Miles White

I am so glad that the brothers are getting to spend time together. I feel Lucinius is like older brother now, teaching and letting his brother learn how to really treat others. Treat others like you want to be treated. He is truly being blessed by the gods, the land being so fertile, all the plantings growing so well, and then the great harvests. Lucinius is like a magnet, everyone seems to be drawn to him. I can't wait to see what all with happen , keep reading and translating the scrolls please.

Great story!!!! keep up the great work. I just hope Jai and Shakti can get together. Poor Jai, heart broken all the time. With the way the boys are making the island more livable who would want to leave. Seems all the smart passengers were saved.

I am happy all has worked out so well for Lucinius. Grandfathers are great!!! Apollo gets a high five for putting Appias in his place. Sewage not only waters everything, but fertilizes as well. A hole month, wow, now for his brother to come. I think Appias needs to keep his ass at home lol. Looking forward to more please. Great story and I hope it is not close to finished. Great villa, good land, good crops and live stock as well as good help. Wonder how the Senate will react to all this.

Dad, Dad, what you gonna do? LOL, it is all turning around on Dad. Curse your son and he gets blessed. Can't wait to see what all unfolds. I think he will end up having more than his father. Grapes growing? I see a future of wine being made and sold, pigs as well. With all the other things his Grandfathers has promised to give him, and with the help of the friends in the Senate, Wow, who knows how blessed Lucinius will be. Keep up the great work, loving reading all you post.

Great story so far, looking for more, I agree with drsawzall I wish the chapters were longer, but, that is up to you. I love how the Grandfathers all in for helping him, and all the friends from the senate. I feel there will lots found, and everything getting into place very soon. I hope his father has to pay to get things better since he was and is an a..hole. I feel his brother and mother will do what they can to help him as well. I think his brother has no idea what their dad is doing, and if he does he doesn't agree and will come to his rescue and turn against his father. Oh well, I will leave my thoughts out and let you take this story where you want to. No disapointment so far with any of your stories. Keep up the great work, always looking forward to each post. Thanks for taking the time to share with us all.

They are on the right path. Can't wait to see it all progress.

With the help of the Senate, Grandfather, and Aumen, I see Lucinius making it all work. Poor ole Dad going to be the one not laughing anymore.

Wonderful story, I am looking forward to your next for another adventure. Maybe Brad and Tony will have their own story and get together. Who knows where you will take us in your next story. It is truly saddening that all of this abuse is a daily happening in all of our countries. Great work!!!!! Please keep'em coming. Hint hint, Brad and Tony really do need to get together, please.

Wonderful story so far as all of your others. I know this is just a story but this happens everyday all over the world. Just started to read and had tears in my eyes. How can people be so cruel? I agree with mikedup, it is worse than a prison. How can anyone put money over a life? I am addicted to your stories, I get up at 5am and read your new entrees, get ready and go to work, come home and look for more from you. Great story, keep up the great work. I love how Brad gets to where ever and gets the kids taken care of and safe. We need a real Brad and his staff in this world.

I am truly enjoying reading this story, no sex is great! I can't wait for Brad and Tony to get together. Since I found your first story, I have read them all and wait patiently to each and every new chapter. These stories touch my heart due to the fact the children are being taking in and cared for. I do and have always cry seeing and hearing about all the children being abused and kicked out to fend for themselves. THANK YOU, for your stories and the time you take to write them and share with us. Keep up the great work, who knows, maybe the right people with the means will find your stories and start centers for all these children.

Loved!!!!! would love to see more with these two. Great work!!!!

Loved this story, wishing there is more to follow, would make a great series. Keep up the great work.

When can we expect more chapters? I keep rereading all of these stories over and over while waiting on more. Thanks, Merry Christmas

Great story, I love me some Cowboys, some horses, and some Cowboys, did I say Cowboys? lol, great work, can't wait for more of this, this is my second time reading this. Please write more and take this story further.

Love this story, keep up the great work!!!! Hope you are feeling better, don't over do it.

Great Story, can't wait until more!!!!!!! thanks for the great work

Love the story, sorry I haven't commented earlier. longer chapters please, but you are the writer and it is your call. Keep up the great work!!

I have really liked this story since the beginning, and it is getting even better. Keep up the great work, Please make the chapters longer, just saying, it's your story and your time, just an anxious reader here is all. Thanks for giving us all a great read.

Mark, keep up the Great Work!!!!!! I am loving these stories of yours. I find myself looking each day when I come in from work to see if you have posted.

Ok, I am offended LOL, Now offend me some more with another chapter. Great work!!!!! Keep it up, I really do love this story.

I may not always agree with some of the things you write, BUT, I will not get in here and rudely slap you for your opinions or thoughts. I do want to let you know I really love the story here and really enjoy and look forward to reading more. I think more of Maria is just as important as more Miss Julie. Continue the great work!!!!!

Ok, I have been looking forward to this chapter, NOT long enough lol, I am still hooked. I love this story and I can't wait until more. I say we let Anna have the baby , then let her have an "accident" lol. Paddy need to speak up to both Adam and Ian. He does have a say doesn't he? Poor baby, such a sad life, then a happy one so far, and now this. hmmmmmm, didn't you say there would be three new chapters waiting for us all in the morning? "wink, wink" k, I will let you do your thing, and you do it so well, write on brother, write on, keep it coming.

Cliff hanger? oh this is just sooooooooo wrong lmao. I have been waiting for this for a long time. Love this story!!!!!!!! I hope it continues with lots of chapters. Bless lil Benny, he didn't even get to show Adam Promise. I can't wait for you to take the other story off hold. Thanks for the great writing, I look forward each day for more and more. Keep up the great work!!!!

Bndmetl, you are most welcome, and you are doing great

I love this story!!! I can't wait for more to come. I am addicted!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!