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  1. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 13 S3

    Maybe the "All you can eat buffet" restaurant needs to hire a 6'4" (1.93m) Bouncer who will say if you go back more than twice for refills: "that's ALL you can eat"! 🤣 Another wonderful chapter @Bill W, but it poses more questions. Despite being soon to graduate college, Devin hasn't learned patience. That impatience combined with his stubbornness may soon put Mac, himself and their families at risk. Speaking of 'risk', what is going on with Prof. Preston and all this questions? Seems it's more than a passing interest. Does he have a connection to the stalking "evil skinwalker"? Dr. Jekyyl meet Mr. Hyde.
  2. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 1

    As Mathew and Jules begin their new life in south Florida (the Conch Republic being as far away from a "Sanctimonious" guvnor and his flooding 'Alligator Alcatraz' in Everglades), perhaps their altar egos Warren and Elliot find a similar welcoming community with a ministry in search of LGBTQ+ friendly Ministers. @drsawzall mentioned the Episcopals, but there are others in South Florida such as the Presbyterian Church, United Church of Christ, Unitarian and the nondenominational Metropolitan Community (MCC) Church in Key West (and other South Florida locations). MCC is also known for its outreach to anyone in need, including those affected by natural disasters, homelessness, hunger (especially children), etc. Perhaps "resigned" Ministers just need a 'sign' in the right direction, and find it down south? FYI, not a member of any aforementioned ministries. "To each, their own"
  3. In more ways than most suspect. The Kincaid's inherited wealth and status may make them a target for many things. I would imagine a 'hardened' black Suburban may be in their garage soon (whether from Uncle Greg at 'Fibbie' or Walter at Spook Central). As to the gated stately home passed down from Grandpa Kincaid? A house with an imposing 'presense', that was probably built in the 1920's and survived both Prohibition Era in the U.S., and the Cuban Missle Crisis, most likely has 'special' features that became 'multi-purpose' rooms. An October 1962 bomb shelter becomes a wine cellar with extra thick and strong walls, floors, and ceiling to provide insulated temperatures to protect 'wines' and a bank-vault like door that is a novelty. Or is it a 'safe room' if things go sideways? Did Grandpa have a secret ways out of the house and off the property during Prohibition? Does Uncle Greg remember all the secret hidden places he, Dan and their siblings played in as children? BTW, my comments on the last chapter 'A New World' are still being edited before posting. Finally, Josh's PTSD reaction to being in another Black-on-Black Cadillac is not at all surprising. And really? A saddle / tan leather interior goes a long way to easing negative thoughts), ⌛
  4. Bad days on Jersey shore for Desmond, then and now?
  5. Damey's head is going to explode, just like ... and when Mom finds out he's gay...
  6. Awwkwaard (drawn out on purpose). Had a few similar 'moving in' moments. There's definately a few hurdles for both Bryan and Desmond to clear, and those will help clear the air. Bryan recalls surviving the Reagan years of the 1980's and pachyderm "Moral Majority". Back then (as history and autobiographies have revealed) the "holier than thou" alt reich had more than their share of 'liasons', 'nooners', closed door meatings, 'fact-finding' trips etc., and at least 33 politicos who passed, either in office or after stepping down or not running again after acquiring "the flu" or "sudden health issues". Scores of GOProud and DEMoncrats made frequent trips to Walter Reed AMC and other 'clinics' regularly for "booster" shots. Kinsey's "1 in 10" ratio would have meant at least 10 Sens and 52 Reps, but his math was off by at least 50%. Despite their 13-year age gap, I suspect common ground will soon appear for Bryan and Desmond. 🤞
  7. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 19

    Justice can prevail, and not "be blind". Given the right circumstances, all the pertinent information, and overlooking or at least putting wrong, harmful or self-serving information, witnesses and yes lawyers in their place, a good judge can make the right decision. Today, "the Honorable Angela Winters of Sumter County, North Carolina", was that good Judge. Thank you @irivera for this well written chapter of what has been a remarkable story. Now on to the Epilogue (and perhaps a 'bridge' to 'A Life With Living - Book 2' as Jonah's life moves forward?).
  8. And @kbois, posting18 hours ago said: "But nature is not so easily leashed." All of which (combined with other comments and POV) may lead to a conclusion not envisioned. Prior to the early 1800's animals were not even considered to be "sentient" ('thinking', 'feeling' etc. beings), and it wasn't until the 1990's that the international treaties recognized "Animals as Sentient" including the 1999 Treaty of Amsterdam. What if a worm becomes sentient? They have been considered to react to pain (earthworms cut in half recoil) for decades. Does that change ANY equation?
  9. Anton_Cloche

    Catalyst

  10. So less Freitagnacht in Berlin and something more Folsom? 😉
  11. Yes @Wayne Gray you've dune good so far with this story about a parasitic (brain?) 🐛, even one from prehistoric 'Perma-Frost,' infecting the populace. (Note to all those TOO EAGER scientists, thawing out Jurassic Parcsicles ... 🛑 ), One hermaphroditic 🐛, even a junior, can wreak havoc on millions? Undercooked pork on a spork, hhs the abilty to fork far too many innocents. And when officials (in this saga) may not really be working on developing or supporting vaccines to benefit those at risk, well screams danger and huge incompetence. Reminds me of Andromeda Strain (and subsequent books and movies on the theme of contagions run amok). The characters thus far are believable. Should Atticus have said 'Boo' went he went to Dr. John's door? They both have a lot to handle. Ps. Does @kbois interjection mean a special HCD Tuesday? 🤔
  12. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 48

    'Oops' happens to the best of us, authors and editors alike. I imagine there's more in the pipeline, just waiting to be released. Or likely 'Beta' readers 'mis-queued'.😳
  13. Sandy is a definite piece of something, but not 'work'. 🙄 She failed the Home Pregnancy Test, (she's likely not an 'A' student, especially in Sex-Ed), after 2 or 3 months without a period. She flunked 'Plan B' which only works 72 - 96 hours after insemination. She's also failed use of Mifeprestone which is only effective for 9 wks after insemination (although it 'may' work in early few weeks of second trimester). Proof that both Sex Ed taught in school, and Abstinence ("I have a concept of a plan"?), are failures in the U.S. across ALL socio-economic groupings. And with "right to chose" illegal in many States, Sandy has few viable options. Another interesting chapter @Lee Wilson. Let's see where you take us next. "Melton, the doctor is ready to perform your vasectomy". Can Mel doge that unkind cut? Perhaps "just a trim" or "a little off the tip"? Or does he avoid this by "just the skin of his ..." ? 😲
  14. 🎣 for reel or oh my cod you're sending readers back to school with possible ...
  15. Anton_Cloche

    Perturbed

    Good thing for Josh it was the standard hospital issue 'one-piece' aluminum cane and not a folding version. Those don't even work as nunchucks. 😮
  16. Anton_Cloche

    Perturbed

    WHOA. Who are you, and what have you done with @Jeff Burton? More importantly what have you done with 16 year old Josh (aka Joshua Thomas Quinn alledgedly born Oct. 19, 2008, 'B-More' MD, possibly aka 'Carrington-Lindsay'?). Josh's sudden and instant awakening at 03:17 and on full sentry/defense mode. Military precision, no wasted motions, no pause to consider next actions. Just a switch flipped ON, and Josh being 1000% aware of every detail, just like a trained 'operative'? BTW, those expecting a 'tox-screen' on the suddenly dead patient in Room 617, may be sorely disappointed. First, that 'patient' was not on 'monitors' so no alarms sounded when he suddenly died. Second, after "five-ten, one-sixty-five, black hair, bright green or blue eyes, average build, wearing blue scrubs ... entered room 617 with what appeared to be a syringe." Josh 'engaging' in a life ir death struggle with the other guy in plainclothes, unknowingly provided the extra few minutes for whatever was in that syringe to kill the man in room 617. And while an overdose of say 'Digoxin' can cause a heart to stop, it would take at least 50ml in an IV to perhaps do so quickly. Something that could cause a heart to stop would be inejected air into an IV, causing an Air Embolism and a heart attack or stroke, but the amount of air injected would have to be significant to cause sudden death. So ... tick, tick, tick. @Jeff Burton is there a follow up chapter appearing Friday with a weekend cliffie? (versus 'Cliff Notes' which would be perhaps helpful?).
  17. Anton_Cloche

    Cerberus

    "The names have been changed to protect the innocent." Unfortunately in this story, "the innocent" in all likelihood is Josh, who doesn't remember that his Mom and Dad (biological or adoptive) were in the car with him and died trapped in the inferno he dragged himself from. Josh doesn't yet remember Rachel Carrington and Garrett Lindsay as the loving parents who raised him and tried to protect him when things went horribly wrong on a snow-covered two-lane section of I-81 near Charlottesville (ed. Close to Roanoke VA I know well). Was it an accident on a family weekend vacation? Were they running for their lives? Or did they just not see the vehicle looming close behind them? As the FBI investigate the missing couple, Josh has no idea his soon to be foster Dad VA. State Trooper Kincaid is the brother (?) of FBI Agent Greg Kincaid. But is Josh a target? 😥
  18. Anton_Cloche

    Cerberus

    Hmm? Why does this seem familiar? Oh I remember, a 'certain' Chapter 3 comment and visual CLUE ((exit sign?(. Sometimes a 🔬 beats a 🔎 which beats 👀 searching for clues, reading between the lines. Or ...? Nice doggy.
  19. Anton_Cloche

    True Alpha

    Let us not forget, we have been told / shown / alluded to, in other "wolf" tales, including those of @Laura S. Fox that clairvoyants and other 'seers' have been said to represent and/or be in league with underworld entities. Entities that want to see 'packs' destroyed to serve their own purposes. If as Theodore said to Ryder: “My pack,has been gone from the face of the Earth for decades now,” why did Cassandra lie to Ryder and put Ryder's Pinemoor Pack existence at similar risk of demise? Theodore licked his lips, while his fangs began to grow. “Cassandra. I know of the name. So, she must have sent you to finish the job.” Ryder narrowed his eyes. “What do you mean?” Theodore ... “I have a personal beef with clairvoyants. I know, I haven’t mentioned it before. But now, it’s evident why she sent you here.” Ryder ... If he put two and two together, ... felt tempted to believe that clairvoyants like Cassandra had something to do with Theodore’s pack’s demise, and that made no sense. Clairvoyants were never that powerful. Or was she? And serving the most powerful demon... Has Ryder survived the fall from such a great height? Will morphing into his full alpha form help him survive? Recover?
  20. Let's just hope there isn't a setback coming for Stephen or anyone else. With PTSD, especially 'traumatic' ones, there is often a 'trigger' that can seem unrelated to the original event(s) and yet still causes a bad reaction even many years later. Another well written chapter @Lee Wilson. Just waiting to see if there are any legal surprises coming.
  21. Anton_Cloche

    Progress

    OWWW. Boy do I ever remember that ".. loud pop, the loudest yet. Somewhere low in my body. Hip, joint, spine, maybe all of the above. For a terrifying second I was almost sure something had broken." Other Pops" and the sensations of things 'wakng up'. And the pain, both from Physio but rehab was worse. And the satisfaction of 'doing' things myself, but followed with concern over what comes next. All the things Josh is going through and will continue to go through, but with one major difference. I knew me! Josh doesn't have that, and it remains the biggest obstacle and the biggest loss to deal with. You've nailed all of that in this chapter @Jeff Burton . but now comes perhaps the hardest part for Josh, and for Trooper Daniel. Finding the missing 'parts' and piecing together the 'whys' and 'hows' of what happened in the first place, that put Josh here. And the 'who, if there is one, is behind this. And still, very strange questions keep coming up, like when DSS Case Worker Nathalie, talking about getting Josh back in school says: “I still haven’t found records." In this day and era when computers have a wealth of knowledge, especially since fingerprints in state and federal databases should have the missing information? And there's Josh eventually going "home" with the Kincaids in time for Christmas, which causes this sad reaction from Josh: "I don’t remember having a mom,” I said quietly. “Or what one’s supposed to feel like.” Much more to come. Hopefully soon to fill in the blanks, find out what really happened, (who was in that second car when the Josh's family went off the road, into the trees and burst into flames)., and if Josh is in danger when his memory returns.
  22. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 1

    "The site isn't porn"? What did I miss? Two men each enter one of two dark cubicles that are side by side. There's a hole in the wall between the cubicles for them to 'talk' to each other. One man kneels facing the other and confesses, anonymously. Each is looking for 'something'. Guidance? Submission? Permission? Supplication? Forgiveness? In the end, they part and go their separate ways. Perhaps to come again? Bless me Father for i have ... Damn!
  23. Anton_Cloche

    First Contact

    Steps in the right direction towards recovery @Jeff Burton? A name makes working on recovery somewhat easier. But feeling it doesn't fit? That's not uncommon with those suffering from amnesia, especially resulting from trauma. It can be like putting together a 1,000 piece jigsaw puzzle that's mostly sky or water. When DSS Case Worker Natalie Rhodes arrived with information about our 'John Doe'; to put a name to a face, so to speak, the information to 'Josh' about "Josh", not only didn't feel "right", it caused this: "My body jerked. Just a little, like something inside recoiled". Natalie caught the movement. 'Recoiling' is an instinctive reaction usually from fear or disgust. From something that feels wrong. It's often a trigger of the innate 'fight or flight' mechanism. Natalie said: "...your name is Joshua Thomas Quinn. You were born October 19th, 2008, in Baltimore Maryland.” Josh let that information sink in. "But it felt wrong. Like wearing someone else’s clothes, technically a fit, but not mine. “It doesn’t feel right,” I said quietly. “I mean… it’s not a bad name. But it doesn’t feel like mine.” And States don't get information wrong, but although Josh's fingerprints match those on file for a child adoption, there is: “No baby picture, no family photo. Just legal paperwork. Birth certificate, adoption decree..." So no face to match a name? Also no school or other records. No history. Like it was put together to fit a profile? Better news arrives with Trooper Daniel Kincaid that gives both him and Josh some much needed relief. Daniel and his family want to 'foster' Josh once he's well enough to be released from hospital. And Daniel isn't concerned that Josh might be gay, since the older of he and his wife's two sons is gay. So Josh has a safe place to live, protected by a Virginia State Trooper. Hmm, snow covered road, somewhere in northern VA, close to MD where Josh's "legal paperwork" originated.
  24. And with that, a neglected Editor's forgotten drawer pops open and a poem fell out. Written by Sir Walter Scott in 1808, it begins with the phrase: “Oh, what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive”. I am not implying that @Jeff Burton is trying deceive us or lead us astray. Perhaps we mis-red something. Or we're just hard of herring. 😉 Now "deceive" doesn't literally have to mean "lie". But it may mean that complications arise from a domino effect of constructing one thing to explain another, only to eventually run out of control.
  25. When Trooper Daniel returns he will bring both good and sad news. Despite the dashboard and driver's door frame VIN # being destroyed by the fire (more on that 'too big' conflagration later), since all vehicles after 1987 have VIN # etched on the engine block, transmission and other parts (+2), they were able to identify the owner and DNA matched his parents. Which means they know know his identity. Police were also able to locate CCTV traffic video showing his parent's car being followed, and a license plate. 📹
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