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Well, that certainly seems logical, but ... While you did surprise me by guessing something that I thought well and cleverly hidden the other time when you commented, it looks like I did manage to throw you off track this time And who says Alex wanted to Aron to take a good look at Carter? I think the next time you'll guess the whole truth when a certain conversation will take place between Carter and Alex.
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He, he, I guess that it wasn't really easy to watch Carter trying to find out what the hell Alex is doing and how he hides his cheating so well. But don't believe in appearances. Alex is still Alex. And Carter is still Carter. As for Aron ... hmm, that was a little hard for him, wasn't it?
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Ah, and here I have it The proof that my red herrings are still as powerful as ever. My dear godmom, you'll be surprised what Alex's real motivation was for this little scene. While I do give credit to all the scenarios presented by you - they reek of Alex's selfishness, so very credible - I had something else in mind. I hope that the next chapter will make things a little clearer as to the 'why' Simon, yeah, he's a bit dumb, but cute, and not a bad person. As for what Carter really thinks about Alex, he'll say it, in a very polite manner, or just what a simple guy, like you said, would say, next time. Ah, my red herrings ... they're so pretty sitting here in the bucket next to me Until next time, Hugs!
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Ha, ha, I see you still have it bad for Alex ... Well, Alex may try his hand at something here, but you will be surprised As for Alex's skills in getting what he wants, don't get your hopes too high. You know Carter, he's just a goody two shoes, and even if someone tried to seduce him point blank, he'd have troubles realizing that's happening, lol. So have faith in Carter And I don't mind you falling for Alex, :)) After all, he is one of my characters, too. Hugs!
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Chapter Twenty-Seven – Weird Straight Boy There was still time until Saturday, and Carter had homework to do. He could hire a private detective to follow Alex around, but, somehow, he felt that would not be a good idea. Alex was a star, not a housewife looking for love outside conjugal bliss. He was a star, and getting other people involved sounded like a recipe for disaster. No, he needed to be the detective and gather evidence against the guy, evidence of the guy’s cheating. How he was goi
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The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ha, ha, ha, I think the cracks will soon be visible from space! Yes, we're rolling on a hill now, with Carter and Aron closer and closer ... But don't forget about Alex! And Carter might make mistakes, but he's lucky Simon is such an airhead that any blunder doesn't matter anyway. Thanks for taking the time to comment! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Now this is one of those comments where I have to go ha-ha-ha, instead of love-love. Well, I really laughed at the husband grab part, although Carter would be all for all kinds of underhanded tactics ... now he wouldn't He's too nice a guy. As for the talking to the brain about talking to the leg ... what's left to say? Three is a crowd :)) Leaving aside the debate around the meaning of the word 'yummy', Carter might have not gotten everything right off the bat, with the dog and all, but let's just pray he doesn't plan to have kids by himself before nailing Aron :)) And guardian angels tend to be lazy asses anyway. It's up to humans to solve their own ... stuff. Thanks for another awesome hilarious comment! -
The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Yeah, poor Carter, he had struggled so much to make Aron's marriage work ... And now he has to un-do everything! As for your confusion, I totally get it! And it makes me feel all fuzzy inside! (That's not right, right?) Thank you for commenting as always! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ah, ah, what you're saying is correct ... But it's not a case of blindness in Aron's case, but rather something else. He'll practically say it at one point, and you can learn it all straight from the horse's mouth. And yes, he still has the same feelings for Carter. As for your question, the answer is a sound 'yes'. I won't leave readers in the dark, and it will be so clear that there won't be the slightest shadow of doubt as to what happened that day. Thank you for your comment! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
He, he, so the torture was all worth it, after all! Aron, ugh, the boy only needs a sign :)) Let's hope Carter rises to the occasion when that happens Glad to see you still keeping up with the story! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ah, it all happened when I was re-reading Alice in Wonderland - for the tenth time, I think. It's just one of my absolute favorites, and I still pick it up once in a while. And I was thinking, wow, what a trip! And, as someone noticed in one of the comments quite early on (@travlbug, you were the one to notice), Carter's family name sounds like Alice (Malis), and from there, I thought, how it would be if someone was faced with something so ridiculous as with a touch of magic, in a world that's not supposed to be magic at all. And I wanted my character to be someone who would try to reason with everything, but still participate, like Alice did, so that in the end, they could grow up and realize they need to conquer their fears That, and I was also writing some body swap short fanfic for one of my favorite fandoms (there I was just swapping two guys sort of in love with each other, but also in sort of denial since they are just teenagers) , and I realized just how funny this type of situation would be ... It all kind of rolled down the rabbit hole from that point onward, he, he. And thanks so much for the compliment! Really you're making me blush. Now I realize that inspiration is not a cut in stone thing. I think I just enjoy some really ridiculous things, as I watch some really quirky Japanese anime series, and the more ridiculous something is, the more it seems to hit the spot, lol. Thank you for your question! It was really fun to answer! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ha, ha, so cute! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Oh, yeah, that angst really got real for poor Carter. Well, I think he needs it! Call me a bad mom, but he needs to step up and show what he truly wants. After all, that's what growing pains are all about -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ha, ha, you favoring Alex is just so funny! It looks like I failed to make him a truly unpleasant character after all! But it's okay. Even my baddies need people on their side, lol! Aron ... ah, sigh, sigh, sigh ... he's not exactly blind, but ... you know, it's like when you wish for something really, really bad, and you worry that it might be just ... your imagination ... Thank you for keeping up! Hugs! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Yea, yea, yea, you're so right about Aron! Carter should have known better than walking away. But, if that had happened, I would not have had a story to tell, lol! Aron is Carter's superhero. He's the one who understands Carter, more even than the guy's own parents. And it all happened because of the labor of love Aron put into it. Of course, you are right, and Alex is who he is ... and therefore, that marriage could never work. Ah, well, and 'a fruit is a fruit' ... he, he ... Many hugs! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Oh, oh, there are some very very very good points here! Sometime I think, dear godmom, that you're staring right into my brain! Your analysis of Aron is waaaay too spot on! There will be a little more on Aron's views of the world in a later chapter. You'll know exactly what I mean when we'll reach that bridge. Aron, the poor soul, just searched for years for someone like Carter, to the point that he agreed and became a willing participant in a charade that affected his life. As for his parents ... you couldn't be more on point. Aron's mom and dad would never want him to be unhappy. Ha, ha, Simon! Yeah, that would be a riot! The guy did like Carter a lot when our boy was in Alex's body. And what's not to like about Carter? Except for his quirky personality, he, he. And now on to responding to your other comment! -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Ha, ha, Wes, and yet still you managed to make a rather good play on words for Alex! As for your new avatar, is that a cat or a unicorn? -
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Laura S. Fox commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart
Hey, thanks a lot for the appreciation! Yes, Carter and Aron are heading toward a new chapter in their lives, even in their friendship. As for Carter's explanation ... yeah, that will come, at the right time. Aron will get to enjoy the 'new and improved Carter', as you say, I promise :)) -
Ah, I feel so touched by your comment to the story ... Thank you so much. Learning how readers perceive what I write is the awesomest reward (and yes, awesomest is not a word, but Carter would use it, so I'll keep up with him on this one). I'm glad to hear that you could relate to the character. He's very dear to my heart, and probably, from all the characters I've ever written, my favorite And I'm also glad that my story is the reason to look forward to Sundays. There will be several more, I promise Hugs, Laura.
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Chapter Twenty-Six – The Tin Man Who Didn’t Want A Heart It was a great thing he had Taz now, as he had a reason to go out of the house, and also to go jogging. Getting back to playing sports with buddies was not yet on his list of priorities, as he was still trying to get his life in order, and adjust to the post-Aron era, as he had come to call his life now. Taz was a great jogging partner. Adjustments to the shoebox, as he called his home now, had to be made, and the cabinets now hel
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Thank you for commenting! All will happen in due time As for your question about Mark ... I won't say anything
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Oh, wow, I so haven't thought of that, lol! Carter is finally a little honest, indeed. But he could do better! Hugs!
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Well, Carter will start planning! As for the choice Alex will make ... that will be a small surprise, too! All seen from Carter's POV, of course. I can assure you, the poor guy will have a little (maybe not so little) shock when he'll face Alex's reactions! As for Aron's parents, they will shower Carter with their affection again!
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Oh, no, it won't end! There are still several chapters left! Carter has his work cut out for him, so he needs a little more time!
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That's what I think, too!
