. But all in all it was an awesome story. Well written and well read -
OMG! I thought the other chapters were excellent but damn. This chapter has me all juiced up. I wanna go down to that school and rip so ass. I hate when ANYONE is treated poorly or differently just because of what they look like, who they are or who they love I can't wait for the next few chapters.
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Seriously? you're gonna just let it hang there? Get to writing, you evil author...yeah, yeah, an evil author. You can't just hang the big "C" out there and expect us to just take it quietly. Damn your good, I love it.
