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    Chapter 5

    The three of them, our out of there minds and totally clueless. But they decide to untie there prisoner, the generals daughter.
  2. They need to build a new privy for Tom or at least provide a room for his use. Edward is getting reckless and Jonas needs to get him under control.
  3. There are both willing to try and see if a relationship can work.
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    Chapter 25

    That was a beautiful and emotional chapter. The phone call had me in tears. Hearing Miles tell his full story to his Sister, was good for Troy to here everything in one go. The kids are gonna love there Uncle. 1st on Page 3 😁
  5. A great road trip, they have arrived safely. Time to get reacquainted with everyone, before the hard work starts.
  6. Is that a character in your next story 😆
  7. @Valkyrie we are grateful to yourself and everyone else involved in putting together the anthology.
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    Chapter 4

    Well kidnapping a Generals daughter. Letting Rade drive. What can possibly go wrong.
  9. They seem to have solved there financial problems, with an unlikely fence. They have given young Tom a job, so his payment for helping them, doesn't raise suspicion.
  10. Little B, likes blowing up cars and causing mischief. Shiloh is blaming Noah, for Parker getting arrested. A lovely, romantic gesture from Chase.
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    Chapter 8

    I loved this chapter.
  12. This is an awesome story.
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    Chapter 44

    You have shown numerous times, Sky asking Juanita if she will be OK. In this chapter, she wanted Hector to be happy and discussed finding a guy with Sky.
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    Chapter 44

    That scene for the movie was beautiful, real life merging into the moment. I worry for Juanita, but with her friendship with Sky, Brant and Hector I think she will be OK.
  15. Awesome start. Rinlon is having a very bad day.
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks for reading and your wonderful comments 😀
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