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I LOVE Desmond. It was nice to see how efficiently he put those two fucktards in their place. He still got it!! Do Louie, Frankie and Stan scope that area, looking to victimize anyone that comes to that dead end? Hopefully they won’t anymore after their encounter with Desmond. Desmond knows about Blair now (“fire guy”) and hopefully he will hold onto that when he realizes he’s a Guardian; Heck at that point they may be fighting the same war on the same side and may have their friendship born from the trenches. I also love Desmond and Gabriel as a couple, they are white hot in their passion for each other. The usage of “crescendo” and “diminuendo” made their physical love sound like music. This is building up so nicely.
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I dittoed that sentiment in my post too, lol.
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Shit. So no Julian at all? Based on the portal that can be opened with the convergence of Winter Equinox and Year of the Flaming Lizard, Julian sounds like a walk in the park, now. “The ‘Evil’ one,”- Evelienne. (?) Shit.
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Desmond doesn’t doubt his gut, no matter how “peaceful” things are now. He knows danger is afoot, he just doesn’t know what kind. Could Sam be the new “Air” element? I kinda wondered about Julian's promise to Gabriel: he told Gabriel he would be free and clear if he brought Specter to the house to be killed, which technically, he did. Whatever happened afterwards shouldn’t negate his promise in my opinion. This of course is conjecture on if Salamander is after Gabriel because at this point I don’t know who he’s pissed with; It couldn’t be that Julian is looking for them because he wants to make amends, right? 😬
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Eve has something to do with Julian (Salamander), I just don’t know what and Sam has definitely thrown their plans off. Blair is going to be super protective of Sam and that’s without even considering Desmond and Gabriel. It will be Blair as the unknown factor in Julian’s plans that will save Sam and I hope, them all. I shudder to think of what salamander has planned, (and against who) as it seems very thought out. This salamander needs to be extinct, methink.
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I'll be curious to see what is revealed about Sam and any powers he may have because Blair was speaking to him as though he did.
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So Sam’s a Guardian? What’s his power because I’m thinking it’s more than the hold his breath underwater thing, lol. Wouldn’t a Guardian’s power have manifested itself by Sam’s age? If Sam is a Guardian, Desmond will have to revise his antipathy of them, since he unknowingly cares for one very much.
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One of the twins, I bet. Lol.
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So I wonder if Ryan’s genes are so strong that his daughter also looks exactly like him. Nice meeting and I hope it stays that way between the four of them; As Ian continually thinks, Lex deserves a good turn.
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They just had to look like each other, that didn’t surprise me, Ryan also being gay pleasantly did. Talk about mirror image!! Nicely done, I’m looking forward to the rest of their introduction to each other, the four of them; It’d be a hoot and a half if Seth favored Ian, that would mean father and son even had the same type!!
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"I think your dog likes me." Umm, yeah Wolfgang, I think Jed’s dog likes you too. WOOF. WOOF. 😄 Did the Mama raccoon stumble across an offering in the woods when it was foraging? She picked up some bad vibes from whatever was there. Cider has always interested me and honey crisp are my favorite type of apple. Hmmm....
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Love, peace and blessings to you both.
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Cuteness hides so much, lol. Nice summary of just how it does....Poet. 😊
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Evilenne and now Yellow Eyes have me spooked. I’m surprised Desmond hasn’t made Sam more streetwise, he’s way too naive in my opinion and that will lead trouble to their door. I must say, there is dread in my belly every time I see a new chapter, kind of like opening that door to a dark room with no clue what you’ll find, only that it won’t be good.
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Evilienne. I’m suspicious about Evilienne.
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Very plausible situation given our author’s skill at didn’t see it coming plot twists. I’m suspicious of you too, Wayne. (In a good way, of course).
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I liked the showdown between man and beast. They may each be a different species of animal but the laws remain the same, Specter will defer to Desmond as alpha in all things-except threatening Sam. The bugger is smart enough to try and kiss up to Desmond too, with the offer of the bone. I’m not a pet owner but I get the impression the audience during sex isn’t unusual. Calm before the storm? What will bring the salamander back into their lives? Can’t say I’m looking forward to it but then again there wouldn’t be this story, lol.
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“Not too much happened this chapter, I know. Sorry. I'll try harder next time.” You are too much!! Seems Jason and Wade were involved in Adam’s disappearance, not Kyle. I imagine it’s still difficult to turn on your kids, even knowing they ain’t shit. (pardon me-even knowing your children are guilty of fratricide); Beecher played the long game tho and had the last say in the end. Wren is now dealing with liars, cheats and murderers, he better hire someone to drink from the well before he does. (is there a well on the property? Let there be a well on the property, lol)
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🎉🎊 CONGRATULATIONS!!!!🎉🎊
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I’m glad to see a follow up to Des and company but I too feel naming the newest addition “Specter” is a mistake; Given the name of the story, I fear our furry friend might be a bread crumb back to Julian. Conversely, I also feel that “Woof Woof” ☺️ will also be a lifesaver.
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I understand the feeling all too well lately. Glad you expended your fury via prose instead of punches.
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So Oskar is working in a hospital in London. Penance while being close to the one he loves? Looking forward to the next chapter....
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I trepidatiously look forward to the next time Will and Oskar meet. Will’s involvement with Felip will be a complication when that happens. Will Felip let Will go? Is Will’s forgiveness of Oskar enough to pick up where they left off? As much as he loves and cares for Felip, it is Oskar who is Will’s great love; Much can be forgiven of a one.
