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So do I!! I get it’s his attempt to control the situation but he must really think people are dumb. Does he think no one will find out they are homobullying him at school?

This is awful. No matter if Shaun winds up making up for this or becoming a great man after this, THIS will always be a part of him, this will always speak to a part of who he was, not just to a stranger but to someone who was supposed to be his best friend. This is shameful. This is sad. For all the bullshit Gary will now face because of Shaun’s words, he’s better off without a “friend” like him.

It’s hard to realize when you’re a child that your parents had a life before you came into it, lol. That life shaped the parent we got, for good and for bad. It’s hard to realize that our parents have issues they’re still dealing with when they become parents, issues they may never get over and that we unintentionally inherit. If we are lucky, we can recognize this when we become adults (if not sooner) and understand that “Mommy” or “Daddy” did the best they could, even knowing it wasn’t good enough and forgive them. Forgiveness is more for the one wronged than the one who did wrong and it sets the one forgiving free. With Noah’s help, Jordan took that step so that his children won’t inherit what he did from his dad. Jordan is going to be an amazing man. What lucky patients and children await him. I notice Noah’s baby steps and I know he too is a good guy but those rough spots of his were rough!! Lol. I’m side eyeing his father’s reaching out, I mainly believe he’s sincere but wonder if he’s trying to lead Noah into a trap; My concern is also that if he’s sincere and Noah comes home, bitch mom will act extremely on her own; If Noah’s dad really wants to have a real relationship with him, it will need to be on Noah’s terms and from a distance (does he realize who he’s married to?) I look forward to seeing Jordan’s reaction to Noah on his doorstep. Is Brody close by? And he has to meet Jordan’s mom, who while an obviously nice lady, still I’m sure will have something to say to the boy who broke her baby’s heart. Very good chapter.

Thanks Lisa!!

Jordan’s progression has been a beautiful thing to witness; He’s owning who he is without shame, the only pain he feels now is in regards to Noah. I know he still loves him but does he love him enough to take him back? A LOT of hurt happened there. Noah’s progression was breathtaking in a different way, there are two extremes to living life as you are and they were both covered through Jordan and Noah’s experiences. I’m pleased his siblings stepped up and I have basically written off that bitch mother of his; His father seems genuinely concerned about him but I don’t know how far that will go. Mommie Dearest seems like the type to kidnap him and send him to a conversion camp so they better keep that rabid creature on a leash. It was good that Jordan moved on and I was glad that something was developing with Brody (even tho it wasn’t Noah). His father’s death is a leveler; It could be the opening for he and Noah, time will tell. Noah’s out now and he came out on his own, that was important. Let’s see if an out Noah and an out Jordan can find their way back to each other.

Based on the story synopsis, we know Shaun is going to be a true POS to Gary, the question is how much of an ass will he be and will he regret/redeem his actions eventually? I’m hoping Gary doesn’t get bullied too badly over the knowledge of his homosexuality; Either way, his world will never be the same. It would be nice if Gary's mom was accepting of his sexual orientation, one would think being an educator would make her more tolerable but sometimes it’s easier dealing with those things when it’s someone else’s child. Thank you for sharing your first story here....so far, so good. 👍

Does Enderson hate his son or not? Does he love the “sinner” and not the “sin”? Still not sure about this man and his sinister intentions....

Not sure what I feel about old man Enderson yet....

The length of your chapters are fine to this reader. Even though I don’t agree with the choice Noah made, I understand and respect him for making it. His family already knows (or highly suspects) about his homosexuality, in my opinion; Even that bitch mother of his-Mama always knows, right? That woman won’t face it tho, unless she catches Noah with a dick in his mouth or up his ass. I honestly don’t know what to make of where things should go between the guys because sometimes love isn’t enough to stay together. Sebastian is a mystery, how could he think that Noah or Jordan would trust him knowing all the things he did to them? While I am curious to understand what makes him tick, I am a-okay if this is the last we see of him in the story. This was a bittersweet chapter....more bitter than sweet.

What the fuck did Sebastian do now?!?! My Noah issues aside, Sebastian is the worst thing in this story, with Noah’s mom a veryclose second. While I was hugely relieved Noah owned up to his actions and apologized, I’m side eyeing him for the foreseeable future because he still has some growing up to do. I’m just wondering what Sebastian said, did or threatened to make Noah feel the best thing he can do is be away from Jordan....

It’s the italicized part of CscottyCA’s review that concerns me more than the whole gay issue. Noah does not deal in a constructive way with conflict and that’s detrimental to any relationship he has.

The way Noah’s acting in this time of crisis, maybe Jordan is better off without him. He is totally wrong for putting any of this on Jordan. Who asked who to move in with whom?! He is transferring the pressures he’s putting on himself to Jordan. He is sheltered and selfish and will continue sucking Mother’s milk; it’s very disappointing. Noah should realize that if your family truly loves you, it won’t matter who you sleep with; Conditional love is not true love.

“Happy as I was for them, I hung back a moment. It had finally dawned on me that life is rarely still, rarely without changes. I wondered why we were so afraid of it and them.” Because the devil we know is better than the devil we don’t; We sell ourselves short in that mindset tho because sometimes change brings around angels and slices of heaven. (Is anyone else thinking of an angel food cake now? 😊) “He held me tightly as I struggled to get up. “You … us, it means everything to me. I don’t take it for granted. You know that too?” It was this passage that changed my strong like for this chapter into love. This was a big admission for Don and I’m glad he did it; Sometimes hearing that you’re truly appreciated rights all the wrongs. Good progression chapter, tim; The calm before the storm, as it were. And congratulations to Robert and Rena!! 🎉

“....Though i've written a lot of poetry, i know i have a lot to learn and to practice....” Your modesty and humility are part and parcel of who you are, tim: What you already know is more than most in the tricky world of the rhymed word. Practice can only perfect your natural ability but you’re way ahead of many other’s game. I liked the Tankas, the sample ones as well as your efforts; I respect your willingness to grow your skill by stepping out of your comfort zone.

What a beautiful description of taking Cookie for a walk and congratulations on her addition to your family. “....Filled to the brim, she bursts ahead, and I feel my age Yet, I am still an infant To this mother on whose broad back I plod proudly....” While there were many other phrases I liked and could’ve highlighted here, the phrase I selected above particularly touched me, it speaks to your deep affinity and respect for nature. Viewed through that prism, we are all as young as Cookie, compared to our moody, beautiful Mother Earth 🌎. I admire the gift that enables you to write something this melodic so quickly, in the midst of what is clearly a full day, 🐶 😊 Thank you for sharing.

Wishes count.

“I got me a boyfriend!" YAY GARY!!!! What Ben and Griffin did for Gary was life changing (maybe even lifesaving). Even if he and Gary didn’t last, I hope it was step forward in Clint accepting himself as gay man in his future. Ben truly does humanize Griffin, even to his parents, whom he was unaware were worried about their little boy. They seem pretty great, too, not just int their love for their child but the acceptance of his boyfriend.

"I wonder why. I wonder why. I wonder why I wonder. I wonder why I wonder why I wonder why I wonder!" This may be a simple poem, but it is simply magnificent. Astronomy and stargazing are also interests of mine so I’m glad it another reason the boys are bonded. Ben and Grif are two halves of the same whole, a true complement to each other. I read this chapter with a sad foreboding, thinking that Griffin was right in his fears about the future....😔

Oh Laura: The end of this story was a lovely look into their happily ever after; Of course it makes me wonder (as I am wont to do): Are the kids biological for the both of them or adopted? My curiousity aside, whichever way they came to Carter and Aron, they are theirs and Freddy and Deidre are lucky to have them as Dads. Thank you for another wonderful journey, Laura, I look forward to the next one. 😘

“I am, by the way, quite gay. I've known who I was for a couple of years now, and I have arrived at the fatalist's viewpoint that there is nothing to be done about it. I'm not even sure I would do something about it, even if I could. I like boys, and the idea of somehow switching that perspective to seeing girls as my choice for primary companionship is just beyond me. What appeals to you is not a choice. The female mind works on a different plane from the male mind, and the female anatomy is just not as interesting to my eye as is the male anatomy. Girls are nice, and they have their place; but they lack the wonderful attraction that somehow makes boys special. Boys are often beautiful and appealing, in a mysterious way that girls just cannot match. No, I am gay to stay.” What a refreshing mature viewpoint on self acceptance from a 13 year old, no less!! “I've read about love. It usually comes on slowly, and builds, and has time for the person that is doing the loving to both accept it and understand it a little. That's why they call it falling in love. You never start to take a tumble, and then arrive upon the floor without the passage of time. There is always that small interval between the loss of balance and striking the floor, when you realize what is happening, and at least get to yell, "Oh, shit!" But that did not happen here. Quite suddenly, I was spread-eagle upon the floor, with no idea how I had gotten there. Even gravity is not that quick. But maybe love is? Or lust?” Who is this kid?!?! Or should I say old man in a kid’s body? What insight he has!! Reading on, l realize he’s above average in intelligence but good God!! LOL!! What a captivating wonder of a story; Griffin and Ben’s meeting is kismet. I can’t wait to read more.

“Winter has this unique beauty. A blanket of fresh, fluffy, white snow has covered the ground below my feet. The ice-covered tree branches are glistening as they gently sway in the chilly wind. The sky is a brilliant mirage of vibrant colours: blue, yellow, orange, and pink. In the distance, perfectly framed in the centre by trees on both sides, the sun is setting on the horizon. This is the definition of picturesque. We walk, hand-in-hand, through the snow,creating a trail of footprints behind us. We’re laughing, at what, I don’t know. In this atmosphere you have to feel content; you have to feel, well, simply alive.” This was a gorgeous beginning to this lovely chapter. I’m glad you felt the need to add it. The mention of Jenn’s driving was funny and you are correct, Aiden is winning the best friend award, he’s awesome!! (and it would be interesting to see what can kick off between he and Jenn) On that point....yes, Jordan and Jenn dated briefly but unless my memory fails me, they didn’t even kiss, did they? I don’t consider them having had a real relationship and would not consider that brief association between the two an impediment between Jenn and Aiden or any other friends of Jordan’s she might find interesting, but that’s just me. Does Noah’s mom suspect something? I’m surprised she’s now taking the initiative to visit Noah in his what, junior year of college? And she’s willing to forego a family holiday for the visit? 🤔 I think that clingy, controlling bitch wants to see what outside influences are making her son stand up to her. Can you tell I’m not pleased she’s coming? 😄 As I stated before, this is a good addition to the story, it’s nice to see how comfortable and happy Noah and Jordan are with each other and how their communication with each other improves. 👏. Is this the calm before hurricane Mother? 😳 Oh and the cabin sex was hot!! Take that, Mother!!

Deville and Kitt captured most of what I was thinking. I like how real Max felt, too; Guarded but open to being friendly; Food is a great equalizer, lol. Good set up. The real test will commence with the visitations.

Happy Birthday!!🎂 🎁 🎈🎉

Sons of bitches. I knew they weren’t going to leave Avi alone, it’s a shame Morgan was taken, too. I know Ashur (I misspelled his name as “Asshur” before but I think that spelling fits him more) and his family had something to do with this; I don’t let Giles off the hook, even tho he helped to “find” them. I love Avion’s “moxie”.

I hope you’re sister’s okay. I’m reading all 10 chapters today, after always passing this title over and over again, lol. It’s a very good story. After this chapter, I have an awful feeling Giles and Ashur will become partners in crime....😳