Dyaus
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Short but intense... Cliff-hangers, we hate you! Thanks for keeping the writing up!
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no words... I just love how quickly you've created a society and a lot of its intricacies... Keep going, man!!
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Good plot. Very well built characters. A good fantasy romance to be read nonstop from beginning to end. Perhaps the antagonist is too obvious for my taste, but if you really center on what's happening you'll enjoy it.
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Woah!! You may not completely like it, but I see it great! By the way, have you made up Aaru's language? Or is it an existing one?
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V. The lord with the gilded name
Dyaus commented on gor mu's story chapter in V. The lord with the gilded name
It good to have a background, and I agree with Smoothy.. the story and the plot are going rather smooth and well. Thanks for the writing! -
a great end to a great story... wish we knew a bit more of their adventures in the wild!
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Keep them coming!! I can't wait for the next installment to be released! The clash of Aaru's will against Tistan will be an interesting thing to behold.
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Woah! Great writing! I hate repeating what the others have said, but the twist really works! Congrats!
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Love the furry creature!!
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Way to go Aaru!! He can't be so stubborn, but he can't admit being defeated and belonging to another person... Although our working is the 21st century slavery, I couldn't imagine being subjected to the kind of slavery you are describing... Congratulations on a good written chapter!!
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Great start!!! I would've hoped for the savage to have had grey eyes... hehehe... Thanks for sharing the story with us...
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Perhaps I'm a little late reading it, but it has begun a flood of tears! Thanks for the story!!! I really loved it!
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I've cried my eyes out with the last two chapters!! Woah!! Really loving the story!!
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oh gosh! I thought this story was complete and now I'm hooked!!! I love your writing, by the way, I'm too far into the plot... I love the neighbour and how she suspiciously appears when she's most needed... Hugs and keep the chapters coming, pretty pleaaaase!!!
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Great, great and great...! I love how everything is evolving. I know that they don't have an easy road ahead, but a rest from time to time to be able to confront the next bump is really appreciated... Keep on writing!! Love from Spain!
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Crying like a baby (again)... your writing really reaches me... I really love it! Congratulations on another beautifully written chapter!
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I couldn't agree more about the last chapter!
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Act 3 – War and Remembrance – Part 1
Dyaus commented on Brayon's story chapter in Act 3 – War and Remembrance – Part 1
I couldn't agree more with the guys and their understatement: "oh, shit"... both for the guys and Jules... thanks for the installment!! -
Interlude 4: Doctor Shane Thomas
Dyaus commented on Brayon's story chapter in Interlude 4: Doctor Shane Thomas
Oh dear! I had forgotten about all the paperwork, politicking and explanations they'll face on earth! I love the story! Thanks for sharing it!! -
how do you do it?!? I'm crying like a baby!!! As always, love the way you write!
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You've left me out of words... I've loved the story up till now!! Great descriptions and romanticism!!! Keep on writing!!!
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I agree about being patient and I know that "you can't hurry love", but gosh...!!! Great writing as always @Hudson Bartholomew
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oh, shit! I'm a bike driver and the description of the fall and the hospital really touches me. Been there, done that! Keep 'em coming!!
