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It isn't...it's difficult but I m not one to fall down easily Thank you sir
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Poets was amazing...'pen is mightier than sword' it seems the message of the poem...Blessed was enjoyable giving, really nature has so many wonders that they have blessed us with and anguish was so honest, really we make choices everyday n every hour...Loved all of them!! Great writing!!
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Can totally relate...very touching indeed!! Beautifully written...
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So true 'perfection is a dream'!! Life is a puzzle and it's not always that we fit, sometimes we break, and try to fit in the space, n life doesn't follow strict rules... Such a honest poem
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Doors, and other stuff....
Aviana commented on Headstall's story chapter in Doors, and other stuff....
It's always a delight to read your poem sir...I always feel like I get to know something when I read em! I loved the first poem n specially it's starting, it is absolutely true, that we often look at closed doors for so long we don't see the new door's opening!! Opportunities doesn't knock easily so we should keep our mind open...and the 'gasp of the winter' provides such a positive view! Spring always comes after a harsh winter giving a feeling of never losing hope, n going on trying.. As usual...loved it!! -
Thanks a lot moggy
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The fond memories of a father...it was lovely!! It was nostalgic; the essence of childhood in every corner of house and the times that had passed coming back as memories!! Somehow, it reminded me of my school farewell (it was like saying bye to my younger self)...I had a bittersweet feelings reading this!! Wonderful writing!!
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Moggy, When I read this poem I felt my stomach churning!! They are dark n yet Touching!! You have come a long way...n seen loads of things, u have survived n not quit!! This is strength n will! N I admire it... I will pray that the light will soon come to you...many hugs to u!!
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I woke, eager for the day.A flash, and there I stood in the aftermath,like so much wind strewn trash. This lines made me feel very sad...really, when you open up to someone and they suddenly leave is hard.. Touching poem!!
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Ahhh yes...Man I have gotten into habit!! Thank you for your views!!
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You have said something important...yes we all from infant to adult crave connection bond n sometimes it may take darker form!!! Simple yet said truthfully!!
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Aha...it's a unique approach...I like it
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CRIME Tired of looking at their retreating backs For work, or study, or parties; They never have time Wanting to spend A moment together, is it a crime? JUST US AGAIN Woke up to greet the usual view An empty house and a note, so that I knew They'll be late again; that was nothing new! Made some toast and juice and walked back to my room surrounded in it's usual gloom. I opened the window, and fe
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Wow...this was so true...N beautiful! Yes there many years to go...keep it up
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Love – the test of time.
Aviana commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Love – the test of time.
Nicely expressed sentiments Caz...I loved the last line...it gives a warm sense as to that you'll pass all obstacles n be together...it was lovely!! -
It was such a beautiful poem...N I loved the scenario of a mother and the kid innocently asking questions...the mother's answers were so heart touching....Lovely Caz!
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A little is all we need...N little is what makes a change...loved ur poem!
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When I read...tell your mum you r mine...I can't help smiling...so so sweet!!
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Only one thing I thought of after reading this...so cute!
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I like how u started with the sunset...it feels like as the night sets in, another life begins A wonderful picture portrayed...
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Very fond memories connected to this poem I see...so sweet!
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Honest writing molly... Yes molly, people who make you feel less, you should distance yourself from them!! But I m happy for you now, you have your family now...who love you, value you and who knows your worth!!
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Hope so too...thankzz tim!!
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Very nice and strong words tim... I have never experienced the losing of a parent but in your poem I feel the pain n sorrow of losing them as well as the anger...but I loved your saying that our nature made us fighters...perhaps we r... As usual...a great writing from u!!
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I like the conaprison how depression affects...creeping up or pouncing like cat on mouse...what I like the best is ur call have courage and to fight it off!!
