AC Benus is a brilliant writer and poet. Currently he is posting Ambrose Bierce's Devil's Dictionary.
READ and ENJOY...
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I think you should write a longer piece. I'd be very interested to read it.
The first sentence I'd agree with. Punishment I don't believe in, either verbal or physical. Anger has no place in a scene or play. I'd love to read more, frankly it would be nice to have to opportunity to discuss our Lifestyle.
When my brother had his first child he said to me … "Buy everything they sell in the drug store, and sleep? You can live without it. "
When I was a cop, we often did without a lot of sleep. It's not good, sleep when you can. Eat well, junk does not help. ..
A very touching chapter. The emotion is palpable, honest and effective. you write so well, my boy. you make us laugh and cry … you make us care as if these people are our RL friends and family. So very well done.