TIMMIGON
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Beau-t-ful! I could feel the excitement of adventure and the love of the evening. I could ask for nothing more. Bravo, bravo, bravo
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this has been the most wonderful story to read. I hope one day I can find that kind of love. Well written R. Eric, well written
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OMG! awesome chapter. The development of characters is getting so deep and complex they are coming alive. Adding new blood into the story just adds new fruit to the tree.
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This chapter was well written with only a few grammer-like mistakes. The ending was so beautiful, I could see the diving and felt the love. Kudo's to you
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This is such an amazing story. This chapter really punctuated the love between them. I could only wish to find such love
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love the pace you are creating their physical love as well as their emotional love. Very tasteful, realistic, and provocative. Please write faster
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Excellent story, excellently written. The characters are well defined and likable. Looking forward to many more chapters
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Each and everyone of these 6 chapters were so well written. I could feel the confused love, the anger, the heart pounding fear & the fierce pride and power. I have read over fifty stories and very few have moved me the way this story has. Please do not drag your feet with posting the next installment.
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It has been such a pleasure reading this story. The characters are so well rounded and interesting. I check several times a day to see if the next chapter has come out. Kudo's to you. Please keep going. The grammer, punctuation, and layout of the story are on-point. I am impressed
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OMG! You bastard, making a grown man cry isn't fair. Your story was so...so...perfect in it's delivery of emotions. your fingers and mind are truly a gift from God
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I haven't taken the opportunity to review before this because, honestly, I found this story recently and couldn't wait to read the next chapter and couldn't be bothered to stop to review each individual chapter. Too damn good. I enjoy the mixture of characters, emotions,and real life. You have captured the high school experience perfectly. You have added just the right amount of drama, emotions and 'fear' any high school student lives with every day. please hurry for the next chapter...,.by the by, what happened with chapter 16? Repectfully, Robert
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I enjoyed how even the aunts and uncles joined in, in protecting Tony and Mitch. I feel the entire story is so cleverly written and cannot wait for the next chapter. Soon?
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I've read this story twice and I absolutely love it. My biggest worry is nothing new has been appearing for a long time now. I pray to the writing gods that more Chapters appear, and soon.
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Such an awesome story. Just the right mix of introspections', verbal and physical love, and with a slight dash of suspense. AWESOME
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BRAVO. poignant, sensitive,and positive. I loved it
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I find this entire story delightful. The characters are well developed, the storyline in it's self is wonderful. I could so feel for Zac and sadly I have lived Adrien's life. I cried so bad through sections and bounced for joy in others. I am eagerly waiting for chapter's 23 thru 99. Lol TO THE AUTHOR; PLEASE DON'T break Zac's heart and soul again. PLEASE don't ake hos one of those "never happy" stories. Let Zac run like the wind, love like Cupid, and succeed in life
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Having lived in the closet for over 40 years and with 5 wives under my belt I can totally see where Adrian is coming from. But I do dislike that he professed his love one day and is kissing on a girl the next. Zac is in love and we all know love is unexplainable, mysterious, and heavy at times. I just wish I could find a good man to profess his love for me......(wish, wish, dream, dream)
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Both chapters 5 & 6 are breathtakingly awesome. so many touching moments, so many spots where I had to stop and dry my eyes. Other than a few grammatical errors they were perfectly written. Bravo sir, Bravo
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EXCELLENT first chapter. well written and well played out. I completely enjoyed it.
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I found this chapter enchanting. The way Adam used his power was proper. The relationship between the two young men and their parents is awesome to read about. too bad it's fiction
