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Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
A parent who had a child only to lure potential victims without suspicion, smh. Worst parent on the planet, indeed. Nate’s egg donor doesn’t win any parent of the year awards either but at least she was upfront about her lack of parental interest. -
Everyone needs a Cassie in their life. She is loving, loyal and funny❣️❣️ It’s only genuine people who can get away with being in your personal space, lol (well mostly) Lex has his platonic and romantic soulmates and a lucky guy is he. The showdown between Cassie and Kathy was interesting and brief, two alpha, protective females sizing up each other that I think came out a draw, even tho Cassie spoke first in the stare down. Looking forward to more antics with “The Three Musketeers” and Lex’s meet up with his bio dad.
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Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Fifth Interlude - Vengeance
Dick still didn’t suffer enough but there was justice the courts gave him two thousand years and that he met his end at the hands of one the family members he destroyed because his crimes never only affected the boys he assaulted. Bye, Bitch. -
Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Birthday Bash Part 3 - The Soul
What went on between Greg and Nate defies words, I’m glad your bore witness to it for us. Outside of the blind spot, Greg seems so intelligent and self aware, it is a delight to read his “voice”. I’m sure Dick knew that about him and that made his conquest of him all the more appealing, or conversely, his revenge at rejection so deliberate and malicious. I will say I’m glad to have read that Dick is dead; I can only hope he suffered gruesomely before. -
So Larry’s the killer, huh? Poor Wolfgang, his talent is essentially a mirror to people’s souls and they blame him for what they do. The power of denial is deep and can be dangerous. I’m feeling the vibe between Jed and Wolfie. (Interesting that Jed would bond with someone named Wolfgang) While the hot sex is great to witness, there is something of two lost souls finding a kinship in each other that is almost as appealing. (Tho I’m all for any hot sex between them-when Jed tops Wolfie....that is going to be 🔥). The plot gets juicier and juicier....thanks for the early chapter, btw.
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Birthday Bash Part 1 - Forerunners of Fate
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in Birthday Bash Part 1 - Forerunners of Fate
What a nice set up to breaking down Nate’s walls. Greg (and Kyle) are remarkable people of hidden depths. I wish there was a hetero Greg, lol. They are both so similar to each other and even if it’s not the relationship he wanted to have, Kyle will always have a meaningful relationship with Greg if he wants it. It was also nice to see Keigan getting a chance at HEA or something in that family with Yannis. Looking forward to the next step in this dismantling. -
🌡 🔥 ☄️ 💥 “Sunday morning was spent having some pretty hot sex.” There are few better ways to start a morning. Cassidy is a hoot and a holler!! I can’t wait for Ian and she to meet. Nice informative chapter about Ian and nice hot wild monkey sex too, lol!!
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Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
FanLit commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
The chapter title was sizzlingly accurate. 🐺 🐎 -
Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
FanLit commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Riding the Beast
“I'm planning to update weekly if anybody actually finds this interesting” Are you kidding?!?! This was hot as hell!! I’m interested!! While it was the magnificent Headstall that got me to give werewolf stories a chance at all, The start of this tale confirms I’ve been missing out on some good stories in this genre -Or maybe it’s the authors. I will read anything written by Headstall and “Guarded” added you to that club. I look forward to more....- 63 comments
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To Everything There Is A Season
FanLit commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in To Everything There Is A Season
Thank you for taking us on another wonderful ride, both through Louis and Don’s life and through your excellent storytelling skills. -
The Intervention and the Key
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in The Intervention and the Key
To know they were in love with other while they experimented with each other sexually, yet were so deep in denial of those feelings speaks to how deeply rooted Dick’s diabolical brainwashing of both boys was. Anything physical that happens now will be different because the blind spots and great walls are crumbling, leaving awareness long denied. Why the Dicks of the world choose to use their keen intelligence and charisma to be predators and cult leaders, to harm instead of help, is a mystery. I’m still hoping his fate is revealed before the end of the story and that it is extremely, painfully appropriate. -
The Intervention and the Key
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in The Intervention and the Key
And I love discovering the poetic meaning behind the story title; Kind of gives away what Nate genuinely feels. -
The Intervention and the Key
FanLit commented on Jason MH's story chapter in The Intervention and the Key
This chapter made me teary, I know the next chapter will make me cry. Tho I don’t believe it 100% of the time, actions do speak louder than words most of the time, they definitely will between Greg and Nate at his birthday. I’m just wondering if Kyle will be aware of what’s going on between them and how he’ll feel about it; I think I remember him under the impression G & N were together when he first met them but he wasn’t in love with Greg then. Can’t wait for the next chapter in this totally engrossing tale. -
This was a GREAT story. So....you’re cute, a good cook and an excellent writer, 😊. I will happily read anything authored by you in the future. Thank you for sharing this tale and your talent.
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I’m glad Lex’s background was less traumatizing than what he went through with his stepdad and way cool to know Lex is independently wealthy. “More money more problems” doesn’t seem as though it will be an issue between Ian and Lex. Previous chapters described Lex’s looks but didn’t say who he resembled, it would be a hoot if his “interview” with his bio dad fails because they look exactly alike.
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I like to think hope does last forever, even if it’s the size of a mustard seed.
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Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
FanLit commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
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Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
FanLit commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Broken in the Dark
Everyone comes with bullshit, we just decide if we love someone enough to put up with their bullshit. This was a moving poem and to paraphrase MichaelS36, relatable. A reminder that for all the beauty love can bring, it isn’t always pretty, if that makes sense. -
Yay for next Friday!!!!
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The tattoo reveal was good. The sex was even better but it was the aura visions that was the best. That was true lovemaking between Lex and Ian. Beautiful chapter.
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While it’s good Gavin is closer to Greg now, the goodbye with Kyle was deeply emotional and heartbreaking. Basketball Boy set Greg on the path to healing after 15 years and Greg will always love Kyle for that alone, if he had no other reason (which of course, he does). In retrospect, I think the physical distance between Greg and Kyle will be beneficial to both; They both have steps they have to make without the proximity they had-I dare say Kyle would not have been happy witnessing Greg in a romantic relationship and Kyle would not have moved on in his love life with Greg being an active part of his everyday life.
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Sunchokes? When I looked them up, they looked like knobby potatoes.
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I have tattoos on my arms and while there was discomfort in getting them, the level of discomfort afterward wasn’t intolerable. I know everyone has different pain levels but a tatoo artist once told me that getting tats on thin or bony parts of the body is more painful than other parts of the body. What else can Lex ride indeed? Guess that will also be a reveal of the next chapter. Oh and I’m glad you had a good visit with your son.
